Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the comparison directly and use past and present tenses accurately. Remove the unrelated comment about meeting people online, or connect it clearly to your answer. Use a specific place as an example.

예시: Not really. I usually meet my friends in town now, just as I did in the past. We sometimes meet at a café or walk around the shopping area.

제안: Give a clear reason and contrast one suitable place with one unsuitable place. Avoid repeating “good” and “place”; explain what makes a location comfortable, safe, or convenient.

예시: Parks are often good places to meet because they are relaxing and give you space to walk and talk. A noisy or crowded place may be less suitable because it can be difficult to hear each other.

제안: State your preference clearly rather than starting with “Yes, I do,” which does not answer an either-or question. Use the natural phrase “have fun,” and give one reason why you prefer a group.

예시: I prefer spending time with a group of friends because we can play games and share ideas. There is usually more laughter, although I also enjoy talking to one friend sometimes.

제안: This answer gives relevant activities, but organize them into complete sentences and replace “another food” with a natural phrase such as “other snacks.” Use “play games on my tablet” and add punctuation between your ideas.

예시: Yes, I would. We could bake cupcakes or cookies and then play games on my tablet. We could also draw together if we wanted to do something quieter.

제안: Answer with a direct statement and explain what your friends do that makes them important. Avoid repeating “because”; use the natural phrase “important to me” and provide one or two clear examples.

예시: My friends are very important to me because they support me and make me feel happy. We often go for walks or play together, and I can talk to them when I need help.

제안: Your reason is relevant, but explain your routine using clear, accurate phrases. Say “chores” instead of “home chosen,” and use “when I’m not busy” to describe when you do go out.

예시: Not very often. I usually have a lot of homework and chores to do at home. However, I go for a walk with my friends when I have some free time.

제안: Start with the location, then add one short detail about how you met. Use the present tense for a regular meeting place and avoid repeating “meet.” Clarify whether you see them at school or during sports.

예시: We usually meet at school, especially during breaks. I met many of my friends when I started at a new school in fifth grade, and some of them are on my sports team.

제안: You mention several enjoyable activities, but make the list easier to follow with complete sentences and linking words. Use “play games” rather than “play in games,” and name the tablet game clearly if you can.

예시: We usually draw, go for walks, or cook something together. We also enjoy watching films and playing games on my tablet, such as Brawl Stars.

제안: Give a direct answer and choose the correct present perfect form: “I have known Jane for…” or “We have been friends for…”. Avoid restarting the sentence, and add a specific detail about how long you have known her or what you do together.

예시: Yes, I have. I have known my friend Jane for several years. We met at my new school, and we still enjoy spending time together.

× I think no because in the future and now I meet my friends at town and in the past I meet my friends too in the town or in another city because I think the search friends in the internet is so awful way to meet them.

✓ I do not think so, because I meet my friends in town now, and I met them in town or another city in the past. I think searching for friends on the internet is an awful way to meet them.

Use the past tense met to describe where you met your friends in the past. The present tense meet is appropriate for what you do now.

× I think no because in the future and now I meet my friends at town and in the past I meet my friends too in the town or in another city because I think the search friends in the internet is so awful way to meet them.

✓ I do not think so, because I meet my friends in town now, and I met them in town or another city in the past. I think searching for friends on the internet is an awful way to meet them.

Use in town rather than at town, and use on the internet rather than in the internet. These are the standard prepositions for these expressions.

× I think no because in the future and now I meet my friends at town and in the past I meet my friends too in the town or in another city because I think the search friends in the internet is so awful way to meet them.

✓ I do not think so, because I meet my friends in town now, and I met them in town or another city in the past. I think searching for friends on the internet is an awful way to meet them.

Use an before the singular countable noun way because it begins with a vowel sound. In this general expression, say in town rather than in the town.

× I think no because in the future and now I meet my friends at town and in the past I meet my friends too in the town or in another city because I think the search friends in the internet is so awful way to meet them.

✓ I do not think so, because I meet my friends in town now, and I met them in town or another city in the past. I think searching for friends on the internet is an awful way to meet them.

The phrase the search friends is not a complete or correctly formed phrase. Use searching for friends, with the -ing form and the preposition for, to make it the subject of the sentence.

× I think the place where we meet with friends is so important because if you meet them in the park okay, this place is so good because you can go for a walk with them but if you meet them in another bad place it's not a good way to meet them in.

✓ I think the place where we meet our friends is very important. If you meet them in a park, that is a good place because you can go for a walk together. But if you meet them somewhere unpleasant, it is not a good place to meet.

The final in is unnecessary after meet. The phrase meet them already expresses the idea without an additional preposition.

× Yes, I do. I love to spend time with a group of friends because when you with a lot of people you can get fun, make fun and it will be so good whenever when you with one friend.

✓ Yes, I do. I love spending time with a group of friends because when you are with a lot of people, you can have fun, tell jokes, and enjoy yourself more than when you are with one friend.

The clauses when you with a lot of people and when you with one friend are missing the verb are. Include a form of be between the subject you and the rest of each clause.

