Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答有直接回应问题，也表达了不喜欢广告的态度，但语法和搭配错误较多，例如“watch advertisements”应改为“see advertisements”，“it is look”应改为“they look”，“it must be from some”意思不清。建议使用清晰的结构：频率 + 出现的位置 + 个人感受，并用“however”连接转折。

예시: Yes, I see advertisements quite often when I use my phone or computer. They usually appear on social media, shopping apps, and websites. To be honest, I find them a little distracting, although some of them are useful.

제안: 回答提到了童年糖果广告和长颈鹿，内容相关，但“this advertisement is about”时态不自然，且“colorful”“a lot of color”“very beautiful”重复，缺少广告为何令人印象深刻的具体原因。建议用过去时描述，并补充广告的画面或对自己的影响。

예시: Yes, I remember a candy advertisement that I saw when I was a child. It featured a giraffe eating brightly colored candy, which made the commercial fun and memorable. I liked it because the animation was bright and cheerful.

제안: 回答基本涉及地铁、汽车和火车，但有多处表达不清，如“to be honest to know”“it is very euro”“boys supplying”，影响理解；同时“don't always see”重复。建议先明确回答“在地铁上很多，在其他交通工具上较少”，再给出具体例子，并减少犹豫词。

예시: Yes, I see quite a lot of advertisements on public transport, especially in the subway. They are usually placed on the walls, inside the carriages, or near the ticket gates. However, I do not notice as many advertisements on buses or trains.

제안: 回答有明确的条件对比：不喜欢医院和交通工具上的广告，但认为购物应用中的广告有用。不过“it is really depends”应改为“it really depends”，“on the hospital”不自然，句子也缺少完整连接。建议用“whereas”连接两种情况，并说明购物广告为什么有用。

예시: It really depends on where I see them. I dislike advertisements in hospitals and on public transport because they can be distracting. However, advertisements on shopping apps can be useful because they help me find discounts and new products.

제안: 回答选择了服装广告，方向正确，也提到了鞋子、衣服和裤子，但“prefer to look”应改为“prefer looking at”，“the Shenzhai very good person”意思不清，可能想表达“模特穿得很好看”。建议描述广告中吸引你的具体元素，如模特、搭配、折扣和产品图片。

예시: I like fashion advertisements, especially those for shoes and casual clothes. I am attracted to ads that show stylish models wearing well-matched outfits. They often give me ideas about what to buy, especially when there is a discount.

제안: 回答直接承认受广告影响购买，并提到花钱过多这一结果，内容有一定发展。但“always bought”应根据经历改为“have bought”或“sometimes buy”，“because it is to show”表达错误，“I must be reduced shopping”应改为“reduce my shopping”。建议加入一个具体购买例子，并说明广告如何影响决定。

예시: Yes, I have bought things because of advertisements, especially clothes and skincare products. For example, I once bought a jacket after seeing an advertisement with a limited-time discount. However, I sometimes spend more than I planned, so I am trying to shop more carefully.

× I always watch some advertisements on my phone or when I use some applications or on websites.

✓ I always watch some advertisements on my phone, when I use applications, or on websites.

原句中“on my phone”“when I use applications”和“on websites”的结构不平行，连接关系不清楚。并列成分最好使用相似的结构。

× I think it is look a little noisy.

✓ I think they look a little noisy.

情态动词或系动词后面不能使用“is look”。这里的主语是复数“advertisements”，所以应使用“they look”。“look”在这里是一般现在时动词。

× It must be from some.

✓ They must come from somewhere.

“from some”结构不完整。“somewhere”表示“某个地方”，且主语“advertisements”是复数，所以使用“They must come from somewhere”。

× I still remember that this advertisement is about a candy.

✓ I still remember that this advertisement is about candy.

“candy”通常表示糖果这一类不可数事物时，不需要使用不定冠词“a”。如果指一种糖果，也可以说“a type of candy”。

× It has a lot of color, and it is very beautiful.

✓ It has a lot of colors, and it is very beautiful.

这里描述糖果有多种颜色，应使用可数名词复数“colors”。“a lot of”后面既可以接可数名词复数，也可以接不可数名词。

× To be honest to know, I don't always see some advertisements on trains or some transport.

✓ To be honest, I don't always see advertisements on trains or other forms of transport.

“to know”在这里多余，使句子结构不完整。“transport”表示交通运输这一概念时通常不可数，可以说“other forms of transport”。另外，在否定句中通常不需要使用“some”。

× It is very euro on the subways.

✓ There are a lot of advertisements on the subways.

这里需要表达“地铁上有很多广告”，应使用“There are”结构。因为“advertisements”是复数，所以使用“are”而不是“is”。

× In the car or boys supplying or trains, I don't always see a lot of advertisements.

✓ In cars, on buses, or on trains, I don't always see a lot of advertisements.

表示在汽车里使用“in cars”，表示在公交车和火车上使用“on buses”和“on trains”。原句中的介词和交通工具表达不正确。

× I think it is really depends on the situation.

✓ I think it really depends on the situation.

“depend”是实义动词，不能和“is”直接连用。主语“it”是第三人称单数，所以应使用“depends”。

× If it's on the hospital, you know, or some transport such as subways or trains or planes, I really don't like this.

✓ If it's in a hospital or on public transport, such as subways, trains, or planes, I really don't like it.

表示在医院内部使用“in a hospital”，表示在公共交通工具上使用“on public transport”。“this”指代前面提到的广告时不如“it”自然。

× But if it's on the some shopping app, I think it is very useful for me too.

✓ But if it's on a shopping app, I think it is very useful for me too.

“some”不能和“the”同时放在名词前面。这里表示任意一个购物应用，应使用不定冠词“a”。

× I prefer to look some clothes advertisements.

✓ I prefer to look at some clothing advertisements.

动词短语“look at”表示“观看或查看”，不能省略介词“at”。“clothing advertisements”比“clothes advertisements”更自然。

× I really want to buy it.

✓ I really want to buy them.

如果“them”指代前面提到的鞋子、衣服或裤子等复数物品，应使用复数代词“them”，不能使用单数代词“it”。

× I always bought something because it is to show on an advertisement.

✓ I have bought something because it was shown in an advertisement.

问题使用现在完成时“Have you ever bought...”，回答经历时应使用“I have bought”。广告中“某物被展示”需要使用被动语态“was shown”，并且与过去发生的购买行为保持时态一致。

× Because it is to show on an advertisement.

✓ Because it was shown in an advertisement.

“某物被展示”是被动意义，应使用“be + 过去分词”。因此应为“was shown”，而不是“is to show”。介词方面应说“in an advertisement”。

× I always spend a lot of money in a month.

✓ I spend a lot of money every month.

表示“每个月”这一频率时，应使用“every month”，而不是“in a month”。同时，描述习惯时使用一般现在时“spend”更自然。

× I think I must be reduced shopping.

✓ I think I must reduce my shopping.

情态动词“must”后面必须接动词原形，因此应使用“reduce”。这里是“我减少购物”，主语自己执行动作，应使用主动语态“must reduce”，而不是被动结构。