Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答有比较过去和现在，方向正确，但语法和表达问题较多。应使用“there are some differences”和“in the past”；“prefer me”应改为“preferred to meet”；“at coffee”应改为“at cafés”。另外，最后的“so you can...”突然改成泛指，建议保持第一人称，并用一个连接词清楚说明原因。

예시: Yes, there is a difference. In the past, I usually met my friends at school because we were all students. These days, I prefer meeting them in cafés or bookstores, where we can relax and have a good chat.

제안: 回答提到了图书馆需要安静和家里比较自由，但逻辑连接不清晰，且有多处词语错误。“on a library”应改为“in a library”，“doing theirselves”应改为“studying”，“attach your friend”应改为“invite your friends”。建议先直接回答，再分别举出不适合和适合的地点。

예시: Some places are suitable because they are comfortable and allow people to talk freely. For example, a café or someone’s home is a good choice. However, a library is not suitable because people need to stay quiet and concentrate.

제안: 观点明确，也给出了共同爱好这一理由，但“one friend is the best friend”表达不自然，“talk with Lim”似乎是人名或发音错误，“chat with our hobbies”应改为“talk about our hobbies”。建议使用“a close friend”并补充一项具体好处，例如可以进行更深入的交流。

예시: I prefer spending time with one close friend. It is easier to have a meaningful conversation, especially when we share the same interests. We can talk about our hobbies and discuss personal experiences without being interrupted.

제안: 回答直接，理由也具体，但不应把“Because”单独作为句子开头；“PS five”应写作“a PlayStation 5”，“place it”应改为“play it”，“a very delighted”应改为“very enjoyable”或“a lot of fun”。同时避免重复“I always invite my friends to my home”。

예시: Yes, definitely. I often invite my friends over because I have a PlayStation 5 at home. We can play video games together, which is a lot of fun and more comfortable than going out.

제안: 核心意思是朋友很重要，但“Friday”明显应为“friends”，“neglected life”不符合语境。建议用“Friends are extremely important to me”直接回答，并说明朋友提供陪伴和情感支持；“unhealthy”在这里不够自然，可以改为“stressed”或“emotionally unhappy”。

예시: Friends are extremely important to me because they give me companionship and emotional support. We can do enjoyable activities together, and I can talk to them when I have problems. Without friends, I would probably feel lonely and stressed.

제안: 回答包含频率、活动和持续时间，内容较具体。需要改正时态和搭配：“I got”应为“I go”，“twelve a month”应为“about twelve times a month”，“have play”应为“have been playing”。建议使用现在完成进行时表达持续了十年的活动。

예시: Yes, I do. I go out with my friends about twelve times a month, and we often play football together. In fact, we have been playing football together for more than ten years.

제안: 回答提到了在家见面以及家中有大空间和游戏机，但有较多词汇和语法错误。“on my home”应改为“at my home”，“homework”应为“home”，“Both me and my friend”应为“Both my friends and I”，“PS file”应为“PlayStation games”。建议清楚说明地点和原因，避免重复“in my home”。

예시: We often meet at my home because I have a large living room and a PlayStation 5. My friends and I enjoy playing video games there, and the spacious room also gives us enough space to relax.

제안: 回答列出了电子游戏和踢足球两个活动，但句子结构混乱。“play PSF video games and playing football”应保持平行结构，改为“play PlayStation games and play football”；“neither”使用错误。建议用“usually... and sometimes...”组织答案，并补充活动带来的感受。

예시: I usually play PlayStation games with my friends, and sometimes we play football outside. We enjoy spending time together because these activities help us relax and stay active.

제안: 回答有明确的人物和十五年以上的时间信息，但时态、代词和部分词组不准确。“I know him over fifteen years”应改为“I have known him for over fifteen years”，“the first time I meet”应为“the first time I met him”。“with his others”不清楚，建议改为“with each other”，并用具体细节说明你们如何保持友谊。

예시: Yes, I have a friend whom I have known for more than fifteen years. We first met at primary school, and we have stayed in touch ever since. We often share jokes and support each other, so our friendship has remained strong.

× Definitely there's some differences between now and past.

✓ Definitely, there are some differences between now and the past.

