Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bu yanıt soruyu cevaplamıyor ve sınav ortamı için uygun olmayan bir ifade içeriyor. Kibar ve doğrudan bir yanıt verin; geçmişte ve şimdi buluştuğunuz yerleri kısaca karşılaştırıp bir örnek ekleyin.

예시: Yes, there is a difference. When I was younger, I usually met my friends at home, but now we often meet at cafés or in the park.

제안: Soruyu tekrar istemek kabul edilebilir; ancak yanıtı aldıktan sonra mutlaka soruyu cevaplamalısınız. Uygun yerleri gürültü, rahatlık, konum veya mahremiyet gibi belirli özelliklerle açıklayın.

예시: Some places are better for meeting because they are quiet and comfortable. For example, a café is a good choice because we can talk easily, whereas a very noisy place can make conversation difficult.

제안: Tercihinizi anlıyoruz, ancak “it tends to you contingent” ve “just friends” doğal ifadeler değil. “It depends on the person” diyerek başlayın; tek bir arkadaşla ve grupla vakit geçirme tercihinizi daha net karşılaştırın.

예시: It depends on the person. I prefer meeting my best friend one-to-one because we can have a proper conversation, but I enjoy seeing my other friends in a group because it feels more lively.

제안: “Miropus” ve “because of small parties on my photos” anlaşılır değil; geçmişte yaptığınız etkinliği açıkça ifade edin. Ayrıca “halls” yerine kastınıza göre “home” veya “student accommodation” kullanın ve cevabı kısa tutun.

예시: Yes, I would. I’ve invited friends to my home for small parties before, and I’d be happy to invite them again because it’s a relaxed place to spend time together.

제안: Yanıtınızda arkadaşların sizin için önemli olduğu fikri var, ancak “contingent on the front” ve “necessary to my family” anlamı belirsiz. Arkadaşlığın sizin için neden önemli olduğunu tek bir somut örnekle açıklayın; çelişkili ifadelerden kaçının.

예시: Friends are very important to me because they support me and make me feel happier. I’m especially close to a few friends, and I know I can talk to them when I have a problem.

제안: Cevabın ana fikri anlaşılır: Aileniz size eşlik ettiği için arkadaşlarınızla tek başınıza dışarı çıkamıyorsunuz. “Go to with” yerine “go out with” kullanın ve aynı bilgiyi tekrarlamak yerine nerelere gittiğinizi veya bunun nasıl hissettirdiğini ekleyin.

예시: Not very often, because my parents usually accompany me when I go out. I sometimes go to a café or the park with my family and friends, and I hope to go out with my friends on our own when I’m older.

제안: Buluşma yerlerini belirtiyorsunuz, ancak “I met” yerine alışkanlık için “we meet” kullanın. Kafe, restoran ve ev arasında net bir tercih yapıp nedenini açıklayın; evde ailenizin bulunmasıyla ilgili düşüncenizi daha açık ifade edin.

예시: We usually meet at each other’s homes or at a small café. I prefer cafés because we can talk comfortably without being interrupted by family members.

제안: Singing, dancing ve TikTok videoları gibi etkinliklerden söz etmeniz iyi; ancak “calling the ghosts” ve “something old” ifadeleri anlaşılmıyor. Etkinlikleri doğru ve doğrudan adlandırın, ardından hangisinden neden hoşlandığınızı belirtin.

예시: We usually listen to music, sing, and dance together. Sometimes we make TikTok videos, which is fun because we can be creative and laugh at the results.

제안: Uzun süredir tanıdığınız en yakın arkadaşınızdan söz ediyorsunuz; ancak “I know her about 2012 years” yerine “I’ve known her since 2012” demelisiniz. Arkadaşlığın ne zamandır sürdüğünü ve nasıl tanıştığınızı kısa, tutarlı cümlelerle anlatın.

예시: Yes, I’ve known my best friend since 2012. We met when we were about two or three years old, and we’ve stayed close ever since.

× Actually it tends to you contingent on the person.

✓ Actually, it tends to be contingent on the person.

