Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and natural: start with a direct topic sentence (yes/no), name the plant correctly, give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words, and avoid repetition. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., 'basil' or 'herbs' instead of 'silicon' or 'guardian') and correct collocations (e.g., 'keep plants', 'grow herbs', 'save money').

예시: Yes, I keep a few herbs at home, mainly basil and mint. I grow them in small pots on the kitchen windowsill, so I can pick fresh leaves while I cook. Because they are easy to grow and replace store-bought herbs, they help me save money and improve the flavor of my dishes.

제안: Answer directly and simply: state whether you grew plants, give a reason, and use clear linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so'). Use correct vocabulary and avoid unclear phrases. Limit to 2–3 supporting sentences and be specific about activities or reasons.

예시: When I was young, I didn't grow any plants because I spent most of my free time playing with toys and video games. As a result, I didn't have time to water or take care of plants. I only started gardening later when I became more responsible.

제안: Give a concise and organized answer: say what you know, give 1–2 concrete examples of plants you've grown, and mention one specific cultivation practice or source of information. Use linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'so') and clear vocabulary.

예시: Yes, I know some basics about growing plants. For example, I've grown strawberries and tomatoes in pots, and I learned to water them regularly and provide enough sunlight. I usually read online gardening guides or watch short videos to learn proper care.

제안: Respond clearly: make a general statement about common gifts, give specific examples (flowers, potted plants) and explain cultural reasons briefly. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'roses', 'express love', 'potted plants') and linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'however').

예시: Yes, many people in China give flowers as gifts, especially roses for romantic occasions. For family or housewarmings, people may give potted plants like lucky bamboo to wish good fortune. However, some plants are less common as gifts because they might symbolize bad luck in certain contexts.

× Yes, I keep a silicon in my inhibition.

✓ Yes, I keep a silicone plant in my apartment.

The original sentence uses incorrect nouns: 'silicon' (a chemical element) should be 'silicone' if referring to material, but context implies 'succulent' or 'plant'. Also 'inhibition' is incorrect for 'apartment' or 'home'. Use the correct noun for the plant type and the correct noun for place. Suggestion: choose the correct plant name (e.g., 'a succulent') and 'in my apartment/home.'

× In my home, it is convenient to cut some guardian when I'm cooking dishes.

✓ At home, it is convenient to cut some greens when I'm cooking.

'Guardian' is the wrong word; likely meant 'greens' or 'herbs'. 'Cooking dishes' is awkward; use 'cooking' or 'preparing meals.' Also use 'at home' for location. Suggestion: replace incorrect noun with 'greens' or 'herbs' and simplify phrase to 'when I'm cooking.'

× It can be.

✓ They can be useful.

The pronoun 'It' is vague and ungrammatical after talking about plants (plural or plural concept). Use 'They can be useful' or 'A plant can be useful.' Ensure pronoun agrees in number with the noun referred to.

× It can save much money to buy it.

✓ It can save a lot of money on groceries.

The phrase 'save much money to buy it' is ungrammatical. Use 'save a lot of money' or 'save money' and specify what is being saved on, e.g., 'on groceries.' Also reword to make subject clear: 'Growing herbs can save a lot of money on groceries.'

× When I was young, I didn't grow any plan because I indulge myself in the various toys and and video games just such gizmos.

✓ When I was young, I didn't grow any plants because I indulged myself in various toys and video games.

Use past tense 'indulged' to match 'When I was young.' 'Plan' should be plural 'plants.' Remove redundant words and incorrect phrasing 'just such gizmos.' Suggestion: keep verbs in past tense and use correct plural nouns.

× So I didn't have any separate time to granny pants because I think it's spend much of my time to water ordering order.

✓ So I didn't have time to take care of plants because I thought it would take up too much of my time to water them regularly.

The original contains multiple wrong words: 'granny pants' and 'water ordering order' are nonsense. Use 'take care of plants' and correct past-tense 'thought' and verb phrase 'would take up.' Also use 'water them regularly.' Suggestion: express reasoning clearly with correct verbs and tenses.

× Yeah, that's what I grew up.

✓ Yes, that's how I grew up.

'That's what I grew up' is ungrammatical. Use 'how I grew up' to describe upbringing. Keep present agreement: 'Yes' instead of 'Yeah' is optional. Suggestion: use 'how' when referring to manner of upbringing.

× I grew a plant like fruit or vegetables from time to time, July strawberries or garbage when I grew them, I always search some knowledge of the, uh, growing treat in the sapphire.

✓ I grew fruits and vegetables from time to time, such as strawberries. When I grew them, I always searched for information about growing plants online.

Sentence contains wrong words and tense issues. Use plural 'fruits and vegetables' and 'such as' to give examples. Past tense 'searched' matches 'I grew.' Replace 'garbage' and 'sapphire' with 'online' or 'the internet.' Suggestion: use clear nouns and correct past tense and preposition 'for information about'.

× In fact, most of gifts we send in plan.

✓ In fact, most of the gifts we send are plants.

Wrong preposition and word order. Use 'most of the gifts' and verb 'are' to identify what they are, and 'plants' as the noun. Suggestion: keep correct article 'the' and use 'are' for identification.

× Uh, maybe it's flowers because there are many flowers like rose or two they can send to our girlfriend or mother to express our junior love.

✓ Maybe they are flowers because there are many flowers like roses that people can send to their girlfriends or mothers to express love.

Pronoun agreement and noun forms are incorrect: use plural 'roses' and agree 'they are flowers.' Use 'their girlfriends or mothers' instead of 'our' and remove odd word 'junior.' Suggestion: ensure plural nouns and pronouns agree and use correct possessive.

× But other plans are not suitable to.

✓ But other plants are not suitable as gifts.

'Plans' should be 'plants' and the phrase 'not suitable to' is incomplete; use 'not suitable as gifts.' Suggestion: choose correct noun and complete the comparison with 'as gifts.'