“differences”是复数，所以要使用“there are”，不能使用“there is”。同时，表示过去的一般概念前通常使用“the past”。

× At past I prefer me with my friends at schools because we are also students but notice I prefer meet friends or coffee or bookstores so you can meet others and chat with others.

✓ In the past, I preferred meeting my friends at school because we were also students, but nowadays I prefer meeting friends at cafés or bookstores, where we can meet others and chat with them.

“In the past”表示过去，后面的动作要使用过去时，因此“prefer”改为“preferred”，“are”改为“were”。

× At past I prefer me with my friends at schools because we are also students but notice I prefer meet friends or coffee or bookstores so you can meet others and chat with others.

✓ In the past, I preferred meeting my friends at school because we were also students, but nowadays I prefer meeting friends at cafés or bookstores, where we can meet others and chat with them.

“prefer”后面表示“喜欢做某事”时，可以使用“prefer doing something”，所以“prefer meet”应改为“prefer meeting”。

× At past I prefer me with my friends at schools because we are also students but notice I prefer meet friends or coffee or bookstores so you can meet others and chat with others.

✓ In the past, I preferred meeting my friends at school because we were also students, but nowadays I prefer meeting friends at cafés or bookstores, where we can meet others and chat with them.

固定表达是“in the past”，不是“at past”。表示在学校通常用“at school”，而不是“at schools”。

× For example, on a library many people are doing theirselves so you should be quiet for example in your own home, you can attach your friend for yourself.

✓ For example, in a library, many people are studying by themselves, so you should be quiet. In your own home, you can invite your friends over.

“theirselves”不是标准英语形式。主语是“many people”，对应的反身代词应为“themselves”。表示“独自地”时可使用“by themselves”。

× For example, on a library many people are doing theirselves so you should be quiet for example in your own home, you can attach your friend for yourself.

✓ For example, in a library, many people are studying by themselves, so you should be quiet. In your own home, you can invite your friends over.

表示“在图书馆里”使用“in a library”，不能使用“on a library”。表示在自己的家里使用“in your own home”。

× For example, on a library many people are doing theirselves so you should be quiet for example in your own home, you can attach your friend for yourself.

✓ For example, in a library, many people are studying by themselves, so you should be quiet. In your own home, you can invite your friends over.

“for yourself”不能正确表达这里的意思。根据句意，应直接说“you can invite your friends over”，不需要添加错误的代词短语。

× To be honest, I prefer spending time with one friend because one friend is the best friend I can talk with Lim, what I really want to say and always we have our same hobbies.

✓ To be honest, I prefer spending time with one friend because a close friend is someone I can talk to about whatever I want to say, and we always have the same hobbies.

第一次泛指“一个亲密的朋友”时使用不定冠词“a”。“the same hobbies”是固定表达，表示“相同的爱好”。

× We can chat with our hobbies.

✓ We can chat about our hobbies.

“chat about something”表示“谈论某事”。“with”通常表示和某人聊天，而不是表示聊天的主题。

× It's very enjoying people.

✓ It is very enjoyable.

“enjoying”通常描述主动产生享受感觉的人或事物；这里描述活动令人愉快，应使用形容词“enjoyable”。

× Because there is a PS five in my home I always invite my friends to my home and we place it together.

✓ I always invite my friends to my home because there is a PS5 there, and we play it together.

原句以“Because”开头但没有和主句正确连接，造成结构不完整。将原因从句放在主句后面，可以形成完整句子。

× It's a very delighted for me.

✓ It is very enjoyable for me.

“delighted”通常描述人的感受，不能用“a”直接修饰这里的活动。描述某事令人愉快时，应使用“enjoyable”。

× I think Friday is most important for me because we can do something together to enjoy our neglected life.

✓ I think friends are the most important people in my life because we can do things together and enjoy our lives.

最高级“most important”前通常需要定冠词“the”。同时，复数主语“friends”应与“are”搭配。

× I think Friday is most important for me because we can do something together to enjoy our neglected life.

✓ I think friends are the most important people in my life because we can do things together and enjoy our lives.

“life”在这里表示每个人的生活，通常使用复数“lives”。“things”也更适合表示一起做的不同活动。

× Definitely I got with my friend about twelve a month.

