Hometown— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct article use and singular/plural forms, and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: I come from Changsha, the capital of Hunan province. It’s a large, historic city famous for its lively street-food scene and well-preserved historic sites, so it attracts many visitors every year.

Sugestão: Reduce hesitations and fix grammar (e.g., "it has" not "it is have"). Give one main point and one specific example, linked with words like "for example" or "for instance." Avoid vague phrases and correct noun/verb agreement.

Exemplo: I especially enjoy Changsha’s night markets because they offer a wide variety of affordable, flavorful dishes. For example, I often eat spicy stinky tofu and rice noodles at the Atmosphere night market.

Sugestão: Use correct tense and smoother sentences. Begin with a direct answer to the time question, then add one or two clear supporting details. Correct awkward phrasing and vocabulary ("for a long time", "neighborhood").

Exemplo: I have lived in Changsha for about 17 years. I grew up here and still live in the same house because my family has stayed in the area and I like the neighborhood.

Sugestão: Answer directly and avoid fragmented phrases. Replace vague words with specific examples and use linking words to present reasons. Correct grammar ("great" not "greater", "we square" unclear—use correct place name) and remove filler words.

Exemplo: Absolutely. Changsha is a great place for young people because it has attractive sights, many shopping areas, and lively public spaces like Wuyi Square. Moreover, the popular food stalls and regular events make the city an exciting place to hang out.

× My hometown is Changsha, a major city in Hunan province and this is one of the most populous cities in region and is known for lively street food scene and historic site.

✓ My hometown is Changsha, a major city in Hunan province, and it is one of the most populous cities in the region and is known for its lively street food scene and historic sites.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'region' and missing possessive 'its' before 'lively street food scene'; 'historic site' should be plural 'historic sites' to match general meaning. Use commas to separate clauses and replace 'this' with 'it' for clarity. Suggestion: Add 'the' before 'region', use 'it is' instead of 'this is', use 'its' for possession, and pluralize 'sites'.

× So every year you can see a lot of visitors go to the Changsha and enjoy this.

✓ So every year you can see a lot of visitors go to Changsha and enjoy it.

Unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'Changsha' and vague pronoun 'this' used instead of 'it'. Maintain present simple for habitual action. Suggestion: remove 'the' and replace 'this' with 'it'.

× Umm as a foodie I love Changsha because it is have umm many night markets umm where you can try wide variety of local dishes like spicy stinky tofu and rice noodles.

✓ Umm, as a foodie I love Changsha because it has many night markets where you can try a wide variety of local dishes like spicy stinky tofu and rice noodles.

Incorrect verb phrase 'is have' — should be 'has' for possession. Missing article 'a' before 'wide variety'. Use present simple 'has' to describe general facts. Suggestion: Replace 'is have' with 'has' and add 'a' before 'wide variety'.

× The foods are inexpensive but it's very flavorful and this like the night market at Atmosphere.

✓ The food is inexpensive but very flavorful, and I especially like the night market at Atmosphere.

Use 'food' (uncountable) not 'foods' for general statement. 'It's very flavorful' should agree with 'food' and 'this like' is ungrammatical; use 'I especially like'. Suggestion: use singular uncountable 'food' and rephrase the clause to clearly express preference.

× I lived there for about 17 years.

✓ I have lived there for about 17 years.

Speaker indicates duration up to present, so present perfect 'have lived' is appropriate rather than simple past 'lived'. Suggestion: use present perfect to show continuous experience.

× I grew up there and still living here, uh, in the same house.

✓ I grew up there and still live here in the same house.

Missing auxiliary verb 'am' or incorrect verb form 'living' without auxiliary. Use simple present 'still live' for habitual/continuing state. Suggestion: replace 'still living here' with 'still live here'.

× I just a long time because my family has stayed in the area and I like the neighbor.

✓ I've stayed a long time because my family has remained in the area, and I like the neighborhood.

Sentence missing verb 'have' in 'I just a long time' and unnatural phrasing. Use 'I've stayed a long time' or 'I have lived here a long time'. 'Has stayed' is acceptable for family but 'remained' is clearer; 'neighbor' should be 'neighborhood'. Suggestion: add auxiliary, use 'neighborhood' for area.

× I think my hometown is greater for young people because it is, has attractive sights, lots of shopping options, uh, and the most popular ones is uh, we square and every year you are uh, you can see a lot of visitors to her, do you hear, and many eaters offering delicious local cuisine.

✓ I think my hometown is great for young people because it has attractive sights, lots of shopping options, and the most popular place is Wuyi Square. Every year you can see a lot of visitors there, and many eateries offer delicious local cuisine.

'Greater' is incorrect comparative; use 'great'. Unnecessary comma and wrong verb forms: 'it is, has' should be 'it has'. 'The most popular ones is we square' has number and name errors — use singular 'place' and correct proper name 'Wuyi Square'. 'You are...you can see' is redundant; use 'you can see'. 'Eaters' should be 'eateries' (shops). Suggestion: use 'great', correct subject-verb agreement and vocabulary ('eateries'), split into two sentences for clarity.