Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答有比较过去和现在，结构基本清楚，也提供了冲浪俱乐部的例子。但语法和词汇错误较多，例如“I'm in the past”应改为“In the past”，“crime school”可能是“primary school”，“new friend”应为“new friends”，“serve together”应为“surf together”。注意使用完整句子，并减少重复和停顿。

예시: Yes, there is a clear difference. In the past, I mainly met friends at school, but nowadays I meet people through clubs or at work. For example, I joined a surfing club this year, where I have met many new friends while surfing together.

제안: 回答提到了商场的空间、安静和网络等优点，也进行了对比，但开头缺少完整句子，结尾“because must be the meeting must be disturbed by”表达不完整。应直接说明适合见面的标准，并用“whereas/however”连接对比；同时区分普通见面和正式会议的语境。

예시: Some places are suitable because they are comfortable, spacious, and relatively quiet. For example, a café or a shopping mall may offer enough seating and reliable Wi-Fi. In contrast, crowded or noisy places are unsuitable because it can be difficult to hear each other or have a meaningful conversation.

제안: 回答观点明确，也给出了性格原因和活动例子，内容比较切题。主要问题是重复较多，如“I usually”“so”，并且应说“an introvert”“at a time”“go to a café or restaurant”。可以用一个连接词组织原因和结果，使表达更流畅自然。

예시: I prefer spending time with one close friend because it feels more relaxed and personal. I’m quite introverted, so I sometimes feel overwhelmed in large groups. We usually go to a café or restaurant, where we can have a deeper conversation.

제안: 回答直接并提供了看电视、做饭等具体活动，但“we don't have pressure to do anything or to be at any places on time”不够自然，“at which which feel make me feel relaxed”语法错误明显。建议将长句拆分，并使用“Unlike going out”进行对比，突出在家聚会的优势。

예시: Yes, I would. Inviting friends over is more relaxed because we do not have to follow a schedule or spend money going out. We can watch TV, cook together, and chat comfortably at home.

제안: 回答有明确观点，并通过童年经历解释朋友的重要性，内容具体且有情感。但时态和搭配需要改进，例如“when I was little”后使用过去时，“we did homework together”，“formed a deep relationship”以及“they are very precious to me”。避免重复“We”和“So”。

예시: Friends are almost as important as family to me. When I was young, my parents were busy at work, so I spent a lot of time with my friends. We played and did our homework together, and we formed a deep bond that I still treasure.

제안: 回答频率明确，也提供了工作日和周末的具体安排，内容较丰富。不过“studying in university”应改为“studying at university”，“go to restaurant”应加冠词或改为“go to restaurants”，并应使用“on weekends”和复数“friends”。建议用“During the week”和“at weekends”清晰区分时间。

예시: Yes, I go out with my friends almost every week. Since I’m still studying at university, I have a fairly flexible schedule. During the week, we sometimes have dinner after class, while at weekends, we may take a trip to another city.

제안: 回答直接，先说明学校，再补充餐馆和食堂，层次较清楚。但“go to the same class”应改为“attend the same classes”，“a part of that”应为“apart from that”，而“near nearby”重复。可以加入“especially”来突出最常见的地点，并避免同义词重复。

예시: We usually meet at school because most of my friends are my classmates. We attend the same classes, so we often see each other in the library or cafeteria. Apart from that, we sometimes meet at restaurants near campus because we enjoy trying different kinds of food.

제안: 回答给出了学习、吃饭和看电影三类活动，内容具体，且使用了“Besides”补充信息。需要改进语法和自然表达，例如“review the knowledge we learn”可改为“review what we learned”，“go to restaurant”应为“go to a restaurant”，“during week weekends”应为“at weekends”。减少停顿和重复会提升流利度。

예시: My friends and I usually study together in the school library because we are classmates. This allows us to review what we learned in class and help each other with our homework. At weekends, we sometimes go to a restaurant or watch a movie together.

제안: 回答结构完整：先给出时间，再说明认识经过、共同兴趣和朋友的品质，最后补充目前仍保持联系，内容具体且连贯。需要注意“interests in common”或“many interests in common”，“the reason why I like her”更适合表达现在的感受，以及“keep in touch to this day”比“until now”更自然。

예시: Yes, I have a friend whom I’ve known for about ten years. We met in junior high school, and we became close because we had many interests in common. She has always been supportive and considerate. Although she later studied abroad, we have kept in touch to this day.

× Yeah, I'm in the past I made my friends mostly from school or crime school, but now I meet my friend mostly from club or workplace.

✓ Yeah, in the past, I met most of my friends at school or cram school, but now I meet most of my friends at clubs or workplaces.

“In the past”表示过去的时间，因此应使用过去式“met”，而不是现在式“meet”。“Friends”“clubs”和“workplaces”表示复数概念，应使用复数形式。“在学校、俱乐部或工作场所”通常使用介词“at”，而不是“from”。另外，“crime school”应为“cram school”，意思是补习学校。

× I attend a surfing club this year, so I meet a lot of new friend they in the serve together.

