Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly, then make the comparison more accurate and coherent. Use the past tense consistently with “used to meet” and avoid fillers such as “uh.” Also, say “during break time” rather than “in break time,” and explain more clearly that you now meet less frequently because everyone is busy.

예시: Yes, there is a clear difference. We used to meet every day at school, especially during break time, whereas nowadays we usually meet outside at weekends. Since we are all busy with our studies and other commitments, we can only get together when everyone is available.

제안: Use a clear topic sentence and avoid repeated or incomplete phrases such as “I think with if we have if one have.” Improve grammar by saying “quiet and comfortable places are suitable” and “each other’s conversations.” Give one specific example, such as a quiet café, to make the answer more effective.

예시: Quiet and comfortable places are usually the most suitable for meeting friends. In a noisy restaurant, for example, it can be difficult to hear each other and have a meaningful conversation. A quiet café or park is better because it allows people to relax and talk comfortably.

제안: State your preference more directly and avoid the unnatural phrase “I’m not having a group of friends.” Use “I have a small group of close friends” instead. Explain why you prefer a small group, and correct “the them” and “which are” to “them” and “who are.”

예시: I prefer spending time with a small group of friends rather than with a large group. I have two or three close and trustworthy friends, so I feel comfortable expressing my opinions around them. We usually go out together and explore new places in our hometown.

제안: Give a complete answer with a clear reason. “Oftenly” is incorrect; use “quite often” or “occasionally,” and say “invite my friends home” rather than “invite my friends to my home.” Avoid ending with “and” and explain what you usually do when they visit.

예시: Yes, I would invite my friends home occasionally, although not every week. I enjoy having them over because they can meet my family and we can relax in a familiar environment. We might have dinner together, watch a film, or simply chat.

제안: The main idea is relevant, but the sentence is too long and repetitive. Divide it into two or three sentences, use “a supportive and trustworthy friend” instead of “a good interest worthy friend,” and maintain the first-person perspective by saying “my problems” and “my difficult times.”

예시: Friends are extremely important to me because they support me during both good and difficult times. A trustworthy friend listens to my problems, gives me helpful advice, and encourages me when I feel stressed. I also enjoy spending time with them because they make my life more enjoyable.

제안: Answer in the present tense because the question asks about your current routine. Avoid repeating “on weekends,” and replace the confusing phrase “we all are busy in my in our life in studying” with “we are busy with our studies during the week.” Add a linking word such as “therefore” to connect the reason and result.

예시: Yes, I often go out with my friends, especially at weekends. We are busy with our studies during the week, so weekends are the most convenient time for us to meet. We usually explore different places in our hometown and try new food at restaurants or cafés.

제안: The answer provides several relevant and specific locations, which is good. However, avoid saying “as I told you earlier,” use “at the cinema” rather than “in theatre,” and use articles correctly in “a café or a restaurant.” Organize the places with linking words to make the response smoother.

예시: We usually meet in a few different places at weekends. We sometimes go to the cinema to watch a film, or meet at a café or restaurant to have something to eat. We also visit the shopping mall, where we can shop together and explore new places nearby.

제안: Give a complete answer and avoid fillers and repetition. The phrase “share about studies and other materials” should be changed to “discuss our studies and share study materials.” Also, finish the final idea and include one or two concrete activities, such as eating out or watching films.

예시: I usually talk with my friends about our studies and personal lives. We support each other when we have problems and share advice about difficult situations. Besides that, we enjoy eating out, watching films, and exploring different places together.

제안: The answer is relevant and includes a specific detail, but correct the verb tenses and pronouns. Say “I have known her since the third grade,” “she stands,” “she takes care,” and “her own sister.” Replace “her nature is very good” with the more natural “she has a kind personality,” and explain how the friendship has continued.

예시: Yes, I have known one of my closest friends since the third grade. She has a very kind personality, and we have stayed close because we always support each other in difficult times. She treats me like her own sister, and I really value our long-lasting friendship.

× In the past we used to meet daily in school and we often spend time together.

✓ In the past, we used to meet at school every day, and we often spent time together.

The phrase in the past refers to a completed past routine, so spend should be in the past tense: spent. The preposition at is more natural with meet.

× We often spent time together in break time at school.

✓ We often spent time together during break time at school.

During is the appropriate preposition for an activity that happens within a period of time.

× But currently we plan to meet outside and also it only depends on weekends if they are free or I am free.

✓ Nowadays, we plan to meet outside, but we can only meet on weekends when they and I are free.

The original sentence contains an unclear structure and an unnecessary also. Combining the ideas with but and when makes the relationship between them clear.

× I think with if we have if one have to meet with their friends, comfortable in quiet places are good.

✓ I think that if someone wants to meet their friends, quiet and comfortable places are suitable.

The original sentence contains repeated if clauses and an incomplete word order. A clear conditional structure is if someone wants to meet, followed by the subject quiet and comfortable places.

× If one have to meet with their friends, comfortable in quiet places are good.

✓ If someone has to meet their friends, quiet and comfortable places are good.

The singular subject someone requires the singular verb has. Also, quiet and comfortable must come before places because they describe the noun.

× Comfortable in quiet places are good.

✓ Quiet and comfortable places are good.

