Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 直接回答“经常看到”，并使用正确表达，例如“see advertisements everywhere”，不要说“say at what advertisement”。注意 advertisement 的复数形式 advertisements，以及语序和冠词。可以用“especially when...”补充出现广告的场景，再说明自己的感受。尽量减少 uh 等填充词，并避免重复“always”。

예시: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer. They appear when I watch short videos or visit certain websites. I find them quite annoying, especially when they interrupt the content I am watching.

제안: 先明确回答是哪一个广告，再说明它为什么令人印象深刻。应使用“made a strong impression on me”或“was memorable”，而不是“made me impressive”。注意时态：过去的童年经历使用一般过去时，例如“made”和“saw”。最后一句意思不清楚，可以具体说明广告中的音乐、画面或人物。

예시: Yes. When I was a child, a Coca-Cola advertisement on TV made a strong impression on me. It had an energetic song and showed people enjoying themselves together. I still remember it because it made the drink look refreshing and exciting.

제안: 先用“see advertisements”直接回答，不要使用意思不清的“say”或“report”。应正确表达交通工具，例如“on trains and buses”，并补充广告通常出现的位置，如车厢内、车站或车身外。避免重复“trains”和“always”，并加入 because 或 especially 使答案更连贯。

예시: Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on public transport. They are usually placed inside trains and buses, as well as on the outside of vehicles. I notice them most often during my daily commute because I have plenty of time to look at them.

제안: 观点很明确，但需要纠正 advertisement 的复数形式，并将不完整的“because it always can”改成完整句。可以说明广告具体如何令人烦恼，例如自动弹出、打断视频或占用时间。使用“especially when...”连接细节，答案会更自然有效。

예시: Honestly, I do not really like advertisements. I find them annoying, especially when they pop up automatically on my phone or interrupt a video. However, I do not mind useful advertisements if they provide information about discounts or new products.

제안: 内容基本切题，但应使用“advertisements for...”来说明广告类型，并将“Eat like”改为“For example”。注意品牌分类：Nike 和 Adidas 主要是运动服装或鞋类品牌，而 Coca-Cola 是饮料品牌。可以补充喜欢这些广告的原因，例如设计时尚、画面有活力或能展示产品特点。

예시: I like advertisements for clothes, shoes, and drinks. For example, I enjoy Nike and Adidas advertisements because they often look energetic and stylish. I also like Coca-Cola commercials when they have catchy music and attractive visuals.

제안: 应使用现在完成时的正确形式“have bought”，并说明具体购买了什么、在哪里看到广告以及购买原因。可以把“when I after I say”改为“after I saw the advertisement”。“Coca-Cola is happy”不符合语境，应改为“the advertisement looked fun”或“the drink looked refreshing”，并减少重复和停顿。

예시: Yes, I have bought Coca-Cola because of an advertisement. I saw a TV commercial showing people enjoying the drink on a hot day, and it made the product look refreshing. I wanted to try it, so I bought a bottle when I went shopping.

× I often say at what advertisement, uh, on my phone it's everywhere.

✓ I often see advertisements on my phone; they’re everywhere.

“Advertisement”是可数名词，这里表示广告这一类事物，通常用复数“advertisements”。另外，前面的“what”不需要使用。改正后的句子结构更完整。

× When I watch the short videos and some websites, the advertisement is always annoying.

✓ When I watch short videos or visit some websites, advertisements are always annoying.

这里泛指许多广告，应该使用复数“advertisements”，所以谓语动词也要用“are”。“websites”不能和“watch”搭配，应该说“visit websites”。

× When I was a child, the advertisement on TV makes me very impressive.

✓ When I was a child, the advertisement on TV made a strong impression on me.

“When I was a child”表示过去的时间，因此“makes”应改为过去式“made”。“Impressive”表示“令人印象深刻的”，不能用来描述人的感受；这里应使用“made a strong impression on me”。

× The advertisement on TV makes me very impressive.

✓ The advertisement on TV made a strong impression on me.

“Impressive”描述事物，表示“令人印象深刻的”；描述人的感受应使用“impressed”。本句使用固定表达“make a strong impression on me”更自然。

× I always say the advertisement on trains, trains and buses.

✓ I always see advertisements on trains and buses.

这里谈论公共交通工具上的许多广告，所以“advertisement”应使用复数“advertisements”。“trains”重复了一次，应删除。

× I always see advertisements on trains and buses.

✓ I always see advertisements on trains and buses.

这里“on trains and buses”表示“在火车和公交车上”，介词“on”使用正确。修改后的句子保留了正确的介词搭配。

× It always reports the reports beside it.

✓ The advertisements are always displayed beside the tracks.

广告是“被展示”，不是主动“展示别的东西”，所以应使用被动语态“are displayed”。主语“advertisements”是复数，因此使用“are”。

× I don't like advertisement because it's always annoying.

✓ I don't like advertisements because they are always annoying.

这里泛指广告，应使用复数“advertisements”。复数主语不能使用“it”，应改为复数代词“they”，谓语也应改为“are”。

× It always auto put on my phone.

✓ They are always automatically put on my phone.

“Automatically”是副词，应放在过去分词“put”前面。这里广告被放到手机上，应该使用被动语态“are put”；因为“advertisements”是复数，所以用“are”。

× Because it always can.

✓ Because they can always appear on my phone.

“Can”后面必须接动词原形，不能单独使用。这里补充“appear”后，句子结构完整；“they”指代复数的广告。

× Yeah, it always can. It always auto put on my phone.

✓ They can always appear on my phone, and they are automatically displayed there.

原句有不完整句子和被动语态错误。“can”后需要动词，“are displayed”表示“被展示”，使句子结构完整。

× I'd like advertisements about shopping and shoes and some drinks.

✓ I'd like advertisements about shopping, shoes, and drinks.

这里是在列举一般类别，不需要在“shoes”和“drinks”前加冠词。使用逗号分隔并列项目，句子更清楚。

× Eat like Coca-Cola and Nike and Adidas.

✓ I like advertisements for products such as Coca-Cola, Nike, and Adidas.

“Eat like”不能构成表达个人喜好的完整句子。应使用主语“I”加动词“like”，并用“such as”引出例子。

× I have both Coca-Cola.

✓ I have bought Coca-Cola.

“Have”后面如果表示现在完成时，应接过去分词。动词“buy”的过去分词是“bought”，不是“both”。

× I have bought Coca-Cola when I saw the advertisement on TV.

✓ I bought Coca-Cola after I saw the advertisement on TV.

这里描述过去发生的一件具体事情，所以两个动作都使用一般过去时：“bought”和“saw”。“After”可以清楚地表达两个过去动作的先后顺序。

× I looked at at their drinks.

✓ I looked at their drinks.

固定搭配是“look at”，只需要一个“at”。重复使用介词会造成语法错误。

× Coca-Cola is very happy and cool and I want it.

✓ The Coca-Cola advertisement made the drink look fun and appealing, so I wanted to try it.

“Happy”通常描述人的情绪，不能自然地描述饮料。描述产品时可以使用“fun”或“appealing”。由于事情发生在过去，“want”应改为过去式“wanted”。

× Coca-Cola is very is very happy and cool and want it.

✓ The advertisement makes Coca-Cola look fun and appealing, and I want to try it.

“Coca-Cola”是单数，若使用一般现在时，谓语应为“makes”，不能使用“want”。“Want”真正的主语是“I”，因此应说“I want”。