Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 文法と語順の誤り、単語選択ミス（domestic assistantは意味が違う、supposedは不適切）、動詞の形（scheduling・prepare）や主語一致の問題があります。解決策としては、まず職務内容を正確な語彙で表現し、現在形で簡潔な主題文を作る練習をしてください。例えば職種名（administrative assistant）や一般的な業務（handling administrative tasks, preparing documents）を使い、動詞のing形や複数形の一致に注意しましょう。また文は最大5文以内で、主題文＋具体例1つに留めて流暢に答える練習を重ねてください。

Exemplo: I work as an administrative assistant at the Patent Office. I handle various administrative tasks, such as scheduling meetings and preparing documents for my supervisors.

Sugestão: 全体として情報は伝わりますが、いくつかの文法ミスと単語の複数形（train line → train lines）や接続詞の使い方が不自然です。より自然にするには、主節を短くし、接続語（so, because, which）を適切に配置して理由を明確に述べる練習をしてください。具体的には複数形や現在形の一致、関係代名詞の使い方に注意しましょう。

Exemplo: I work in central Osaka. It is very convenient because several train lines meet near my office, so my colleagues and I can get around the city easily.

Sugestão: 文法ミス（connect → are connected to / don't need to an umbrella → don't need an umbrella）、語彙選択（comfortable facility / presentは不自然）が目立ちます。回答を短く明確にし、具体的な利点を1〜2点挙げる練習をしてください。自然な表現（directly connected to, comfortable facilities, pleasant atmosphere）を覚えると良いです。

Exemplo: Yes, it is. Our offices are directly connected to a train station, so I don't need an umbrella on rainy days. The building also has comfortable facilities and a pleasant atmosphere.

Sugestão: 一文が長く句読点と語順の誤り（present atmosphere → pleasant atmosphere、good facility → good facilities、to I prefer to stay thereは不自然）があります。まず短い主題文で肯定を示し、理由は簡潔に2点程度に絞って述べる練習をしてください。自然な形容詞（pleasant）や複数形（facilities）を使い、最後に簡単な結論で締めましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I'm very satisfied with my office. The building is new and modern, it has a pleasant atmosphere, and good facilities, so I prefer to stay there.

Sugestão: 多くの文法エラー（a definite long term plans → definite long-term plan、UHは不要、start plan → start to plan / start planning、being applied → apply）、時制や不定詞・動名詞の使い分けの誤りがあります。明確に計画を述べるため、まず主題文で現状を述べ、次に具体的な次の行動を箇条書き風に短く述べる練習をしてください。動詞の原形や進行形の使い方に注意し、自然なフレーズ（update my CV, apply for positions）を使いましょう。

Exemplo: I don't have a definite long-term plan yet, but my contract ends next year. I need to start looking for a new job, so I'll update my CV and apply for positions in my field.

× I supposed other staff with various administrative tasks and paperwork such as scheduling meeting and prepare documents.

✓ I support other staff with various administrative tasks and paperwork such as scheduling meetings and preparing documents.

The student used 'supposed' (past tense of suppose) incorrectly instead of 'support'. Also verbs in a list must be parallel: 'scheduling meetings' (plural) and 'preparing documents' (gerund form) to match 'support'. Use present simple 'support' to match 'I work' and habitual job duties. Suggestions: replace 'supposed' with 'support', make 'meeting' plural, and change 'prepare' to 'preparing'.

× I work in central Osaka, which is very convenient because several train line meet near my office so my colleagues and I can get around the city easily.

✓ I work in central Osaka, which is very convenient because several train lines meet near my office so my colleagues and I can get around the city easily.

The noun 'line' should be plural 'lines' to agree with 'several'. This is a pluralization/preposition-related context error. Also verb 'meet' is correct for plural subject. Suggestion: use 'lines' when referring to multiple train lines.

× Our offices directly connect to a train station so I don't need to an umbrella on rainy days and the building has a comfortable facility that makes the workplace present.

✓ Our offices directly connect to a train station so I don't need an umbrella on rainy days and the building has comfortable facilities that make the workplace pleasant.

Remove the unnecessary article 'an' before 'umbrella' because the correct phrase is 'need an umbrella' without 'to'. The student wrote 'need to an umbrella' which is incorrect structure. Also 'a comfortable facility' is odd for describing building features; use plural 'facilities'. 'Present' is the wrong adjective; use 'pleasant'. Suggestions: change 'don't need to an umbrella' to 'don't need an umbrella', 'a comfortable facility' to 'comfortable facilities', and 'present' to 'pleasant'.

× I'm very satisfied with my current office because the building is new and modern, it has a present atmosphere and good facility to I prefer to stay there.

✓ I'm very satisfied with my current office because the building is new and modern; it has a pleasant atmosphere and good facilities so I prefer to stay there.

Use a semicolon or period to separate two independent clauses rather than a comma splice. 'Present atmosphere' is incorrect; use 'pleasant atmosphere'. 'Good facility' should be plural 'good facilities'. 'to I prefer' is ungrammatical; use 'so I prefer'. Suggestions: fix clause joining, replace 'present' with 'pleasant', make 'facility' plural, and use 'so I prefer to stay there'.

× I don't have a definite long term plans yet but currently UH.

✓ I don't have definite long-term plans yet; currently, I'm unsure.

There is a mismatch: 'a definite long term plans' uses 'a' with plural 'plans'—use 'definite long-term plans' without 'a'. 'Currently UH' is unclear; likely filler 'uh' meaning unsure. Replace with 'currently, I'm unsure' or 'currently, I don't know'. Suggestions: remove 'a', hyphenate 'long-term', and clarify 'UH' as 'I'm unsure'.

× But my contract will finish next year so I need to start plan to move to new company.

✓ But my contract will finish next year so I need to start planning to move to a new company.

'Start plan' is incorrect collocation; use 'start planning' (verb + -ing) or 'start to plan'. Also include the article 'a' before 'new company'. Suggestions: use 'start planning' and 'a new company'.

× For example I'll update my CV and being applied for position in my field.

✓ For example, I'll update my CV and apply for positions in my field.

'Being applied' is incorrect; after 'will' use base verb forms: 'I'll ... apply'. Also 'position' should be plural or preceded by an article: 'positions' or 'a position'. Add a comma after 'For example'. Suggestions: use 'apply for positions' and correct verb form to match future 'I'll'.