Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly by comparing the past and the present. Avoid repetition such as “I have also I had also” and complete your final sentence. Use accurate structures such as “we used to meet” and “there were six girls.” Explain where you meet now and why the group is smaller or different.

예시: Yes, there is a difference. We used to meet at school or in places near our neighborhood, and there were about six girls in my group. Nowadays, I usually meet three close friends in cafés or parks because our schedules are busier.

제안: Give a clear reason after identifying suitable places. Correct “quiet place,” “crowded,” and “noise,” and avoid repeating “good for suitable for meeting.” Use a linking word such as “because” or “whereas,” and finish the sentence completely.

예시: Quiet places such as parks and cafés are suitable because people can talk comfortably there. In contrast, crowded places are less suitable because they are noisy and it is difficult to hear each other. A peaceful environment also makes conversations more enjoyable.

제안: State your preference clearly and organize the reasons in a logical order. Replace unclear phrases such as “we love” and “do beating with each other” with natural expressions like “we laugh together” and “tease each other.” Avoid mentioning money unless it is directly relevant, and complete the answer within three or four sentences.

예시: I prefer spending time with a group of friends because the atmosphere is usually more lively. We can talk, laugh, and share different opinions, so there is always something interesting to do. We might also have a meal together or play games, which is more enjoyable than meeting just one person.

제안: The answer is relevant and includes reasons, but use natural collocations: “I feel relieved,” “when they come to my home,” “I am hospitable,” and “invite my friends to my home.” Avoid repeating “comfortable” several times. Add one specific activity to make the answer more effective.

예시: Yes, I often invite my friends to my home because I feel relaxed around them. I enjoy cooking for them, and we usually chat, watch films, or play board games together. My friends also feel comfortable because my home is quiet and welcoming.

제안: Begin with a direct statement about the importance of friends, then provide one or two specific reasons. Replace “very needed” with “essential,” “at a danger” with “in danger,” and “easy to comfort with them” with “easy to feel comfortable with them.” Avoid repetition and explain how friends support you emotionally as well as practically.

예시: Friends are extremely important to me because they support me in difficult situations. For example, if I am in trouble, they will give me advice or help me find a solution. I also feel comfortable sharing my worries with them because they know me well.

제안: Answer the frequency question directly with “Yes, quite often” or a similar phrase. Correct “go with them at park” to “go to the park,” “used to fun” to “have fun,” and do not change from “friends” to “family” at the end. Give one clear example of a place you visit together.

예시: Yes, I go out with my friends quite often, usually once or twice a week. We sometimes visit a park, have a meal, or go to a local entertainment center such as Fantasy Kingdom. I enjoy these outings because we can relax and have fun together.

제안: You mention several appropriate locations, but improve the grammar and reduce fillers such as “you know” and “so yeah.” Say “at my friends’ homes,” “at restaurants, cafés, and parks,” and “when we have free time.” Organize the answer by describing home meetings first and outdoor meetings second.

예시: We often meet at my home or at one of my friends’ homes. When we want to go out, we usually choose a café, restaurant, or nearby park. We normally arrange these meetings when everyone has some free time.

제안: Describe your usual activities in a clear sequence and avoid repeating “outside” and “actually.” Correct “eat something food” to “eat something” or “have a meal,” and clarify “work outside,” which may mean “walk around outside.” Add a linking word such as “when” or “also” to connect activities naturally.

예시: When we go out, we usually have a meal at a café or walk around the area. Sometimes we visit a park and take photos together. When they come to my home, I cook for them, and we chat while enjoying the food.

제안: Introduce the friend more naturally with “Her name is Mim, and I have known her for ten years.” Use the present perfect correctly: “We have known each other for ten years.” Avoid describing her as “a poor girl” unless you mean she has financial difficulties, and clarify the final idea by saying that you sometimes lend her money and she pays it back, which shows trust.

예시: Yes, I have a close friend called Mim, and we have known each other for ten years. We met at school and have remained friends ever since. She sometimes has financial difficulties, so I lend her money when she needs it, and she always pays me back. This shows that we have a strong and trusting friendship.

× There is big difference between us.

✓ There is a big difference between us.

The singular countable noun difference needs the indefinite article a.

× We were used to meet at school and also outside.

✓ We used to meet at school and also outside.

Used to is followed by the base form of a verb when describing a past habit. Were used to meeting has a different meaning: being accustomed to meeting.

× Right now we meet only three people, three girls squad.

✓ Right now, I meet only three people, a squad of three girls.

