Name— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your response more concise and grammatical, start with a clear topic sentence, add one specific reason and use linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I find remembering people's names quite difficult at first. However, after meeting someone two or three times I usually remember their name because repeated contact helps form a memory. Also, when I have a conversation with them I link their name to something about their job or appearance, which makes it easier to recall.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct topic sentence explaining your method, use clear linking words and give a specific example. Fix grammar and complete your thought; keep to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I usually connect a person's name with a distinctive feature to remember it. For example, if someone named Michael has bright glasses I might think “Michael with glasses,” and that visual link helps me recall the name later.

Sugestão: Start with a clear opinion and give one reason plus a short conclusion. Use smoother grammar and link ideas with words like "because" and "so" to improve coherence. Avoid repeating the same idea.

Exemplo: I don't mind when people forget my name because it's common not to remember someone you have only met once. If they remember me after a second meeting, that's fine, so I usually don't take it personally.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence about past and present behavior, use linking words to contrast (e.g., "but now"), and give a concise reason why you try to remember names. Avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I used to forget people's names often, but now I make an effort to remember them even after the first meeting because I believe remembering names shows respect. As a result, people are more likely to remember me as well.

× Well, I think it's a pretty hard job but after meeting with them twice or three times I will probably remember their names.

✓ Well, I think it's a pretty hard task, but after meeting them two or three times I will probably remember their names.

Use present simple for general belief and 'task' is more appropriate than 'job' here; remove 'with' after 'meeting' and use 'two or three' (words) and keep tense consistent. Also plural 'names' matches 'them'.

× It's hard to remember it at the first time when you saw him because we don't have much connection with him.

✓ It's hard to remember a name the first time you see someone because you don't have much connection with them.

Avoid incorrect pronoun reference and tense mismatch: use 'a name' instead of 'it', 'the first time' without 'at', present tense 'see' to match general statement, and use gender-neutral 'someone' and 'them'.

× Well, I prefer to use some connections, for example, link I will link their name with their appearance I think it's a very useful way to remember people's name because there is a features on the

✓ Well, I prefer to use associations; for example, I link a person's name to their appearance. I think it's a very useful way to remember people's names because there are distinguishing features.

Use 'associations' or 'links' instead of 'connections'; preposition 'link ... to' not 'with'. Fix sentence run-on by splitting into two sentences. Use plural 'names' and 'features' and appropriate determiners. Ensure subject-verb agreement 'there are features'.

× I think it's a very useful way to remember people's name because there is a features on the

✓ I think it's a very useful way to remember people's names because there are features to notice.

Incorrect 'there is' with plural 'features' requires 'there are'. Also complete the fragment and use plural 'names'.

× I think it's okay because all of us have the problem to remember people's names because you haven't seen them before you meeting with each other so I think it's normal, it's quite normal and I don't care about it after twice.

✓ I think it's okay because we all have trouble remembering people's names when we haven't met them before, so it's quite normal and I don't mind after meeting someone twice.

Use 'we all have trouble' instead of 'have the problem to remember'; correct verb forms 'haven't met' and 'meeting' -> 'meeting' changed to 'met' structure. 'I don't mind after meeting someone twice' is clearer than 'after twice'. Maintain present tense for general statements.

× I used to I used to forget people's name but right now I'm trying to remember people's name even if we just met with each other because I think it's kind of respect it's a mutual thing.

✓ I used to forget people's names, but right now I'm trying to remember names even if we've just met because I think it's a sign of respect and it's mutual.

Remove repeated phrase 'I used to'. Use plural 'names'. Use present perfect 'we've just met' to refer to recent meeting. Replace 'kind of respect' with 'a sign of respect' for natural phrasing and clarify idea.

× If you remember him, they will remember you.

✓ If you remember someone, they will remember you.

Avoid inconsistent pronoun use: 'him' and 'they' clash in gender; use gender-neutral 'someone' and 'they' for agreement.