The adjectives quiet and comfortable should directly modify places. The original word order incorrectly places comfortable after the preposition in.

× It would be difficult to hear each others talks.

✓ It would be difficult to hear each other talk.

Each other is the correct reciprocal pronoun. After hear, the base verb talk is used to describe what the people are doing.

× What they are discussing about their life.

✓ What they are discussing about their lives.

The plural noun lives is needed because the sentence refers to the lives of several people. Discuss can also be used without about: what they are discussing in their lives.

× I'm not having group of friends.

✓ I do not have a group of friends.

The singular countable noun group requires the article a. Do not have is the natural present-tense form for describing possession.

× But I have few friends that are close and trustworthy to me.

✓ But I have a few friends who are close to me and trustworthy.

A few means some and is appropriate in this positive statement. Who is preferred for people, and the adjective trustworthy does not normally require to me.

× I prefer to spend time with the them.

✓ I prefer to spend time with them.

The is an unnecessary article before the pronoun them. Articles are not used before personal pronouns.

× There are two or three friends of mine which are very close to me.

✓ There are two or three friends of mine who are very close to me.

Who should be used instead of which when referring to people.

× Not regularly, but oftenly I invite my friends to my home.

✓ Not regularly, but I often invite my friends to my home.

Oftenly is not the standard adverb; the correct form is often. Placing often before the main verb is also natural.

× It is a personal thing to invite friends at home.

✓ It is a personal thing to invite friends to my home.

Use invite someone to a place, not invite someone at a place. The possessive adjective my makes the intended location clear.

× But they can socialize with family members also and.

✓ However, they can also socialize with my family members.

The original sentence ends with an unnecessary and and has an incomplete structure. Also should be placed before the main verb, and my clarifies whose family members are meant.

× My friends are very important to me, they stand with me in every situation.

✓ My friends are very important to me because they stand by me in every situation.

The original sentence joins two complete sentences with only a comma. Because correctly connects the reason, and stand by is the natural expression for supporting someone.

× A good interest worthy friend is important to you.

✓ A good and trustworthy friend is important to me.

Interest worthy is not a natural adjective in this context. Trustworthy clearly expresses the intended meaning, and me is consistent with the speaker's point of view.

× He or she can share each problem and also listens to your problems.

✓ He or she can share every problem with you and listen to your problems.

Every is more natural than each when referring generally to all problems. The sentence also needs a parallel verb form: share and listen.

× A good friend also helps to socialize with you in your bad times and also take care of you.

✓ A good friend also helps you socialize during difficult times and takes care of you.

The singular subject a good friend requires takes, not take. The revised sentence also avoids repeating also and uses the natural expression during difficult times.

× I prefer going out with my friends but on weekends because it was the time when we all are busy in my in our life in studying.

✓ I prefer going out with my friends, but only on weekends because we are all busy with our studies during the week.

This answer describes a current routine, so was should be changed to are. Our is the correct possessive adjective for we, and busy with our studies is the correct expression.

× We are all busy in our life in studying.

✓ We are all busy with our studies during the week.

The correct collocation is busy with, not busy in. During the week clearly expresses the relevant period.

× We often meet on weekends and we try to explore new places in our hometown and also would like to eat some delicious food.

✓ We often meet on weekends, try to explore new places in our hometown, and like to eat delicious food.

The sentence describes a regular present routine, so would like should be changed to like. The verbs are also placed in a parallel structure.

× We can meet in theatre.

✓ We can meet in the theater.

Theater is a singular countable noun and needs an article. The definite article the is suitable when referring to a particular theater or the usual theater.

× We prefer to try some delicious food in cafe or a restaurant.

✓ We prefer to try some delicious food in a cafe or a restaurant.

A singular countable noun such as cafe needs an article. The article a is already correctly used before restaurant.

× The thing I usually do with my friends is to share about studies and other materials.

✓ The things I usually do with my friends include talking about our studies and sharing other materials.

Talk about is the correct expression for discussing a subject. Share does not normally take about in this structure, and the plural things agrees with the list of activities.

× We also eat together and also do lot of.

✓ We also eat together and do a lot of fun activities.

The quantifier expression is a lot of, which requires the article a. The original sentence is incomplete because a lot of must be followed by a noun.

× We also eat together and also do lot of.

✓ We also eat together and do a lot of fun activities.

The original sentence is incomplete because a lot of is not followed by a noun. Adding fun activities completes the verb phrase do a lot of fun activities.

× Yes, I remembered I have one friend that is with me from third class.

✓ Yes, I remember that I have one friend who has been with me since third grade.

The speaker is introducing a current fact, so remember is more appropriate than remembered. Has been shows that the friendship began in the past and continues now, and since is used with a starting point.

× She has been with me from third class.

✓ She has been with me since third grade.

Since is used to identify the starting point of an ongoing situation. Third grade is the natural expression in this context.

× She stand with me in every situation.

✓ She stands by me in every situation.

The third-person singular subject she requires the verb stands. Stands by is the natural expression for supports.

× She take care of me.

✓ She takes care of me.

The subject she is third-person singular, so take must become takes.

× She treats me like his own sister.

✓ She treats me like her own sister.

The possessive pronoun must agree with the female subject she. Therefore, her is correct instead of his.