WorkPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you work or are you a student?

Candidato

Do you work or are you a student?

Examinador

Where do you work?>

Candidato

Where do you work?

Examinador

Is it a good place to work?

Candidato

Is it a good place to work?

Examinador

Would you like the place where you work?

Candidato

Would you write the place where you work?

Examinador

What are your future work plans?

Candidato

What are your future work plans?

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.5Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you work or are you a student?

Pontuação: 10.0

Sugestão: คำตอบที่นักเรียนให้เป็นการเลียนแบบคำถาม และไม่ได้ตอบเลย ควรตอบโดยตรงด้วยประโยคหัวข้อที่ชัดเจน ตามด้วยรายละเอียดสั้นๆ หากจำเป็น เช่น ตำแหน่งหรือสาขาที่เรียน และระยะเวลา ฝึกใช้คำเชื่อมเมื่อต้องเสริมข้อมูล เช่น "and", "because"

Exemplo: I am a student studying computer science at Chiang Mai University. I’m in my third year, and I focus on software development because I enjoy building apps.

Where do you work?

Pontuação: 10.0

Sugestão: นักเรียนยังตอบด้วยการซ้ำคำถาม ไม่ได้ให้ข้อมูล ควรตอบโดยตรงว่า ‘ที่ไหน’ พร้อมรายละเอียดสั้นๆ เช่น ชื่อบริษัทหรือประเภทของที่ทำงาน และบทบาทของตน ใช้คำเชื่อมเมื่ออธิบายเพิ่ม เช่น "at", "for", "as"

Exemplo: I work at a small digital marketing agency in Bangkok. I’m a content creator there, and I mainly write social media posts and blog articles for clients.

Is it a good place to work?

Pontuação: 10.0

Sugestão: นักเรียนไม่ตอบคำถาม ควรให้ความเห็นโดยตรงว่าดีหรือไม่ พร้อมเหตุผลสนับสนุนอย่างน้อยหนึ่งข้อ และอาจยกตัวอย่างโดยใช้คำเชื่อม เช่น "because", "so", "for example"

Exemplo: Yes, it’s a good place to work because my colleagues are supportive and the management encourages learning. For example, they sponsor online courses and weekly workshops.

Would you like the place where you work?

Pontuação: 8.0

Sugestão: คำตอบเป็นการพิมพ์ผิดหรือไม่เกี่ยวข้องกับคำถามจริง นักเรียนควรตอบว่าชอบหรือไม่ชอบที่ทำงาน พร้อมเหตุผลและความตั้งใจในอนาคต ใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น "because" หรือ "however" หากต้องการเปรียบเทียบ

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to continue working there because the environment is friendly and there are opportunities to grow. However, I hope to take on more responsibility in project management next year.

What are your future work plans?

Pontuação: 10.0

Sugestão: นักเรียนไม่ได้ตอบคำถาม ควรระบุแผนในอนาคตอย่างชัดเจน เช่น การเลื่อนตำแหน่ง การเปลี่ยนสายงาน หรือการศึกษาต่อ และอธิบายเหตุผลหรือขั้นตอนสั้นๆ ใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น "so", "because", "after"

Exemplo: In the future, I plan to become a product manager, so I’m currently learning about user research and project management. After gaining two more years of experience, I will apply for internal PM roles or take a certification course.

Gramática

Sentence structure errors

× Do you work or are you a student?

I am a student.

The student's reply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure/response error: the sentence should state the student's status. Suggestion: answer directly with the appropriate subject and verb (e.g., 'I am a student' or 'I work as a ...').

Sentence structure errors

× Where do you work?

I work at [company/place].

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Provide a full declarative sentence stating workplace. Suggestion: use subject + present simple verb for habitual fact (I work at ...).

Sentence structure errors

× Is it a good place to work?

Yes, it is a good place to work.

The student repeated the examiner's question rather than answering. Use a direct response to a yes/no question (Yes/No + clause). Suggestion: include reason if possible (e.g., 'Yes, it is because ...').

Sentence structure errors

× Would you like the place where you work?

Yes, I like the place where I work.

Student wrote 'Would you like the place where you work?' which repeats the examiner's question and incorrectly uses 'would' and 'like' for preference. To state liking, use present simple: 'I like the place where I work.' Suggestion: for habits or preferences use present simple; 'would like' is for polite requests or hypothetical desires.

Sentence structure errors

× Would you write the place where you work?

Would you like the place where you work?

The student's sentence changes the meaning by using 'write' incorrectly. Likely they intended to repeat the examiner's question 'Would you like...'. 'Would you write...' asks someone to write something, which doesn't fit. Suggestion: use 'like' for preference or 'write' only when requesting written information.

Sentence structure errors

× What are your future work plans?

I plan to [goal], for example I will study further / look for promotion / change jobs.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To respond, use a complete sentence describing future plans. Suggestion: use 'I plan to...' or 'I will...' depending on certainty; keep verb tense consistent with future intention.

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GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
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