Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban sudah menyampaikan perbedaan antara masa lalu dan sekarang, tetapi belum jelas membedakan tempat bertemu. Ungkapan seperti “have to connect to other people” dan “for making a new friends” kurang alami; gunakan “meet in person” dan “make new friends”. Hindari mengulang “Instagram” dan akhiri dengan satu gagasan yang lengkap.

예시: Yes, there is a difference. In the past, my friends and I usually met in person at school or at someone’s home. These days, we often stay in touch through social media, although we still meet at cafés when we have time.

제안: Hindari membuka dengan “I don’t really know” karena pertanyaan meminta alasan. Jelaskan kriteria tempat secara langsung, misalnya tingkat kebisingan, kenyamanan, suasana, dan kemudahan akses. Ganti frasa yang tidak alami seperti “situation and sensation of the feelings” dengan kosakata spesifik seperti “a relaxed atmosphere”.

예시: Some places are better for meeting because they are comfortable and quiet enough for conversation. For example, a café with good seating and a relaxed atmosphere is ideal. A crowded or noisy place can make it difficult to hear each other.

제안: Pilihan Anda sudah jelas, tetapi gunakan bentuk yang benar: “I prefer spending time” atau “I prefer to spend time”, serta “a group of friends”. Hindari mengatakan Anda berbicara dengan orang lain jika bosan dengan seseorang karena bisa terdengar kurang sopan; jelaskan bahwa suasana kelompok lebih beragam dan menyenangkan.

예시: I usually prefer spending time with a group of friends because the conversation is more lively. We can share different opinions and talk about a wider range of topics. However, I also enjoy catching up with one close friend when I want a more personal conversation.

제안: Jawaban perlu menjawab kebiasaan atau niat Anda sekarang, bukan beralih ke cerita masa kecil tanpa penjelasan. Gunakan “When I was a child” untuk masa lalu dan “I would invite them” untuk menjelaskan niat. Berikan alasan yang jelas, seperti rumah yang nyaman atau kesempatan untuk makan dan mengobrol bersama.

예시: Definitely. I’d be happy to invite my friends over because my home is a comfortable place to relax and chat. We could have a meal together or watch a film. I used to invite school friends over when I was younger, too.

제안: Ada kontradiksi antara “really important” dan “not too important”; perjelas bahwa teman penting, tetapi keluarga tetap prioritas utama. Gunakan bentuk jamak “friends are” dan “the second most important”. Pastikan juga mengucapkan “friends”, bukan “France”, dan tambahkan contoh tentang hal yang Anda pelajari dari teman.

예시: Friends are very important to me, although my family comes first. My friends offer support and help me see things from different perspectives. For example, I often learn new ideas from them when we talk about our experiences.

제안: Nyatakan frekuensi dengan sederhana, misalnya “about once a month”. “I have a busiest day” dan “we have a crowded situation” tidak alami; jelaskan bahwa Anda sibuk dan jadwal teman-teman sulit diselaraskan. Gunakan “the same schedule” dan akhiri jawaban tanpa pengulangan.

예시: Not very often. I usually go out with my friends about once a month because we are all quite busy. It can be difficult to find a day when everyone is free, so we sometimes plan our outings in advance.

제안: Sebutkan tempatnya secara langsung, misalnya “a café in the city centre”, lalu jelaskan alasan tempat itu cocok. Hindari uraian yang tidak jelas tentang banyaknya bangunan dan jangan menyebut teman pergi bersama keluarga jika tidak relevan. Gunakan “go there to meet” atau “hang out” вместо “for go out”.

예시: We often meet at a café in the city centre. It’s easy for everyone to get to, and there are plenty of places to sit and talk. We usually order drinks and catch up there.

제안: Jawaban memiliki dua kegiatan yang relevan, yaitu mengobrol mendalam dan mengenang masa lalu, tetapi perlu disampaikan dengan kalimat lengkap. Gunakan “talk to each other” atau “have deep conversations”, dan berikan contoh topik yang spesifik. Hindari pengisi seperti “like” dan akhiri dengan jelas.

