Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh), correct tense and grammar, and limit to 2–4 sentences. Use linking words to connect student status and work, and give one specific example of experience.

Exemplo: I'm currently finishing my bachelor's degree and I also work as ground handling staff at Oman Air. In that role I gain valuable experience in aviation and customer service, for example assisting passengers with check-in problems and coordinating luggage issues.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence naming your role, then add one or two specific duties using linking words (for example, such as). Correct grammar (ground handling staff -> a ground handler) and avoid repeating ideas.

Exemplo: I work at Oman Air as a ground handler. For example, I check passengers in, answer their inquiries, and resolve issues such as delayed baggage or seat assignment problems.

Sugestão: Answer directly then support with specific reasons and one concrete example. Avoid repetition (learned how to manage my time and also I learned many skills related to managing). Use linking words like because or for instance.

Exemplo: Yes, it's a great place to work because I gain hands-on customer service experience and improve time management. For instance, during peak travel times I learned to prioritize tasks and assist multiple passengers efficiently.

Sugestão: Be more precise and avoid vague phrases (new phases, new). Use one topic sentence then two specific benefits with examples. Fix grammar (I gain -> I gain a lot of knowledge).

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. I continually gain practical experience and learn new airline systems. For example, I recently trained on a new reservation platform, which keeps my technical skills up to date.

Sugestão: Make the answer focused and grammatically correct. Start with a clear goal, explain why, and give a realistic action or step you will take. Avoid factual errors and finish the thought (competitive between -> competition).

Exemplo: My future plan is to help develop the aviation sector in Oman by encouraging more airlines to operate here. I believe increased competition would improve service and prices, so I plan to work in airline operations or management to support expansion and partnerships.

× Recently I'm completing my bachelor degree, so I'm a student and as well as I'm uh staff in Oman Air.

✓ Recently I'm completing my bachelor's degree, so I'm a student and I am also a staff member at Oman Air.

Use 'completing' with 'recently' is acceptable but possessive form 'bachelor's degree' required (article/possessive and noun form) which is article/adjective error (covered under present tense issue since progressive present used). Also replace 'as well as I'm uh staff' with 'I am also a staff member' for natural word order and correct noun phrase. Suggestion: use 'I'm completing my bachelor's degree' and 'I am also a staff member at Oman Air'.

× I get many experience there, valuable experience in aviation and customer services.

✓ I have gained a lot of valuable experience there in aviation and customer service.

'Experience' is an uncountable noun so 'many experience' is incorrect; use 'a lot of' or 'much' and past participle 'have gained' fits context. Also 'customer services' should be 'customer service' (uncountable). Use present perfect to indicate experience accumulated up to now.

× I'm working in Oman Air as a a ground handling staff.

✓ I work at Oman Air as a ground handling staff member.

Use simple present 'I work' for regular employment rather than 'I'm working' (progressive suggests temporary). Also 'at Oman Air' is natural preposition, and 'a a' is typo; 'staff' should be 'staff member' for singular role.

× I do some customer services also by seeing what the customer needs, what are their inquiries, try to solve their problems or any challenges that it's faced by customers.

✓ I also handle customer service by identifying customers' needs and inquiries, and by trying to solve their problems or any challenges they face.

Original has awkward structure and pronoun/agreement errors. 'Customer service' is uncountable. Use gerunds/verbs consistently: 'identifying', 'trying'. Change 'what are their inquiries' to 'their inquiries' and 'it's faced by customers' to 'they face' for correct subject-verb agreement and natural phrasing.

× Actually it is one of the best places to work to earn your experience in customer services and also on how to manage your time.

✓ Actually it is one of the best places to work to gain experience in customer service and to learn how to manage your time.

Use 'gain experience' rather than 'earn your experience'. 'Customer service' is uncountable. Use parallel infinitives 'to gain... and to learn...' for clarity. 'Earn' implies payment, so 'gain' or 'acquire' is better.

× Working there I learned how to manage my time and also I learned many skills related to managing.

✓ Working there, I learned how to manage my time and also acquired many management-related skills.

Use past simple 'learned' is fine; improve repetition by replacing the second 'I learned' with 'acquired' and rephrase 'skills related to managing' to 'management-related skills' for concision and correctness.

× Absolutely yes, because it is a place where I enrich my experience.

✓ Absolutely, because it is a place where I can enrich my experience.

'Enrich my experience' should be used with modal 'can' to indicate ability; original lacks auxiliary making sentence slightly odd. Adding 'can' clarifies meaning.

× Also I gain many knowledge and how to operate a new system related to the airlines.

✓ Also, I have gained a lot of knowledge about how to operate new airline systems.

'Gain' should be in present perfect 'have gained' to show accumulated knowledge. 'Many knowledge' is incorrect because 'knowledge' is uncountable; use 'a lot of knowledge' or 'much knowledge'. 'A new system related to the airlines' is better as 'new airline systems' to be natural.

× So I keep I am being updated all of the time with the new system, new phases, new.

✓ So I stay updated all the time with the new systems and new phases.

'I keep I am being updated' is ungrammatical; use 'I stay updated' or 'I am kept updated'. 'All of the time' can be 'all the time'. 'New system' pluralize to 'new systems' if multiple; 'new phases, new' is incomplete—remove trailing 'new'.

× My future plan related to my job is to are to develop the aviation sector by adding more airlines.

✓ My future plan related to my job is to develop the aviation sector by encouraging more airlines to operate here.

Remove extra 'are' which is ungrammatical. Use 'is to develop' plus clearer verb phrase 'encouraging more airlines to operate' for natural meaning. Original had subject-verb and infinitive errors.

× Here in Oman we have only two airlines which is 1 Air and Salam Air.

✓ Here in Oman we have only two airlines, which are Oman Air and Salam Air.

'Airlines' is plural so relative clause must use 'are' not 'is'. Also correct airline name 'Oman Air' and add comma before 'which' for clarity.

× So I think more airlines means there will be more competitive between.

✓ So I think more airlines would mean there will be more competition between them.

'Means' subject-verb fine but 'more competitive between' is incorrect; use noun 'competition' and add 'between them'. Consider conditional 'would mean' for opinion about future outcome.