✓ I joined a surfing club this year, so I have met many new friends, and we surf together.

“Friend”前面有“many”，所以必须使用复数“friends”。“They in the serve together”缺少正确的主语和谓语，应该改为“we surf together”。“Joined”和“have met”使时间关系更清楚：今年加入俱乐部，并且到目前为止认识了很多新朋友。

× I think a place suitable for meeting.

✓ I think a place is suitable for meeting.

“A place suitable for meeting”在从句中缺少系动词“is”。在“I think”后面需要一个完整的句子结构，即“主语 + be动词 + 表语”。

× However, some places may be too noisy to take a meeting because must be the meeting must be disturbed by.

✓ However, some places may be too noisy for a meeting because the meeting may be disturbed by the noise.

原句中“must be the meeting must be disturbed by”语序混乱，且被动结构不完整。被动语态应使用“主语 + may be + 过去分词”，所以应改为“the meeting may be disturbed”。“Too noisy for a meeting”比“too noisy to take a meeting”结构更正确。

× Since I am introvert, I don't like to talk to lots of people at the time and as I feel insecure when staying with a lot of people so I usually hang out with only one friend to cafe or restaurant.

✓ Since I am an introvert, I don't like talking to lots of people at the same time. I also feel insecure when I am with a large group, so I usually go to a café or restaurant with only one friend.

“Introvert”是可数名词单数，前面需要不定冠词“an”。“At the time”不符合这里的意思，应使用固定表达“at the same time”。原句同时使用“and”“as”和“so”，连接关系混乱，因此拆成两个句子，并使用“so”清楚地表达结果。

× We can watch TV and cook some food at which which feel make me feel relaxed.

✓ We can watch TV and cook some food, which makes me feel relaxed.

“At which which feel make”不是正确的英语结构。这里的“which”指代前面整个活动，因此后面应使用“makes”。因为“which”在这里表示单数的事情，所以谓语使用“makes”，而不是“make”。

× So I stayed with my friends for a long time and we played together, we do did homework together. We make a very deep relationship. So they are very treasured.

✓ So I stayed with my friends for a long time, and we played and did our homework together. We developed a very close relationship, so they are very important to me.

这段内容是在讲过去的经历，所以“do”应改为过去式“did”，“make”应改为“developed”。“We developed a relationship”比“We made a relationship”更自然。“They are very treasured”虽然可以理解，但这里想表达朋友很重要，因此使用“they are very important to me”更准确。

× During weekdays my friend and I will go to school together and after class we may go to restaurant to have dinner and in the weekend we will go to other city.

✓ During the week, my friends and I go to school together. After class, we may go to a restaurant for dinner, and at weekends, we go to another city.

这句话描述的是日常习惯，不是未来计划，因此不应反复使用“will”，应使用一般现在时“go”。“Restaurant”和“city”是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词或限定词，所以使用“a restaurant”和“another city”。表示一周中的时间时，“during the week”和“at weekends”更合适。

× We go to the same class and a part of that we may meet at the restaurant or cafeteria near our school because we love to explore different restaurants near nearby.

✓ We attend the same classes, and apart from that, we may meet at restaurants or cafés near our school because we love exploring different nearby restaurants.

“A part of that”应改为固定表达“apart from that”，表示“除此之外”。“Near nearby”重复且语序错误；“nearby”应放在名词前，形成“different nearby restaurants”。“Love”后面可以接动名词“exploring”，因此“love exploring”结构正确。

× My friends and I usually do homework or study together in the school library because we can review the knowledge we learn from classes. Besides, we will go to restaurant or go to see a movie together during week weekends.

✓ My friends and I usually do our homework or study together in the school library because we can review what we learn in class. Besides, we go to restaurants or see movies together at weekends.

“Go to restaurant”中的“restaurant”是单数可数名词，需要冠词；这里通常说“go to restaurants”。“During week weekends”介词和表达都不正确，应改为“at weekends”。这句话描述通常活动，所以使用一般现在时“go”，而不是未来式“will go”。“What we learn in class”比“the knowledge we learn from classes”更自然、结构也更清楚。

× The reason why I liked her so much is that we have so many interest in common, and she was always supportive and considerate. Even though she studied abroad, we still keep in touch until now.

✓ The reason why I like her so much is that we have so many interests in common, and she has always been supportive and considerate. Even though she studied abroad, we have still kept in touch until now.

“Many”后面必须接复数名词，所以“interest”应改为“interests”。这里是在说明现在仍然喜欢她，因此“liked”应改为现在式“like”。“从过去一直持续到现在”应使用现在完成时“have kept”；同样，“has always been supportive”表示她一直以来都很支持和体贴。