The phrase three girls squad has an incorrect noun structure. Use a squad of three girls or a three-girl squad.

× There was six girls in my group.

✓ There were six girls in my group.

The noun girls is plural, so the verb must be were, not was.

× I think that a park and also which is quite place is suitable for meeting.

✓ I think that a quiet park is suitable for meeting.

The original sentence contains an incomplete and incorrectly connected clause. Use a clear noun phrase such as a quiet park.

× A park and also which is quite place is suitable for meeting.

✓ A park that is a quiet place is suitable for meeting.

The singular countable noun place needs the article a. The relative clause also needs a complete structure.

× I don't think that a crowded place well good for meeting.

✓ I don't think that a crowded place is good for meeting.

The sentence needs the verb is after the subject a crowded place.

× They will be very crowd and also very sound.

✓ It will be very crowded and also very noisy.

Crowd is normally a noun or verb, so the adjective crowded is needed. Sound is not the correct adjective here; noisy describes a place with too much noise.

× When we meet we love and we talk about many things.

✓ When we meet, we laugh and talk about many things.

The verb love does not express the intended meaning. The sentence needs a suitable verb parallel to talk, such as laugh.

× We also do beating with each other.

✓ We also joke around with each other.

Do beating is not a correct English verb phrase. Use the natural phrasal verb joke around to describe having fun together.

× If I don't have money then they give my money.

✓ If I don't have money, they give me money.

The indirect object is me, not my. My is a possessive determiner and must be followed by a noun.

× When they come my home I feel very excited.

✓ When they come to my home, I feel very excited.

The preposition to is required after come when stating the destination.

× I invite my friends my home.

✓ I invite my friends to my home.

The destination after invite is introduced with the preposition to.

× When I am at a danger then they will help me.

✓ When I am in danger, they will help me.

The fixed expression is in danger, not at a danger. Danger is also generally used without the article in this expression.

× I feel that it's very easy to comfort with them.

✓ I feel that it's very easy to feel comfortable with them.

Comfort is not used in this structure as an adjective. Use feel comfortable to describe an emotional state.

× Here's of course I feel very comfortable with my friends. That's why I will go out with my friends.

✓ Yes, of course, I feel very comfortable with my friends. That's why I go out with them.

Here's is incorrect in this context; the answer should begin with Yes. Since the question asks about a usual activity, use the present simple go out rather than the future form will go.

× I go with them at park.

✓ I go with them to the park.

The singular countable noun park needs the article the when referring to a particular park. The destination is introduced by to, not at.

× I used to fun with them.

✓ I used to have fun with them.

Used to must be followed by a base-form verb. Have fun is the correct verb phrase.

× We meet each other at my home and also my friends home.

✓ We meet each other at my home and also at my friends' homes.

The possessive plural friends needs an apostrophe after s, and homes should be plural when referring to several friends' houses. The preposition at should be repeated for parallel structure.

× We meet outside, you know, restaurant, cafe and park also.

✓ We also meet outside, at restaurants, cafés, and parks.

Plural countable nouns used generally need plural forms. The preposition at should be used before the list of meeting places.

× We meet each other when we are very free time.

✓ We meet each other when we have free time.

Free time is a noun phrase, so it cannot follow are in this sentence. Use have free time to express availability.

× We actually eat something food.

✓ We actually eat some food.

Something is used before a singular countable noun or alone. Food is an uncountable noun, so use some food.

× When they come my home then I cook for them.

✓ When they come to my home, I cook for them.

The preposition to is required before the destination my home.

× I have a friend that I have known for a long time that her name is Mim.

✓ I have a friend whom I have known for a long time. Her name is Mim.

The relative clause is overloaded and incorrectly uses that her name. Separate it into two sentences, or say whose name is Mim.

× We meet since ten years and we are still friends.

✓ We have been friends for ten years, and we are still friends.

An action or relationship that began in the past and continues now should use the present perfect. Use for with a period of time.

× She is like a poor girl but she needs some money when she needed it then he back it.

✓ She is a poor girl, and when she needs money, I lend it to her. She pays it back later.

The pronouns she and her must refer to Mim, while he is incorrect. The sentence also needs clear pronoun references and complete verb phrases.

× When she needed it then he back it.

✓ When she needed money, I lent it to her, and she paid it back later.

The original sentence uses incomplete verb forms. Use lent and paid for completed past actions, and use paid it back as the correct past-tense phrase.

× There is a like good bonding.

✓ There is a good bond between us.

The original noun phrase is incorrectly formed. Bond is a singular countable noun, so it can follow a, and the adjective good comes before it.