Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Use correct tense and a more natural phrasing. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on my phone and computer. For example, many videos and apps show short ads before the content, so I often skip them.

제안: Answer directly and use simple past tense. Give any specific memory or say you do not remember clearly, then offer a brief reason or example to enrich the answer with a linking word.

예시: I’m not sure I remember a specific ad from my childhood. However, I recall seeing colorful cartoon commercials on TV that caught my attention because they used catchy songs.

제안: Correct tense and pronunciation and organize your answer: a clear topic sentence then one specific example with a linking word. Use precise names only if you are confident, otherwise describe the ad content.

예시: Yes, I often see advertising on trains and buses. For example, last month on a plane I noticed a large poster promoting a scenic island resort, and the bright photos really caught my eye.

제안: Give a direct opinion first, then a reason and a short example. Use linking words (because, so) and correct verb forms. Keep it concise and avoid filler phrases.

예시: I don’t really like most advertisements because they interrupt videos. For example, when I watch online clips I usually skip ads as soon as the skip button appears.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the type of ads you prefer, then give a specific reason and an example. Use more precise vocabulary and avoid hesitation words.

예시: I prefer meaningful or funny advertisements because they keep my attention. For instance, I tend to watch beauty product ads fully when they show clear demonstrations of makeup tools that I might buy.

× Yes, I always saw advertisements on my phone or on my computer.

✓ Yes, I always see advertisements on my phone or on my computer.

The student used past tense 'saw' but the question asks about a habitual action in the present ('Do you often see...'). Use simple present 'see' for routines. Suggestion: use present simple for regular habits (I always see, I usually watch).

× Um this is a hard question as I I already forgot what I have saw what advertisement I have saw when I was a child

✓ Um this is a hard question because I already forgot which advertisements I saw when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present perfect 'have forgot' incorrectly with 'saw'. Use either present perfect 'have seen' for unspecified time before now or simple past 'saw' with a specific past time 'when I was a child'. Also 'what advertisement' should be 'which advertisements' or 'which advertisement'. Remove redundant words and fix conjunction 'because'. Suggestion: simplify and choose consistent past tense 'saw' when referring to a finished time period (when I was a child).

× yes, I always saw advertisement on trains or other transport. This time when I went on the airpran air aeroplane I saw the advertisement about Bing Bineng, the Bineng Strait, which is very attractive to me.

✓ Yes, I always see advertisements on trains or other transport. Recently, when I went on an aeroplane I saw an advertisement about Bing Bineng, the Bineng Strait, which was very attractive to me.

The first clause describes a habitual present action, so use present simple 'see' and plural 'advertisements'. The next part describes a specific past event, so use past simple 'went' and 'saw'. Use the article 'an' before 'aeroplane' and 'an advertisement' for a single ad. Also correct word order and spelling. Suggestion: separate habitual statements (present simple) from a single past event (past simple).

× This is a funny but difficult question for me like do I like advertisement? Actually not I usually when especially when I looking at a videos there.

✓ This is a funny but difficult question for me: do I like advertisements? Actually, not. Usually, especially when I'm watching videos,

Use plural 'advertisements' for general reference. Use present continuous 'I'm watching' (or present simple 'I watch') for the action of viewing videos. Insert punctuation to separate ideas. Suggestion: use 'I'm watching videos' or 'I watch videos' and make 'advertisements' plural for general statements. (Continuation follows next sentence.)

× Sometimes there's an advertisement before the video start I will I usually will skip the advertisement

✓ Sometimes there's an advertisement before the video starts, and I usually skip the advertisement.

Use 'starts' (third person singular) after 'video' and connect clauses with 'and'. Do not repeat modal structures unnecessarily; 'I usually skip' is natural. Suggestion: use third person singular for verbs with singular nouns and streamline modal usage.

× Um must be dose advertisement that is meaningful or funny like or they are relevant to me yes like if it is about maybe makeup tools, makeup cosmetic products I might stay to look at it.

✓ Um, it must be those advertisements that are meaningful or funny, or that are relevant to me. For example, if it is about makeup tools or cosmetic products, I might stay to watch them.

Use 'those' (demonstrative plural) not 'dose'. Match plural noun 'advertisements' with plural verbs 'are'. 'Makeup cosmetic products' is redundant; 'cosmetic products' suffices. Use 'watch them' rather than 'stay to look at it' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: ensure agreement between demonstratives, nouns, and verbs, and use clear verbs like 'watch' for videos.