Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答基本切题，但语法和表达不自然。可以先直接回答“Yes, I have”，然后说明是在什么平台看到广告、买了什么以及原因。注意使用正确时态和句型：用“when I am watching TikTok”而不是“when I use my phone to watch TikTok”，用“if I see an advertisement for something I need”表达条件。

예시: Yes, I have. Once, I saw an advertisement for a phone case while watching TikTok, and I bought it because I needed a new one. The design looked attractive, and it was reasonably priced.

제안: 回答观点明确，但有明显的词汇和语法错误。应使用“see advertisements”而不是“say advertisement”，并用“when I open an app”描述场景；“an app”前要使用an。建议用“as a result”或“which”连接广告带来的影响，使答案更连贯。

예시: Yes, I see advertisements quite often, especially on my phone. Whenever I open an app, an advertisement usually appears and asks me to tap the screen. They can be annoying because they sometimes take me to another website or app by accident.

제안: 答案能够表达“记不清”，但开头“To bring out instead”和“weakened impression”不符合英语习惯。可以直接说“No, not really”或“I can't remember any clearly”，然后补充一个合理原因，例如小时候不太关注广告。注意使用“make an impression on me”和“remember”。

예시: No, not really. I remember seeing advertisements for toys when I was a child, but none of them made a strong impression on me. I was more interested in playing with my friends than watching commercials.

제안: 回答切题，并提到了地铁上的广告，但存在单复数和介词重复问题。应说“I often take the subway”或“I often travel by subway”，并用“on the walls”或“inside the carriages”具体说明广告的位置。可以再补充广告通常宣传什么，增强内容。

예시: Yes, I do. I often take the subway, and there are advertisements on the walls and inside the carriages. Most of them promote new films, mobile apps, or local shops.

제안: 回答立场清楚，也提供了原因，但“advertisement”应使用复数“advertisements”，“start an app”应改为“open an app”，“jump to the abs”表达不清楚，应说“take me to another app or website”。建议用“because”连接原因，并准确描述误触广告的情况。

예시: No, I generally dislike advertisements, especially on my phone. Whenever I open an app, pop-up ads appear and interrupt what I am doing. Sometimes I tap one by accident, and it takes me to another website or app.

제안: 答案观点清楚，内容也符合题目，但可以使用更自然的表达来提高词汇和句型质量。将“the advertisement tells us to do something good”改为“I like advertisements that encourage people to do positive things”，并补充一个具体例子和个人感受。

예시: I like advertisements that encourage people to do positive things. For example, public service advertisements about recycling or helping people in need can be meaningful. They may inspire viewers to protect the environment and care more about others.

× Yes, when I use my phone to watch TikTok if some advertisement of something was I need I maybe buy it.

✓ Yes, when I use my phone to watch TikTok, if there is an advertisement for something I need, I may buy it.

原句中“when”和“if”的结构混乱，而且“something was I need”不是正确的定语从句结构。可以使用“something I need”表示“我需要的东西”，并用“if there is...”构成完整的条件句。

× Yes, when I use my phone to watch TikTok if some advertisement of something was I need I maybe buy it.

✓ Yes, when I use my phone to watch TikTok, if there is an advertisement for something I need, I may buy it.

“maybe”是副词，不能直接放在主语“I”后面当作情态动词使用。表示“可能会”时，应使用情态动词“may”，结构是“I may buy it”。

× Yes, when I use my phone to watch TikTok if some advertisement of something was I need I maybe buy it.

✓ Yes, when I use my phone to watch TikTok, if there is an advertisement for something I need, I may buy it.

表示“关于某种东西的广告”时，通常使用“an advertisement for something”，而不是“an advertisement of something”。

× Yes, when I use my phone to watch TikTok if some advertisement of something was I need I maybe buy it.

✓ Yes, when I use my phone to watch TikTok, if there is an advertisement for something I need, I may buy it.

“advertisement”是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。这里使用“an advertisement”更合适，因为“advertisement”以元音音素开头。

× Yes, I often say advertisement on my phone when you start a app you always see some advertisement and ask you to touch to jump to other apps.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone. When you start an app, you always see some advertisements that ask you to tap them to open other apps.

“advertisement”是可数名词。泛指多个广告时应使用复数“advertisements”。同时，主语“advertisements”是复数，所以后面使用“ask”，而不是单数形式。

× Yes, I often say advertisement on my phone when you start a app you always see some advertisement and ask you to touch to jump to other apps.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone. When you start an app, you always see some advertisements that ask you to tap them to open other apps.

“app”以元音音素开头，所以应使用“an app”，不能使用“a app”。“advertisement”在这里表示可数名词，也需要使用复数或带冠词的单数形式。

× Yes, I often say advertisement on my phone when you start a app you always see some advertisement and ask you to touch to jump to other apps.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone. When you start an app, you always see some advertisements that ask you to tap them to open other apps.