예시: We usually catch up and talk about what’s been happening in our lives. Sometimes we have deeper conversations about our plans or problems. We also enjoy reminiscing about funny things that happened when we were younger.

제안: Jawab dengan kalimat lengkap dan sebutkan nama teman dengan huruf kapital jika itu nama panggilan. Pilih satu perkiraan waktu yang masuk akal, lalu gunakan bentuk lampau “we met” dan bentuk yang benar “we have known each other”. Akhiri dengan detail konkret tentang persahabatan atau sifat teman Anda, bukan kalimat yang terputus.

예시: Yes, I have a close friend called Buddy, and we’ve known each other since primary school. We met when we were children and have stayed in touch ever since. I know him well because he is kind and dependable, and we have shared many memories.

× Absolutely, yes, since in the past we just have to connect to other people, have to face to face or we have to meet directly.

✓ Absolutely, yes. In the past, we had to connect with other people face to face, or meet them directly.

The answer describes a past situation, so use had to rather than have to. The phrase face to face does not need a verb before it; it describes how people met.

× But right now we can just send the message from social media such as Instagram, Instagram or Tiktok.

✓ But right now, we can just send messages on social media such as Instagram or TikTok.

Use the plural messages when speaking generally, rather than the message. The usual preposition is on social media, not from social media.

× So for making a new friends.

✓ This is useful for making new friends.

The original is a fragment without a main verb. Also, friends is plural, so it cannot follow a.

× I don't really know about the reason but in my opinion some places can be suitable for meeting because they they support about the situation and sensation of the feelings.

✓ I don't really know the reason, but in my opinion, some places can be suitable for meeting because they support the situation and the feelings people have.

Support is not followed by about in this construction. Say support something. The repeated they is a speech disfluency, not a grammar point.

× Like we can be more comfortable like about the air or just about the situation.

✓ For example, we can feel more comfortable because of the atmosphere or the general setting.

The original repeats like and uses an incomplete, awkward phrase after comfortable. Use a complete clause and connect the reason with because of.

× I prefer spend time with group group of friends because I can talk with more people than just one person.

✓ I prefer to spend time with a group of friends because I can talk with more people than just one person.

After prefer, use to + base verb or an -ing form. Here, prefer to spend is correct. A is also needed before the singular countable noun group.

× So I can if I get bored with someone, I can just talk with others and I think it's can be very interesting because I can be more confident with the others.

✓ So, if I get bored with someone, I can just talk with others. I think it can be very interesting because I can feel more confident with them.

The if-clause should come before the main clause, not between So and I can. The phrase it's can be is also structurally incorrect; use it can be.

× Definitely yes I would when I was in child I I get I got many friends because of their their performance or just about my my home is really near in the from the school, so I always invite that my friends from the school.

✓ Definitely, yes. When I was a child, I got many friends because my home was really near the school, so I often invited my school friends over.

Use a before the singular countable noun child. The phrase the school is correct here, but the is not needed before school friends when speaking generally. The repeated words are speech disfluencies.

× Definitely yes I would when I was in child I I get I got many friends because of their their performance or just about my my home is really near in the from the school, so I always invite that my friends from the school.

✓ Definitely, yes. When I was a child, I got many friends because my home was really near the school, so I often invited my school friends over.

The answer refers to childhood and past invitations, so use past-tense verbs such as was and invited. The repeated I get I got is a self-correction; only the intended past-tense form is needed.

× Definitely yes I would when I was in child I I get I got many friends because of their their performance or just about my my home is really near in the from the school, so I always invite that my friends from the school.

✓ Definitely, yes. When I was a child, I got many friends because my home was really near the school, so I often invited my school friends over.

Say near the school, not near in the from the school. Near does not need an additional preposition before the place.

× Definitely yes I would when I was in child I I get I got many friends because of their their performance or just about my my home is really near in the from the school, so I always invite that my friends from the school.

✓ Definitely, yes. When I was a child, I got many friends because my home was really near the school, so I often invited my school friends over.

Use the possessive determiner my before friends. That cannot be used before my in this construction; say my friends.

× So I will I will do at the same time.

✓ I would do the same.

