Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you keep plants, then add one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words (because, so, for example). Keep sentences short and avoid repetition. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "plants" not "plans" and "air-purifying" or "houseplants").

예시: Yes, I keep several houseplants at home. For example, I have a spider plant and a peace lily because they purify the air and make my room feel cozier. I water them twice a week and place them near the window so they get enough light.

제안: Answer the question directly with a topic sentence naming a specific plant you grew when young, then give one or two supporting details (where you kept it, who helped you, or why you liked it). Use simple linking words like "when" and "because" to make your answer coherent.

예시: When I was young, I grew sunflowers in my family's small garden. My mother helped me plant the seeds each spring, and I enjoyed watching them grow very tall by summer.

제안: Provide a clear, simple statement about your knowledge, then give specific practices you follow (watering schedule, soil, light). Use linking words (for example, usually, because) and avoid unclear phrases. Keep to 2–4 short sentences.

예시: Yes, I know some basic things about growing plants. For example, I check the soil moisture and water plants when the topsoil is dry. I also make sure they get enough sunlight and use well-draining soil to prevent root rot.

제안: Answer clearly whether plants are commonly given as gifts in China, then give specific cultural reasons or examples (which plants, occasions, superstitions). Use linking words (for example, however, because) and simple vocabulary to explain symbolism. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: Yes, some Chinese people give plants as gifts, especially during housewarmings or to wish someone good luck. For example, a money tree or lucky bamboo is popular because people believe they bring prosperity and positive energy.

× Because I really have the plans on my home because it's new and bad times, the balance more comfortable, I'm gonna stay on.

✓ I keep plants at home because our apartment is new and uncomfortable, so I want to make it more comfortable.

Original sentence has multiple structural problems: redundant 'because', incorrect phrases ('have the plans on my home', 'balance more comfortable'), and informal 'gonna'. Suggested correction simplifies structure, uses correct collocations ('keep plants', 'apartment is new and uncomfortable', 'make it more comfortable') and standard verb forms. Suggestion: Break ideas into a clear cause and effect sentence; avoid repeating 'because' and use correct nouns and adjectives.

× Sometimes they are they're calling oxygen to have them around.

✓ Sometimes I keep them around because they produce oxygen.

The original mixes pronouns and contractions ('they are they're') and uses incorrect verb 'calling' with 'oxygen'. The corrected sentence uses 'they' clearly and the verb 'produce' which collocates with 'oxygen'. Suggestion: Use a single subject pronoun and a correct verb for the action.

× Therefore I am always here for my my parents keep my air plants on my home after my home.

✓ Therefore I usually take care of the plants at my parents' home and at my own home.

Original repeats words and misorders possession ('my my parents keep my air plants on my home after my home'). Correction clarifies who cares for the plants and uses possessive form 'parents'' and 'my own home'. Suggestion: Use possessive forms and concise phrasing to show location and responsibility.

× And sometimes I want my I didn't. I didn't them all.

✓ Sometimes I want to take care of them, but I couldn't do it for all of them.

Original is fragmented and unclear ('I want my I didn't'). Correction provides a complete idea with contrast and appropriate past ability/modal usage ('couldn't'). Suggestion: Use a complete clause expressing desire and a contrasting result.

× Hello. Each year.

✓ When I was young, I grew plants every year.

The student's reply is incomplete. The question asks about plants grown when young, so the corrected sentence supplies subject, time reference and frequency in a complete sentence. Suggestion: Answer directly with a full sentence including time and frequency.

× Yes, I have missed the confirmation of the ground looking on sometimes when I I'm I'm on the plane snuffing around.

✓ Yes, I check the soil sometimes when I'm walking around the plant area.

Original contains many false or mixed words ('missed the confirmation', 'ground looking on', 'plane snuffing around'). Correction uses appropriate verbs: 'check the soil' and 'walking around the plants'. Suggestion: Use standard collocations for plant care: 'check the soil', 'watering', 'pruning'.

× So I might get my parents after this meeting before I don't get Wednesday for all of them.

✓ So I might ask my parents for help after this meeting because I won't be able to care for them all on Wednesday.

Original sentence misuses pronouns and negatives ('before I don't get Wednesday for all of them'). Correction clarifies intent to ask parents for help and uses proper future ability/obligation phrasing. Suggestion: Use clear clauses to express future inability and request for help.

× So I'm having a weekend and then long for parents and therefore I just put it on 14 to one that that one of their flaws.

✓ I'll have the weekend free, so I will visit my parents, and I usually arrange the plants in groups, for example 14 in one spot.

Original mixes tenses and contains unclear phrases ('having a weekend and then long for parents', 'put it on 14 to one'). Correction sets future intent ('I'll have the weekend free'), a visit to parents, and clarifies arranging plants in groups. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and use clear quantifier phrasing when describing numbers and arrangements.

× What's the foundation of what I want to use the papers in the belong to as I have to appearance or the land on the phones because it is the same power of the symbol of the police.

✓ People often give plants as gifts because they symbolize good luck and good wishes, not money.

Original is largely incoherent with wrong vocabulary ('foundation', 'papers in the belong to', 'symbol of the police'). Correction provides a clear reason why plants are given as gifts in Chinese culture: symbolism and good wishes. Suggestion: Use simple vocabulary to describe cultural meanings: 'symbolize', 'good luck', 'good wishes'.

× There's no money, I would always rather than talk to each other and to give me nice to be spirit and always.

✓ People prefer giving meaningful gifts rather than money; a plant is a pleasant, thoughtful gift that expresses good intentions.

Original mixes negatives and awkward comparisons. Correction explains preference for meaningful gifts over money and describes a plant as thoughtful. Suggestion: Use comparative structures ('rather than') correctly and concise phrases to express preference and meaning.