“ask you”前面需要明确的主语。使用关系代词“that”指代“advertisements”，并使用宾格代词“them”指代这些广告，可以使句子结构完整、指代清楚。

× Yes, I often say advertisement on my phone when you start a app you always see some advertisement and ask you to touch to jump to other apps.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone. When you start an app, you always see some advertisements that ask you to tap them to open other apps.

原句把多个独立分句直接连接在一起，缺少适当的标点和连接结构。可以拆成两个句子，并使用“that ask you...”连接后面的信息。

× To bring out instead, I had a only weakened impression on those advertisements when I was a child. So I can't remember either very clearly.

✓ To be honest, I only had a weak impression of those advertisements when I was a child, so I can't remember them very clearly.

“To bring out instead”不能构成自然的句首表达；这里需要使用完整、合适的表达“To be honest”。另外，原句的两个分句连接不自然，可以用逗号和“so”连接。

× To bring out instead, I had a only weakened impression on those advertisements when I was a child. So I can't remember either very clearly.

✓ To be honest, I only had a weak impression of those advertisements when I was a child, so I can't remember them very clearly.

“weakened”通常表示“被削弱的”，这里想表达的是“印象很淡”，应使用形容词“weak”。“very clearly”修饰动词“remember”，使用副词形式是正确的。

× To bring out instead, I had a only weakened impression on those advertisements when I was a child. So I can't remember either very clearly.

✓ To be honest, I only had a weak impression of those advertisements when I was a child, so I can't remember them very clearly.

副词“only”应放在它所修饰的动词短语前，即“only had”，而不能放在冠词“a”后面。正确结构是“I only had a weak impression”。

× To bring out instead, I had a only weakened impression on those advertisements when I was a child. So I can't remember either very clearly.

✓ To be honest, I only had a weak impression of those advertisements when I was a child, so I can't remember them very clearly.

表示“对某事的印象”时，通常使用“an impression of something”，所以这里应将“on”改为“of”。

× To bring out instead, I had a only weakened impression on those advertisements when I was a child. So I can't remember either very clearly.

✓ To be honest, I only had a weak impression of those advertisements when I was a child, so I can't remember them very clearly.

“remember”后面需要宾语。这里指代前面的“those advertisements”，应使用宾格代词“them”。“either”不能在这里代替这些广告。

× Yes I often take a subways and there are many advertisements on the on it

✓ Yes, I often take the subway, and there are many advertisements on it.

“subways”是复数，不能和冠词“a”一起使用。这里表示通常乘坐地铁这一交通系统，使用固定表达“take the subway”最自然。

× Yes I often take a subways and there are many advertisements on the on it

✓ Yes, I often take the subway, and there are many advertisements on it.

“subway”在这里表示地铁这一交通系统，通常使用定冠词“the”，构成“take the subway”。

× Yes I often take a subways and there are many advertisements on the on it

✓ Yes, I often take the subway, and there are many advertisements on it.

原句中的“on the on it”重复且结构错误。表示广告位于地铁上时，使用“on it”即可。

× No, I don't like advertisement especially on my phone. When you start an app, there is always advertisement and if you touch your phone too close either, they will make you jump to the abs.

✓ No, I don't like advertisements, especially on my phone. When you start an app, there are always advertisements, and if you touch your phone too closely, they will make you jump to other apps.

“advertisement”是可数名词。泛指广告时应使用复数“advertisements”，或者使用“an advertisement”。另外，复数“advertisements”应与“there are”搭配。

× No, I don't like advertisement especially on my phone. When you start an app, there is always advertisement and if you touch your phone too close either, they will make you jump to the abs.

✓ No, I don't like advertisements, especially on my phone. When you start an app, there are always advertisements, and if you touch your phone too closely, they will make you jump to other apps.

这里是在泛指广告，所以两处“advertisement”都应使用复数“advertisements”。相应地，表示“有广告”时应使用复数结构“there are advertisements”。

× No, I don't like advertisement especially on my phone. When you start an app, there is always advertisement and if you touch your phone too close either, they will make you jump to the abs.

✓ No, I don't like advertisements, especially on my phone. When you start an app, there are always advertisements, and if you touch your phone too closely, they will make you jump to other apps.

“touch”是动词，需要副词修饰。应使用副词“closely”，而不是形容词“close”。不过在实际表达中，“accidentally”可能比“too closely”更符合想表达的意思。

× No, I don't like advertisement especially on my phone. When you start an app, there is always advertisement and if you touch your phone too close either, they will make you jump to the abs.

✓ No, I don't like advertisements, especially on my phone. When you start an app, there are always advertisements, and if you touch your phone too closely, they will make you jump to other apps.

“either”不能放在“touch your phone too close”后面表达这里的意思。条件句中可以直接说“if you touch your phone too closely”，或者使用“if you accidentally touch your phone”。

× Maybe the advertisement tells us to do something good such as to help each other and keep the environment clean.

✓ Maybe advertisements tell us to do something good, such as helping each other and keeping the environment clean.

“such as”后面通常接名词或动名词。为了保持并列结构，应使用“helping”和“keeping”，而不是“to help”和“keep”。两个并列成分也应保持形式一致。