Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Use correct tense and a clear, direct topic sentence. Avoid unnecessary words and keep it natural: say whether you currently work or study, using present simple for current facts. Add a brief detail about your role if needed.

Exemplo: I work as a call centre agent. I handle customer inquiries and resolve complaints over the phone, usually in English and Turkish.

Sugestão: Be specific and natural. Give a concise location and, if useful, a short detail about the workplace to enrich the answer. Use linking words only if adding details.

Exemplo: I work in Istanbul, in the business district. My office is located near the main transport hub, which makes commuting easy.

Sugestão: Give a direct opinion first, then support it with specific reasons. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and avoid repeating the same word. Provide one or two concrete details about the environment or colleagues.

Exemplo: Yes, it is a good place to work because the office atmosphere is friendly and my colleagues are supportive, so I feel comfortable asking for help.

Sugestão: Answer directly with present-tense opinion and correct grammar. Explain why you like it with one specific reason. Avoid awkward phrasing and tense errors.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. I enjoy working there because the team is collaborative and I have opportunities to learn new skills.

Sugestão: Provide a clear, grammatically correct statement of your goal, then add a specific plan or timeline. Use linking words (for example, by, so) to connect your goal and how you will achieve it.

Exemplo: I plan to move into a higher position, such as a team leader, within the next two years by taking management training and improving my performance.

× I worked in a call center agent.

✓ I worked as a call center agent.

The student used past tense correctly but used an incorrect prepositional/role phrase. The verb 'worked' (past tense) is fine for a past job, but the role should be expressed with the preposition 'as' plus the job title. Suggestion: use 'work as' for roles (present) or 'worked as' for past roles.

× I work here in Turkey City.

✓ I work here in Turkey City.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; no change needed for tense. However, if the student meant the city name, ensure correct proper noun formatting and consider 'in Turkey' or 'in [City Name], Turkey' for clarity.

× Yes, actually good. It's good environment and good people surround you.

✓ Yes, it's actually good. The environment is nice and the people surrounding you are friendly.

The original has poor word order and missing articles and uses 'good' repeatedly. 'Actually good' should be 'it's actually good.' 'Environment' needs the definite article 'the' and an adjective like 'nice' fits better. 'People surround you' is awkward; use 'the people surrounding you are friendly' or 'the people there are friendly.' Suggest varying adjectives and using articles.

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Do you like the place where you work?

The examiner's question uses 'Would you like' incorrectly for asking current preference; 'Do you like' is the appropriate present simple question. This is identification of the prompt; no student correction required. If the student was answering, they should use present simple for routines and states.

× Absolutely 100%. I liked the place where I've been worked with.

✓ Absolutely 100%. I liked the place where I worked.

The student mixes past simple 'liked' with a present perfect passive/active form 'I've been worked with' which is ungrammatical. To describe a past employment, use simple past: 'I worked' or present perfect without passive if continuing: 'I have worked there.' Remove 'with' after 'worked.'

× My future work plans is to become a high, possibly move into a higher position.

✓ My future work plan is to advance, possibly moving into a higher position.

There is subject-verb agreement error ('plans is' should be 'plan is' or 'plans are') and awkward phrasing 'become a high.' Use 'advance' or 'move into a higher position.' Also use a gerund 'moving' after 'possibly' or restructure the sentence. Suggestion: 'My future work plan is to advance, possibly moving into a higher position.'