The question asks what the student would do, so would is the appropriate modal. Do the same is the complete expression; at the same time does not express this meaning.

× The friends is the second more important.

✓ Friends are the second most important people in my life.

Friends is plural, so it takes are, not is.

× The friends is the second more important.

✓ Friends are the second most important people in my life.

For a ranking such as second in importance, use the superlative most important rather than the comparative more important.

× And I think my friends, I mean like I and my friends, we have a crowded situation like we don't have a same schedule, so we cannot be more go.

✓ I mean, my friends and I have busy schedules and don't have the same schedule, so we cannot go out more often.

When naming yourself with other people as the subject, put the other people first: my friends and I, not I and my friends.

× And I think my friends, I mean like I and my friends, we have a crowded situation like we don't have a same schedule, so we cannot be more go.

✓ I mean, my friends and I have busy schedules and don't have the same schedule, so we cannot go out more often.

Same is normally preceded by the. Say the same schedule, not a same schedule.

× And I think my friends, I mean like I and my friends, we have a crowded situation like we don't have a same schedule, so we cannot be more go.

✓ I mean, my friends and I have busy schedules and don't have the same schedule, so we cannot go out more often.

Cannot be more go is not a grammatical verb phrase. Use cannot go out more often to express that they are unable to go out frequently.

× We often meet in the cafe in the central city, like the central city has a many buildings everything and my my friends always go there with their with their family.

✓ We often meet at a cafe in the city center, which has many buildings, and my friends always go there with their family.

Many is used directly before a plural noun, so do not add a before many. The original phrase a many buildings is incorrect.

× We often meet in the cafe in the central city, like the central city has a many buildings everything and my my friends always go there with their with their family.

✓ We often meet at a cafe in the city center, which has many buildings, and my friends always go there with their family.

Use at for meeting at a particular venue, such as a cafe. In is appropriate for the larger area, the city center.

× So they always use this place for for us like for meetings or just for go out so we can be more comfortable with this.

✓ They always use this place for meeting or just for going out, so we can feel more comfortable there.

After the preposition for, use a noun or an -ing verb form. Therefore, say for going out, not for go out.

× Sometimes we just talk each other like have a deep talk about the situation, like what's what's going on the the absolute event of us like mm-hmm.

✓ Sometimes we just talk to each other and have a deep conversation about what is going on in our lives.

The verb talk needs the preposition to before each other. Use in with the phrase what is going on in our lives.

× And sometimes we just remember ourselves in the in the past, like yeah, from the. The story like that.

✓ And sometimes we just remember our past and the stories from it.

Ourselves is a reflexive pronoun and does not fit this meaning. Use our past to refer to shared past experiences.

× Yes, I have his name is buddy.

✓ Yes, I do. His name is Buddy.

The original joins two independent clauses without a correct connection. Separate the answer from the sentence giving the friend's name.

× He and he and I met when I was in elementary school or kindergarten, I'm not really sure, but we have go out with we have known for long time since since we we are a child.

✓ He and I met when I was in elementary school or kindergarten, I'm not really sure, but we have known each other for a long time, since we were children.

The present perfect uses have followed by a past participle. The correct form is have known, not have know or have go out.

× He and he and I met when I was in elementary school or kindergarten, I'm not really sure, but we have go out with we have known for long time since since we we are a child.

✓ He and I met when I was in elementary school or kindergarten, I'm not really sure, but we have known each other for a long time, since we were children.

The speaker refers to himself and his friend, so the plural noun children is needed rather than the singular child.

× He and he and I met when I was in elementary school or kindergarten, I'm not really sure, but we have go out with we have known for long time since since we we are a child.

✓ He and I met when I was in elementary school or kindergarten, I'm not really sure, but we have known each other for a long time, since we were children.

The phrase since we were children refers to a past starting point, so use the past tense were, not the present tense are.

× He and he and I met when I was in elementary school or kindergarten, I'm not really sure, but we have go out with we have known for long time since since we we are a child.

✓ He and I met when I was in elementary school or kindergarten, I'm not really sure, but we have known each other for a long time, since we were children.

Use a before the singular countable noun time in the phrase for a long time.