✓ Definitely, I go out with my friends about twelve times a month.

表示“每月十二次”需要使用完整表达“twelve times a month”。“a month”前缺少表示次数的“times”。

× Definitely I got with my friend about twelve a month.

✓ Definitely, I go out with my friends about twelve times a month.

问题询问日常习惯，所以要使用一般现在时。“got”是过去式，不能表示现在经常发生的活动，应改为“go out”。

× We have play football with each other about over ten years.

✓ We have played football together for over ten years.

现在完成时的结构是“have/has + 过去分词”，所以“have play”应改为“have played”。表示持续时间使用“for”。

× We have play football with each other about over ten years.

✓ We have played football together for over ten years.

表示持续了多长时间时使用“for + 时间段”，因此应说“for over ten years”，不能使用“about over ten years”。

× We always meet each other on my home because my homework have a big square and a PS five in my home.

✓ We always meet at my home because my home has a big living room and a PS5 there.

表示“在某人的家里”使用“at my home”，不能使用“on my home”。“home”作为地点名词前也不需要使用“on”。

× We always meet each other on my home because my homework have a big square and a PS five in my home.

✓ We always meet at my home because my home has a big living room and a PS5 there.

主语“my home”是第三人称单数，所以动词应使用“has”，不能使用“have”。

× Both me and my friend however interest me to play PS file.

✓ Both my friend and I are interested in playing PS5 games.

在主语位置应使用主格“I”，不能使用宾格“me”。固定表达是“be interested in doing something”，所以应说“are interested in playing”。

× Both me and my friend however interest me to play PS file.

✓ Both my friend and I are interested in playing PS5 games.

介词“in”后面要接动名词，因此“play”应改为“playing”。固定结构为“interested in playing”。

× I usually play PSF video games and playing football outside with my friends we are enjoying the time neither we we do some things with each other.

✓ I usually play PS5 video games and play football outside with my friends. We enjoy spending time together and doing things with each other.

原句把多个完整意思直接连接在一起，缺少正确的句号和连接结构。应拆分成两个完整句子，并保持“play ... and play ...”的平行结构。

× I usually play PSF video games and playing football outside with my friends we are enjoying the time neither we we do some things with each other.

✓ I usually play PS5 video games and play football outside with my friends. We enjoy spending time together and doing things with each other.

“usually”表示习惯，应使用一般现在时“enjoy”，不需要使用现在进行时“are enjoying”。

× I usually play PSF video games and playing football outside with my friends we are enjoying the time neither we we do some things with each other.

✓ I usually play PS5 video games and play football outside with my friends. We enjoy spending time together and doing things with each other.

“neither”表示“两者都不”，不符合这里的肯定句意思。这里应使用“and”连接“spending time”和“doing things”。

× Definitely I have a friend I know him over fifteen years.

✓ Definitely, I have a friend whom I have known for over fifteen years.

“a friend”已经是宾语关系从句的先行词，不能再重复使用“him”。可以使用关系代词“whom”，或说“I have a friend. I have known him...”

× Definitely I have a friend I know him over fifteen years.

✓ Definitely, I have a friend whom I have known for over fifteen years.

现在完成时需要使用“have + 过去分词”，所以应使用“have known”，不能使用一般现在时“know”。

× Definitely I have a friend I know him over fifteen years.

✓ Definitely, I have a friend whom I have known for over fifteen years.

表示持续时间时使用“for + 时间段”，所以应说“for over fifteen years”，不能直接说“over fifteen years”。

× The first time I meet him in Permanent School.

✓ The first time I met him was at Permanent School.

“The first time”描述过去第一次见面的经历，应使用过去式“met”，而不是现在时“meet”。

× The first time I meet him in Permanent School.

✓ The first time I met him was at Permanent School.

表示在学校这个地点发生事件时，通常使用“at school”，而不是“in school”。

× We have a great relationship with his others and always communicate with each other's share of laughs and build our friendship.

✓ We have a great relationship with each other, and we always communicate, share laughs, and build our friendship.

“his others”不是正确的代词组合。表示“彼此”应使用“each other”；“each other's”是所有格，不能在这里直接作“communicate”的宾语。