Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence stating whether you keep plants. Use correct grammar and organize supporting details logically (reasons and feelings). Keep answers concise (1–3 sentences) and avoid repetition. Improve vocabulary and pronunciation of key words (plants, flowers, beautiful, relax).

예시: No, I don't keep plants at home. I like flowers because they make a home look beautiful and they improve my mood by helping me feel calm and relaxed.

제안: Answer directly with past tense and add one or two specific supporting details (where, why). Use correct verb forms and clear nouns. Avoid unclear fragments. Use linking words like because or so to connect ideas.

예시: When I was young in Nepal, I grew marigolds in my family's garden because they are easy to care for and very colorful. I liked them most because they brightened our yard.

제안: Give a structured brief answer: state your level of knowledge and list clear, specific care steps using correct vocabulary (soil, water, sunlight, fertilizer, pests). Use linking words (first, also, finally). Avoid filler words and unclear terms like 'moths' if you mean 'mulch' or 'pests'.

예시: Yes, I know some basics. First, plants need good soil, regular watering and enough sunlight. Also, you can use organic fertilizer or compost and protect them from pests with natural methods.

제안: If unsure, say so confidently and add a general comment or comparison. Use one clear sentence to express lack of knowledge, then give a possible guess or related comment. Avoid repeating and unclear location details.

예시: I'm not sure because I don't know many Chinese people where I live. However, in some cultures people do give plants as gifts because they symbolize good luck and longevity.

× I really like the plants of flowers, that flowers make home so beautiful and knowing I look a flower.

✓ I really like flowering plants; flowers make a home so beautiful and I enjoy looking at them.

The original sentence uses awkward and incorrect adjective/noun combinations and pronouns. 'Plants of flowers' is incorrect; use 'flowering plants' or just 'flowers'. 'Knowing I look a flower' is ungrammatical; use 'I enjoy looking at them'. Also add articles where needed and connect ideas with clearer structure. Suggestion: simplify phrases and use correct noun phrases and 'look at' with object pronoun 'them'.

× My mood also phrase and relax.

✓ They also lift my mood and help me relax.

'Phrase' is incorrect here (wrong word) and 'relax' needs a verb form to show effect. Use 'lift my mood' (common collocation) and 'help me relax'. Maintain plural subject 'they' to refer to flowers/plants. This makes the meaning clear and grammatical.

× I usually grow the grow Marigold when I was young in Nepal.

✓ I usually grew marigolds when I was young in Nepal.

Tense is inconsistent: 'usually' with past reference 'when I was young' requires past tense 'grew'. Also remove duplicated word 'grow' and use plural 'marigolds' as general reference to the flower. Use lowercase for common noun 'marigolds'.

× Plays in a TR.

✓ I used to play in the fields.

The original is unclear and fragmentary. 'Plays in a TR' is not grammatical English. Interpreting intended meaning, 'I used to play in the fields' is a complete sentence that fits the context of childhood activities. If 'TR' referred to 'yard' or 'terrace', replace accordingly.

× That's the most beautiful flower in there, that's why.

✓ They were the most beautiful flowers there; that's why I liked them.

Original has awkward phrasing and singular/plural mismatch. Use 'they' or 'they were' for plural 'marigolds' and clarify the reason with 'that's why I liked them'. This corrects reference and improves coherence.

× I think I know about the growing of land in a plant.

✓ I think I know about growing plants in soil.

'Growing of land in a plant' is incorrect prepositional and word order usage. Use 'growing plants in soil' or 'planting in soil'. 'In soil' correctly indicates medium for growth. Also simplify noun phrase to gerund 'growing plants'. Suggestion: use 'grow plants' or 'how to grow plants'.

× We should put water in a timely and give them some light and uh, also natural moths and some chemicals or some homemade chemicals for.

✓ We should water them regularly, give them some light, and also use natural remedies or homemade solutions when needed.

'Put water in a timely' is incorrect; use 'water them regularly'. 'Natural moths' is wrong word choice—likely 'natural methods' or 'natural remedies'. 'Some chemicals or some homemade chemicals for' is redundant and unfinished. Use clearer quantifiers and parallel structure: 'water them regularly, give them light, and use natural remedies or homemade solutions'.

× Uh, I don't know. Chinese people send plants as a gift because I'm I'm living in a South city of the Nepal, but I usually don't know the Chinese people.

✓ I don't know if Chinese people send plants as gifts because I live in a southern city of Nepal and I don't usually meet many Chinese people.

Pronoun and article errors and awkward phrasing: 'a South city of the Nepal' should be 'a southern city of Nepal' or 'in southern Nepal'. 'I'm I'm' is duplicated. 'I usually don't know the Chinese people' is unclear; replace with 'I don't usually meet many Chinese people'. Also use plural 'gifts' after 'plants'. These changes fix pronoun reference, articles, and clarity.