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제안: 回答要更自然、句子更准确，避免词汇和语法错误；使用主题句后用1–2个支持细节，并用连词衔接。可以把“advisement/ads/subscription”等词用对并修正时态和词形。

예시: Yes, I see a lot of ads on my phone and computer because I don’t have subscriptions. For example, YouTube often shows 15-second video ads, and Spotify plays audio ads between songs, so I see or hear them several times a day.

제안: 内容需要更清晰具体，先用主题句说明印象深刻的广告，再用具体细节（画面、声音、原因）解释为什么记得，并修正词汇和语法错误。尽量不要使用含糊表达。

예시: Yes, one TV ad stuck with me from childhood: it featured a talking donut that walked around and ended up crying. I remember it because the animation was strange and the music was very catchy, so it stayed in my mind.

제안: 回答要更准确地表达因果关系并使用恰当词汇（例如 revenue, companies, passengers）。先给出直接回答，然后用一两句具体理由支持，并加连接词使逻辑清楚。

예시: Yes, there is a lot of advertising on public transport nowadays because companies want to earn extra revenue. Therefore, they place posters and digital ads inside trains and stations to catch passengers’ attention.

제안: 表达要更流畅并避免重复，先给出简短观点，再解释原因并用数字或具体场景支持。修正语法和时态，去掉口头填充词（uh）。

예시: Not really. I find ads annoying because they interrupt videos or articles; for example, I often have to wait 10 to 13 seconds before I can skip an ad, which is frustrating when I just want to watch something quickly.

제안: 内容要更准确并清楚表达喜好原因，使用正确词汇（e.g. animal ads, cute pets）和句子结构。先简短回答喜欢的类型，再举例说明并解释原因。

예시: I like advertisements that feature animals, especially dogs and cats, because I love pets. For instance, if a short ad shows a playful puppy or a funny cat, I usually stop and watch it.

× I often see advisement on YouTube or Spotify because I don't have a subscription so I have to watch short apps.

✓ I often see advertisements on YouTube or Spotify because I don't have a subscription so I have to watch short ads.

句中使用了错误的名词形式："advisement" 和 "apps" 不符合语境。应使用复数名词 "advertisements" 或缩写 "ads" 来表示多则广告；"apps"（应用程序）与语境不符，应为 "ads"（广告）。建议多练习常见名词的正确形式与语义搭配。

× For example on YouTube there are sometimes 15 second video ads and on Spotify I got adult ads.

✓ For example, on YouTube there are sometimes 15-second video ads and on Spotify I get audio ads.

句子时态和词汇不准确：应使用现在时描述常态（"I get" 而不是过去时 "I got"），并且 "adult ads" 可能是拼写或词不达意，应为 "audio ads"（音频广告）或明确为 "ads for adults"。同时形容词复合词要用连字符（"15-second"）。建议注意常态描述用现在时，检查词汇是否表达准确。

× I remember that an ads on TV and it shows a donut it can speak and something across the Donuts and the Donuts were crying.

✓ I remember an ad on TV. It showed a donut that could speak and something happened around the donut, and the donut was crying.

原句中有冠词与复数错误（"an ads" 应为 "an ad"），代词与句子结构混乱。描述过去的事件应使用过去时（"showed", "could"）。另外重复不必要的复数（"Donuts"）应统一为单数或复数并一致。建议分成短句，注意冠词和时态一致。

× I don't know what it mean but I precious.

✓ I don't know what it meant, but I found it touching.

句子结构和词汇使用不当："what it mean" 应为过去时 "what it meant"；"I precious" 不是正确表达，可能想说 "I found it precious/touching"。建议用恰当的形容词或短语表达感受，并注意时态一致。

× Yes, more and more advertising on public transport because the company wants to earn some version site.

✓ Yes, there is more and more advertising on public transport because companies want to earn some revenue.

原句缺少存在结构（"there is"），并且 "the company" 改为复数或泛指 "companies" 更合适；"version site" 明显是用词错误，应为 "revenue"（收入）。建议使用存在句型表数量变化，并注意词汇选择。

× So I think they need to catch every moment that people see.

✓ So I think they need to catch every moment when people see them.

原句中 "that people see" 结构不完整，缺少宾语；将其改为 "when people see them" 或 "when people are looking" 更自然。建议使用完整的从句并补足代词指代。

× Not really, because when sometimes I really want to see something, the advertisement open and uh, I need to wait for 10 to 13 seconds, so I need I can't see my things.

✓ Not really, because sometimes when I really want to see something, the advertisement opens and I have to wait 10 to 13 seconds, so I can't see what I want.

原句副词位置混乱（"when sometimes" 应改为 "sometimes when"），动词形式需用第三人单数（"the advertisement opens"），并且有冗余和结构错误（"I need I can't see my things"）应改为 "I can't see what I want"。建议理清副词位置，注意主谓一致和简洁表达。

× I think maybe I love to watch song animal advice because I very love dogs or cats so if it's some short video about the kids I will stop and watch them.

✓ I think maybe I love to watch short animal videos because I really love dogs and cats, so if there's a short video about animals I will stop and watch it.

原句词序与词汇错误多："song animal advice" 无意义，应为 "short animal videos" 或 "animal clips"；"I very love" 应为 "I really love"；"about the kids" 应为 "about animals"，且代词数需一致（"it" 指视频）。建议学习常用形容词顺序和固定搭配（"really love"），并确保代词一致性。