Watch— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答，再说明手表如何帮助你准时上课。注意使用“check the time”，不要说“watch time”；避免重复“don't miss my”。

예시: Yes, I do. I wear a watch because it helps me keep track of the time and arrive at class on time.

제안: 用过去时清楚讲述收到礼物的时间和送礼的人。删去重复内容，并修正代词和不清楚的“helps me attempt”；可以补充礼物对你的意义或使用情况。

예시: Yes, I have. My father gave me a watch when I was eighteen. I still wear it because it reminds me of him.

제안: 直接给出合理原因，不要用“I don't know”回避问题。“volunteer times”不符合此处语境；可以谈身份、品质或时尚，并用一个具体理由展开。避免重复和未完成的句子。

예시: Some people wear expensive watches because they appreciate fine craftsmanship. They may also see them as a status symbol or a long-term investment.

제안: 观点表达比较直接，但理由可以更清晰、更贴合问题。除了谈品味和成功，也可以说明手表的实用功能；注意主谓一致，并避免不确定的“maybe”。

예시: I think wearing a watch can be useful because it lets people check the time quickly. Some watches can also reflect the owner's personal style.

× Sure, I wear a watch because I usually use it to watch time and don't miss my don't miss my class.

✓ Sure, I wear a watch because I usually use it to check the time and not miss my class.

这里的 time 指具体的“时间”，前面通常需要加定冠词 the。原句中的重复部分属于口语重复，整理答案时删除即可。

× Sure I got a got a watch as a gift while I was eighteen my father gave me a watch for me and she helps me helps me attempt.

✓ Sure, I got a watch as a gift when I was eighteen. My father gave it to me, and it still helps me.

这里的代词指代前面的 watch，应使用表示物品的 it，而不是指女性的 she。描述手表时可以说 it helps me。原句中的重复表达已删去；“attempt”后面缺少具体内容，因此在不改变可辨认意思的前提下省略。

× Actually I don't know some people wear expensive watches maybe because they are very very volunteer times and they want a I don't want to waste everything.

✓ Actually, I don't know. Maybe some people wear expensive watches because they value time and don't want to waste it.

原句把“I don't know”和后面的解释连在一起，且“they want a I don't want to”中途改变主语，句子结构不完整。应将意思分成完整句，并保持主语一致。

× I think it is important to wear a watch because it maybe means good taste and show success.

✓ I think it is important to wear a watch because it maybe means good taste and shows success.

在一般现在时中，主语 it 是第三人称单数，and 连接的两个动词都要与 it 保持一致。因此 show 应改为 shows。