The phrase 'tends to' must be followed by a base verb. Add 'be' before the adjective 'contingent'; 'you' does not belong in this construction.

× For instance with my best friend I would prefer to meet her alone, but just friends I prefer group of friends because it's better.

✓ For instance, I would prefer to meet my best friend alone, but with other friends, I prefer to meet a group of friends because it's better.

Use 'with' to introduce the people you prefer to meet. The original phrase 'but just friends' is missing this preposition and does not form a complete contrast.

× For instance with my best friend I would prefer to meet her alone, but just friends I prefer group of friends because it's better.

✓ For instance, I would prefer to meet my best friend alone, but with other friends, I prefer to meet a group of friends because it's better.

Use the article 'a' before the singular countable noun phrase 'group of friends'.

× Actually, for my age, I can't go out with my friends alone, so we go to with my other parents and of course with my friends.

✓ Actually, at my age, I can't go out with my friends alone, so I go out with my parents and, of course, my friends.

Use 'at my age' when referring to someone's age. Also, the phrase 'go to with' is not grammatical here; use 'go out with'.

× It will be really fun if I go along with my friends, but I'm too young for this, so that I go out with my family and friend, that's all.

✓ It would be really fun if I went out with my friends, but I'm too young for that, so I go out with my family and friends. That's all.

The original mixes 'will' with a hypothetical 'if' clause. Use 'would' with the past form 'went' for a hypothetical situation. Remove 'that' after 'so' because it is unnecessary here.

× It will be really fun if I go along with my friends, but I'm too young for this, so that I go out with my family and friend, that's all.

✓ It would be really fun if I went out with my friends, but I'm too young for that, so I go out with my family and friends. That's all.

The speaker refers to more than one friend, so the plural form 'friends' is needed.

× Actually, as I say, I met in our houses or sometimes in the small cafe, so the restaurants, but in restaurants is more comfortable because it's better.

✓ Actually, as I said, we meet at our houses or sometimes at a small cafe or in restaurants, but restaurants are more comfortable.

The answer describes a regular habit, so use the present simple 'meet,' not the past form 'met.' Also, 'we' is needed as the subject of 'meet,' and 'restaurants' needs a plural verb: 'are.'

× Actually, as I say, I met in our houses or sometimes in the small cafe, so the restaurants, but in restaurants is more comfortable because it's better.

✓ Actually, as I said, we meet at our houses or sometimes at a small cafe or in restaurants, but restaurants are more comfortable.

Use 'at' for meeting at someone's house or at a cafe. The original preposition choices do not correctly express the locations.

× Actually, as I say, I met in our houses or sometimes in the small cafe, so the restaurants, but in restaurants is more comfortable because it's better.

✓ Actually, as I said, we meet at our houses or sometimes at a small cafe or in restaurants, but restaurants are more comfortable.

Use 'a' before the singular countable noun 'cafe' when referring to any cafe rather than a specific one.

× Usually do something old like calling the ghosts, umm, but we usually make a trend like singing, dancing, uh, and taking a TT videos.

✓ We usually do something old, like calling the ghosts, but we also sing, dance, and take TikTok videos.

The first clause is missing its subject; add 'we.' The original also joins ideas in an unclear way, so use a clear structure to connect the activities.

× Usually do something old like calling the ghosts, umm, but we usually make a trend like singing, dancing, uh, and taking a TT videos.

✓ We usually do something old, like calling the ghosts, but we also sing, dance, and take TikTok videos.

Use the plural noun 'videos' without the singular article 'a.' Alternatively, a singular form would be 'a TikTok video.'

× Yes, of course it's my best friend. I know her about 2012 years.

✓ Yes, of course. She's my best friend. I have known her since 2012.

Use the present perfect 'have known' for a relationship that began in the past and continues now. Use 'since' with the year when it began.

× And for a long time we we are, we were friends in our two young ages, about two or three.

✓ We have been friends since we were very young, since we were about two or three years old.

The original repeats and abandons the clause, making the sentence incomplete and difficult to understand. Use 'have been friends' for a friendship that continues to the present, and use 'since' to introduce when it began.