× Yes, I do. I love to spend time with a group of friends because when you with a lot of people you can get fun, make fun and it will be so good whenever when you with one friend.

✓ Yes, I do. I love spending time with a group of friends because when you are with a lot of people, you can have fun, tell jokes, and enjoy yourself more than when you are with one friend.

Whenever when uses two time connectors together unnecessarily. Use than to introduce the comparison between spending time with a group and spending time with one friend.

× Yes, I would like to invite my friends to my house because we can cook something yummy, for example cupcakes, cakes, um, cookies and another food we can play on my tablet or we can draw on the paper

✓ Yes, I would like to invite my friends to my house because we can cook some yummy food, such as cupcakes, cakes, and cookies. We can play on my tablet or draw on paper.

Another is used with a singular countable noun, but food is uncountable here. Use some food or other food instead.

× Yes, I would like to invite my friends to my house because we can cook something yummy, for example cupcakes, cakes, um, cookies and another food we can play on my tablet or we can draw on the paper

✓ Yes, I would like to invite my friends to my house because we can cook some yummy food, such as cupcakes, cakes, and cookies. We can play on my tablet or draw on paper.

When referring to paper in general as a material, do not use the definite article the. Say draw on paper.

× How important are friends to you? Yes, my friends are so important for me because they love me because all the time we be friends they go for a walk with me, play with me and another sings O what I want

✓ My friends are very important to me because they love me. Whenever we are together, they go for walks with me, play with me, and do other things I like.

Use important to me, not important for me, when describing the personal value of something to you.

× How important are friends to you? Yes, my friends are so important for me because they love me because all the time we be friends they go for a walk with me, play with me and another sings O what I want

✓ My friends are very important to me because they love me. Whenever we are together, they go for walks with me, play with me, and do other things I like.

Use are to describe the ongoing state of being together. The form be cannot be used as the main verb in this present-tense clause.

× No I don't because I have a lot of homework and I need to do home chosen because my mum very like when our house is very clean, so I go for a walk with them when I not busy.

✓ No, I do not, because I have a lot of homework and need to do my chores. My mum really likes it when our house is very clean, so I go for a walk with my friends when I am not busy.

The clause when I not busy is missing the verb am. Use I am not busy to form a complete clause.

× No I don't because I have a lot of homework and I need to do home chosen because my mum very like when our house is very clean, so I go for a walk with them when I not busy.

✓ No, I do not, because I have a lot of homework and need to do my chores. My mum really likes it when our house is very clean, so I go for a walk with my friends when I am not busy.

In the present simple, a third-person singular subject such as my mum takes a verb ending in -s. Use likes, not like.

× No I don't because I have a lot of homework and I need to do home chosen because my mum very like when our house is very clean, so I go for a walk with them when I not busy.

✓ No, I do not, because I have a lot of homework and need to do my chores. My mum really likes it when our house is very clean, so I go for a walk with my friends when I am not busy.

Use the adverb really to modify the verb likes. Very does not normally modify a verb directly.

× No I don't because I have a lot of homework and I need to do home chosen because my mum very like when our house is very clean, so I go for a walk with them when I not busy.

✓ No, I do not, because I have a lot of homework and need to do my chores. My mum really likes it when our house is very clean, so I go for a walk with my friends when I am not busy.

The phrase when I not busy is missing the verb am. A complete clause needs the subject I and the verb am.

× My friends I met at school because in fifth grade I turned to my new school where I I don't know these people style I meet all of them I meet in sports or in school

✓ I often meet my friends at school. I started at my new school in fifth grade and did not know anyone there. I met them through sports or at school.

The original response joins several ideas without clear clause boundaries, and My friends I met does not have a natural subject-verb order. Put the subject before the verb and separate the ideas into complete sentences.

× My friends I met at school because in fifth grade I turned to my new school where I I don't know these people style I meet all of them I meet in sports or in school

✓ I often meet my friends at school. I started at my new school in fifth grade and did not know anyone there. I met them through sports or at school.

Use the past tense did not know and met for events and circumstances in fifth grade. The present tense often meet is suitable for the regular activity asked about in the question.

× With my friends I usually draw groof of a walk, cook something yummy, interesting. We can watch films also and we like to play in games for example browse stars on my tablet.

✓ With my friends, I usually draw, go for walks, and cook something yummy and interesting. We also watch films, and we like to play games, for example, Brawl Stars on my tablet.

Use play games without the preposition in. Play games is the standard expression.

× Yes I do. I have friends I know known for a long time. It's It's my she's from my new school her name is Jane we be friends for a long time.

✓ Yes, I do. I have a friend I have known for a long time. She is from my new school. Her name is Jane, and we have been friends for a long time.

The present perfect uses have or has followed by a past participle. Known is the past participle of know, and been is the past participle of be.

× Yes I do. I have friends I know known for a long time. It's It's my she's from my new school her name is Jane we be friends for a long time.

✓ Yes, I do. I have a friend I have known for a long time. She is from my new school. Her name is Jane, and we have been friends for a long time.

The original response contains repeated and unfinished phrases, such as It's It's my she's. Use complete sentences with a clear subject and verb, and connect Jane's name and the friendship with and.