Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the comparison directly and avoid unfinished phrases such as “Not only that.” Use accurate verb tenses: say “I used to meet friends...” for the past and “I usually meet...” for the present. Explain specifically where you met friends before and where you meet them now. Also, “I have changed a lot” and “I have become more introverted” are more natural than “I got so many changes in myself.”

예시: Yes, there is quite a big difference. I used to meet friends mainly at school or in their neighborhoods, but nowadays I usually meet them in cafés or shopping malls. I have become more introverted as I have grown older, so I do not make new friends as easily as I did in the past.

제안: Give a clear reason and distinguish suitable places from unsuitable ones. Correct the grammar in “It’s depend” to “It depends,” and use “noisy” rather than “fully noise.” Avoid repeating “gather.” Mention useful features, such as quietness, comfortable seating, and enough space to talk.

예시: It depends on the atmosphere of the place. Quiet cafés and parks are suitable because they are comfortable and allow people to talk easily. In contrast, very noisy places are not ideal because it is difficult to hear one another or have a peaceful conversation.

제안: State your preference once, then give one or two clear reasons. Use “I feel uncomfortable in groups” instead of “I am really feel uncomfortable,” and avoid repetition such as “single person” and “more than rather than.” Add a specific benefit, such as having deeper conversations or feeling more relaxed.

예시: I prefer spending time with one close friend rather than with a large group. As an introvert, I sometimes feel uncomfortable in groups and find it difficult to join the conversation. When I am with one person, I can relax and have a deeper conversation about our experiences and problems.

제안: Use “invite,” not “invade,” because “invade” has a negative meaning. Say “on special occasions” rather than “in some occasions,” and give a natural example of what you would do at home. The answer should also use “I would invite” because the question asks about a general preference.

예시: Yes, I would invite my friends to my home on special occasions, such as Christmas or Easter. We could cook a meal together, play games, and chat with my family. I enjoy hosting friends because it feels more personal and relaxed than meeting outside.

제안: Begin with a direct opinion and organize the explanation clearly. Use “during difficult times” instead of “in bad time,” and avoid unclear expressions such as “survive from their struggling on their mind.” Explain that friends provide emotional support, advice, or companionship. Use the plural “people” and avoid repeating “share.”

예시: Friends are extremely important to me, especially during difficult times. I can talk to them about my problems, and their advice and emotional support help me feel less stressed. Good friends also remind us that we are not alone when we are struggling.

제안: Make your frequency clear because “mostly” and “occasionally” contradict each other. Say “I do not go out very often” if you are busy. Use the correct preposition “go to parks, the cinema, and malls,” and clarify whether you mean “work” rather than “walks.”

예시: I do not go out with my friends very often because I have classes and a busy schedule. However, when I have free time, we usually go to a park, the cinema, or a shopping mall. I try to meet them at least once or twice a month.

제안: The answer is direct, but it needs a little more detail to sound developed. Use articles and natural phrasing: “at the mall” and “in a park.” Explain why you prefer these places or mention what you usually do there.

예시: We usually meet at the mall or in a nearby park. The mall is convenient because there are many cafés and entertainment options, while the park is better when we want to walk and have a quiet conversation.

제안: Use parallel grammar after “like”: “playing games, cooking, reading books, and sharing experiences.” Correct “experience we on last week” to “experiences from the previous week.” Give one specific example of a typical activity and use a linking phrase to connect the activities.

예시: We usually do a variety of activities together, such as playing games, cooking, and reading. We also talk about our recent experiences and share news about our lives. For example, last weekend we cooked dinner together and watched a film afterward.

제안: Correct the pronouns and verb tense: if Ria is female, say “Her name is Ria” and “I have known her for the last ten years.” Do not use both “ten years” and “decades,” because they are inconsistent. Add one specific detail about how you met or how she has supported you.

예시: Yes, I have a close friend called Ria, whom I have known for the last ten years. We met at school and have stayed in touch ever since. She has always supported me when I have faced difficulties, so she is one of the most important people in my life.

× In past times, I uh, really get more closer with so many people and make them friends.

✓ In the past, I really got closer to many people and became friends with them.

Because the speaker is describing a past period, the past-tense forms got and became are required. The preposition to is used after closer when referring to people.

× I really get more closer with so many people.

✓ I really got closer to many people.

Closer is already a comparative adjective, so more should not be used before it. The correct form is got closer.

× It's depend on places.

✓ It depends on the place.

The subject it is third-person singular, so the present-tense verb must be depends, not depend.

× Some places are fully noise and there is no Peace of Mind there.

✓ Some places are very noisy, and there is no peace of mind there.

Noise is a noun, but an adjective is needed after are. The adjective noisy describes places. Very is the appropriate adverb to modify noisy; fully is not natural in this context.

× So we can meet or we can gather with their gather with friends there.

✓ So we cannot meet or gather with our friends there.

Their does not agree with the intended subject we. The possessive pronoun should be our. The repeated phrase gather with is also removed so that the sentence has a clear structure.

× So we can meet or we can gather with their gather with friends there.

✓ Therefore, we cannot meet or gather with our friends there.

The original sentence contains a repeated and incomplete phrase. Using one coordinated verb structure, meet or gather, makes the sentence grammatical and clear.

× In Group I am really feel uncomfortable because I am an introvert person.

✓ In a group, I really feel uncomfortable because I am an introverted person.

The verb am cannot be used directly before the base verb feel. Use the simple present form feel. Introverted is the adjective that describes a person.

× In Group I am really feel uncomfortable.

