Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use correct grammar (e.g. subject-verb agreement) and add one specific detail to support your statement. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I keep several houseplants, including succulents and a fiddle-leaf fig. They brighten my living room and help me relax after a busy day.

제안: Provide a direct topic sentence and clear, specific details. Correct grammar (verb forms and articles), avoid filler words, and explain briefly what you grew and how you learned it. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: When I was young, I mainly grew vegetables like tomatoes and peppers, as well as marigold flowers. I learned gardening techniques from my grandfather, who taught me how to plant seeds and water them properly.

제안: Give a clear, structured answer with specific practices and correct grammar. Use linking words (for example, firstly/also) and limit to a few concise sentences describing concrete steps: soil, watering, sunlight, and nutrients.

예시: Yes. I understand basic plant care: choosing well-draining soil and testing its quality, providing the right amount of water depending on the species, and ensuring sufficient sunlight. I also check leaves regularly for pests or nutrient deficiencies.

제안: Answer more directly and avoid hedging. If unsure, say so briefly and give a related specific example. Fix grammar and redundancy, and use linking words to relate your example to your point.

예시: I'm not certain, but some Chinese people do give plants or flowers as gifts on occasions. For example, I saw in a Chinese film that characters exchanged potted plants and bouquets during celebrations.

× Yes, there are many varieties of plants in my home and I love to keep the plants in my home.

✓ Yes, there are many varieties of plants in my home, and I love keeping plants there.

The sentence has repetition and awkward phrasing. 'There are' is fine but 'keep the plants in my home' sounds unnatural; use the gerund 'keeping' after 'love' (verb + -ing form) and replace the second 'my home' with 'there' to avoid redundancy. Also add a comma before the conjunction joining two independent clauses.

× It also give refreshment and some peace to me.

✓ It also gives me refreshment and some peace.

Subject 'it' requires third person singular verb 'gives' not 'give'. Move the indirect object 'me' before the nouns for natural English word order.

× Well, when I was young, I mostly was grown the some vegetable plants and some flowers.

✓ Well, when I was young, I mostly grew some vegetable plants and flowers.

The passive form 'was grown' is incorrect here; the speaker is the agent who did the growing, so use simple past active 'grew'. Also remove unnecessary article 'the' before 'some' and fix word order.

× And it's a very and I learned this skill from my grandfather.

✓ It was enjoyable, and I learned this skill from my grandfather.

The fragment 'it's a very' is incomplete and unclear. Use a full adjective phrase such as 'It was enjoyable' (past tense to match 'when I was young'), and connect with the second clause using 'and'.

× Yes, definitely. I know the things about that how to grow plants with the proper structured and with the method to check the soil quality and also that how much water is enough for the plants that are fulfill their needs.

✓ Yes, definitely. I know how to grow plants properly, how to check soil quality, and how much water is enough to meet the plants' needs.

The original sentence misuses prepositions ('about that how'), has incorrect noun forms ('proper structured'), and awkward relative clause ('that are fulfill their needs'). Use 'know how to' for abilities, 'properly' (adverb) for manner, 'check soil quality', and 'enough to meet the plants' needs' for correct verb and preposition usage. Also use the possessive 'plants''.

× Well, well, I don't know that Chinese people sent a plants as a gifts, but for example, I watched a Chinese movie.

✓ Well, I don't know if Chinese people send plants as gifts, but, for example, I watched a Chinese movie.

Use 'if' not 'that' to introduce uncertainty. 'Sent' (past) should be 'send' (general present) because the question asks about general practice. 'A plants' and 'a gifts' are incorrect articles and plural forms; use 'plants' and 'gifts' without 'a'. Remove duplicated 'well'.

× In that movie The they mostly gave each other a plants of flowers as each other as a gift and.

✓ In that movie, they mostly gave each other plants or flowers as gifts.

The original contains extra words ('The', duplicate 'each other', trailing 'and') and incorrect article usage 'a plants' and 'a gift'. Simplify to 'gave each other plants or flowers as gifts' for correct pluralization and sentence structure.