Watch— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答，再用一个具体用途补充即可。表达“看时间”时用“check the time”，而不是“check accurate time”；“manage my timetable very clearly”不自然，可改为“keep track of my schedule”或“stay on schedule”。

예시: Yes, I do. I wear a watch because it helps me keep track of the time and stay on schedule, especially when I have a busy day.

제안: 回答中可以保留童年收到手表的经历，但需要说明这份礼物对你的意义。“sent me a watch as a gift”可改为“gave me a watch as a gift”；“I like to eat”与话题无关，可能是表达错误；“a same type”应为“the same kind”。建议补充手表的外观或你为什么喜欢它，避免意思不清。

예시: Yes, I have. When I was a child, my parents gave me a watch for my birthday. It was a pretty blue watch, and I loved wearing it because it made me feel grown-up. I’d be happy to have a similar one again.

제안: 观点清楚，也切合题目，但“such as a boss or a manager”举例不够顺畅，“social hierarchy is very high”不自然。可以用“show their success or social status”表达，并补充手表的工艺、品牌或投资价值等其他原因，让内容更具体。

예시: I think some people wear expensive watches to show their success and social status. For example, a business executive might choose a luxury brand because it gives a strong impression of professionalism. Some people also appreciate the craftsmanship and design.

제안: 立场明确，但后半段有明显语法和表达问题。“in modern country”可改为“nowadays”或“in modern society”；“substitute items to replace watches”重复，可直接说“alternatives to watches”；“wording a watch is not. Very important”应为“wearing a watch isn’t very important”。建议用两三句完整表达手机如何替代手表。

예시: Not really. Nowadays, smartphones are a convenient alternative to watches because we can check the time on them anytime. So, although a watch can be useful, I don’t think wearing one is essential.

× I use watches to check accurate time so that I can manage my timetable very clearly.

✓ I use watches to check the time so that I can manage my timetable very clearly.

表示查看时间时，time 前通常要加定冠词 the，因此应说 check the time。

× So I like to eat very much and I especially wanted to have a same type again.

✓ So I like to eat very much and I especially wanted to have the same type again.

固定表达是 the same，same 前通常需要定冠词 the，不能使用 a。

× Not really, because I think in modern country there are so many substitute items to replace watches such as our mobile phones.

✓ Not really, because I think in a modern country there are so many substitute items to replace watches, such as our mobile phones.

country 是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。这里可加不定冠词 a，写成 in a modern country。

× We can check time on our mobile phones, so wording a watch is not. Very important for us.

✓ We can check the time on our mobile phones, so wording a watch is not. Very important for us.

表示查看时间时，time 前通常要加 the，因此应说 check the time。

× We can check time on our mobile phones, so wording a watch is not. Very important for us.

✓ We can check the time on our mobile phones, so wearing a watch is not very important for us.

Very important for us 不能单独作为完整句子，应与前面的 is 连在一起。此外，结合上下文，表达“戴手表”应使用 wearing，而不是 wording。