✓ In a group, I really feel uncomfortable.

A singular countable noun such as group needs an article when it is mentioned generally. The correct phrase is in a group.

× In Group I don't get anything to talk.

✓ In a group, I do not have anything to talk about.

The expression get anything to talk is not grammatically complete. The natural structure is have something to talk about.

× But if it's single person I can talk to him.

✓ But if it is a single person, I can talk to them.

The singular countable noun person requires the article a. A gender-neutral pronoun, them, can refer to a person when the person's gender is not specified.

× It's really helpful for me for communication with single one more than rather than.

✓ Communicating with one person is more helpful for me than communicating with a group.

A comparison requires two clear objects. The original sentence repeats more than and rather than and does not identify what is being compared. The structure more helpful than is complete and grammatical.

× Yeah, I will invade my friends to my house in some occasions like Christmas, Easter, autumn.

✓ Yeah, I will invite my friends to my house on some occasions, such as Christmas, Easter, and autumn.

The preposition on is used with occasions, as in on some occasions. Such as introduces examples more naturally than like in this formal list.

× I really like to spend my time with them in my family.

✓ I really like to spend time with them and with my family.

The preposition in is incorrect before my family in this meaning. Use with to show the people whose company the speaker enjoys.

× Friends are important when we are in bad time.

✓ Friends are important when we are having a difficult time.

The natural expression is have a difficult time, not be in bad time. Difficult time also requires the article a because it is a singular countable phrase.

× Friends are important when we are in bad time or we are in any depression that I'm if we have one friend we can share with.

✓ Friends are important when we are having a difficult time or feeling depressed because we can share our problems with them.

The original sentence combines several incomplete clauses and places that I am in the wrong position. Separating the ideas and using because creates a clear grammatical structure.

× If we have one friend we can share with, we can share our problems with him.

✓ If we have a friend whom we can talk to, we can share our problems with them.

The pronoun him assumes that the friend is male, although no gender is given. Them is appropriate when referring to a person whose gender is unspecified. The relative clause whom we can talk to is also grammatically complete.

× It's really helpful for the peoples if any person is struggling in their life.

✓ It is really helpful for people when they are struggling in life.

People is already the plural form of person, so peoples is incorrect here. The plural pronoun they agrees with people.

× They can survive from their struggling on their mind.

✓ They can overcome their struggles and reduce the stress on their minds.

The verb survive is not normally followed by from in this meaning. Overcome is suitable with struggles. The correct preposition is on before minds.

× I have to go with my friends in parks, cinema and malls.

✓ I go out with my friends to parks, the cinema, and malls.

Use to when describing destinations after go. The phrase go out with friends is also the appropriate structure for social activities.

× I have to go with my friends in parks, cinema and malls.

✓ I go out with my friends to parks, the cinema, and malls.

Cinema is a singular countable noun and needs the definite article the when referring to the activity or place generally. Parks and malls are plural and do not require an article here.

× But mostly, occasionally I go in with my friends because I have classes.

✓ However, I only occasionally go out with my friends because I have classes.

Mostly and occasionally express different frequencies and should not be used together in this sentence. The adverb only is placed before occasionally to make the limited frequency clear. Go out is the correct phrasal verb.

× Most of the time we meet at mall or any park.

✓ Most of the time, we meet at a mall or in a park.

Use at a mall for a meeting location and in a park for being inside a park. Both singular countable nouns need the article a.

× Most of the time we meet at mall or any park.

✓ Most of the time, we meet at a mall or in a park.

The singular countable nouns mall and park require the article a when they are used in a general meaning.

× Usually we do some interesting things like games, cooking or reading books or sharing our experience we on last week or in our life.

✓ Usually, we do some interesting things, such as playing games, cooking, reading books, or sharing our experiences from last week or from our lives.

Experiences should be plural because the speaker is referring to several events. Lives should also be plural because the subject is we.

× Usually we do some interesting things like games, cooking or reading books.

✓ Usually, we do some interesting things, such as playing games, cooking, or reading books.

The activities in this list should have parallel grammatical forms. Playing games, cooking, and reading books all function as gerund phrases.

× Sharing our experience we on last week or in our life.

✓ Sharing our experiences from last week or from our lives.

Use from to identify the source or time period of the experiences. On is not used before last week, and in our life is not appropriate for this meaning.

× Yeah, I have one friend, his name is Ria. She is will be my friend for last 10 years, decades.

✓ Yeah, I have one friend. Her name is Ria, and she has been my friend for the last 10 years.

Her is needed because Ria is identified as female. The original sentence incorrectly combines is and will be. The present perfect form has been describes a situation that began in the past and continues now.

× She is will be my friend for last 10 years, decades.

✓ She has been my friend for the last 10 years.

For a relationship that started in the past and continues to the present, use the present perfect form has been. Do not combine is with will be.

× She is will be my friend for last 10 years, decades.

✓ She has been my friend for the last 10 years.

Will be expresses a future situation, but the speaker is describing a friendship that has continued until now. The present perfect has been is therefore required.

× She is will be my friend for last 10 years, decades. So she's really helpful for me in all my life.

✓ She has been my friend for the last 10 years. She has been very helpful to me throughout my life.

Use for with a period of time, as in for the last 10 years. With helpful, to is more natural than for when identifying the person who receives help. Throughout is the appropriate preposition for the whole period of life.

× She is will be my friend for last 10 years, decades.

✓ She has been my friend for the last 10 years.

The phrase last 10 years refers to a specific period ending now, so it requires the definite article the.