Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答時有不少重複語音填充詞（如 I, I, I; uh），語法時態也不太準確（used to / saw 更合適），句子結構較簡單且缺少具體細節。建議：1) 使用正確時態，如 "When I was a child, I used to see..." 2) 刪除多餘填充詞，保持流暢；3) 加入一兩個具體細節說明為何印象深刻（例如廣告的畫面、音樂或角色），並用連接詞使語句連貫。

예시: When I was a child, I used to see many Pepsi advertisements on TV, and I thought Pepsi tasted better than Coca-Cola. The ad that impressed me most featured a catchy jingle and colorful dancing characters, which made it hard to forget.

제안: 回答直接但有重複與語填詞（uh）以及不夠具體。建議：1) 用更精確的詞彙（e.g. billboards, digital screens, posters）；2) 用連接詞增加細節（for example, often promoting...）；3) 避免重複詞語，給出具體例子或頻率（e.g. every commute, I see ads for...）。

예시: I mostly see advertising on trains, especially on digital screens and posters. For example, during my commute I often notice ads for household products and kitchen appliances displayed on big screens.

제안: 回答顯得口語化且有語法錯誤（dislike at advertisements, TE TV），充滿重複與填充詞，內容略為冗長。建議：1) 使用簡潔明確的主題句（I don't like advertisements.）；2) 指出具體原因並用連接詞（because, so）；3) 避免冗長重複，可加入一個具體例子描述跳過廣告的情況。

예시: I don't like advertisements because they interrupt the programs I want to watch. For instance, when I'm watching a TV show, ads often appear on my favorite channel and I usually skip them to continue watching.

제안: 回答內容尚可但有語病（the ad advertising of sportsmanship），語氣猶豫（probably, uh）且表達過於絕對（that's the only thing）。建議：1) 直接給出主題句並用更準確詞彙（ads about sportsmanship and teamwork）；2) 用具體理由說明喜歡的原因並給出一個例子；3) 避免絕對化表述，保持自然語氣。

예시: I prefer advertisements about sports because they promote sportsmanship and teamwork. For example, a commercial showing teammates supporting each other left a strong impression on me because it felt inspiring.

제안: 回答情緒化且含有口語貶義詞（dumb），有重複與語法混亂（there all there's always）。建議：1) 保持冷靜客觀的語氣（use neutral words like annoying）；2) 用清晰句子說明頻率和形式（e.g. pre-roll videos, pop-ups）；3) 可以補充一個具體情況或後果（e.g. it wastes time or slows loading）。

예시: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer, especially pre-roll ads before videos. They usually last for a few seconds and feel annoying because they delay me from watching the content I want.

× When I was a child, I always see advertisements about Pepsi and then I, I, I always believed that Pepsi is much, uh, it's much better than Coca-Cola.

✓ When I was a child, I always saw advertisements about Pepsi and I always believed that Pepsi was much better than Coca-Cola.

句中描述的是过去的习惯或经历，应使用过去时。原句中使用了现在时态“see”和混合时态“believed/ is”，应统一为过去时“saw”和“was”。建议：描述过去发生的事或习惯时使用一般过去时，如“always saw”“always believed”。

× I mostly see advertising on trains, uh, on the big screens on trains.

✓ I mostly see advertisements on trains, on the big screens.

重复使用“on trains”造成冗余，且“advertising”在此语境下更自然用可数名词复数“advertisements”。建议：避免重复短语，简化为“on trains, on the big screens”。

× They always advertise like daily, daily stuff and kitchen supplies and all that kind of thing.

✓ They always advertise everyday items, kitchen supplies and that kind of thing.

“daily, daily stuff”不符合英语表达，重复且词类不当。应使用名词短语“everyday items”或“daily items”。建议：用常见搭配如“everyday items”代替口语重复。

× No, I dislike at advertisements.

✓ No, I dislike advertisements.

动词“dislike”后不接介词“at”；原句多了“at”。建议：使用“dislike + 宾语”结构，如“dislike advertisements”。

× I mostly see advertise advertisements on uh TE TV and it usually appears on the channel that I most wanted and I usually skip advertisements and get to the part that I want to see and I always think that they are just a waste of time.

✓ I mostly see advertisements on TV and they usually appear on the channels I want to watch, so I usually skip the ads to get to the part I want to see. I always think they are just a waste of time.

原句存在动词形式错误（“advertise advertisements”重复且不当）、时态和句子结构混乱（“appears on the channel that I most wanted”应为现在时和恰当的词序），以及缺少连贯性。建议：用“advertisements on TV”，“they appear on the channels I want to watch”，“skip the ads to get to the part I want”。将长句拆成更清晰的句子。

× Probably about sports and the ad advertising of sportsmanship and teamwork.

✓ Probably ads about sports, promoting sportsmanship and teamwork.

“the ad advertising of”结构冗长且不自然；“sportsmanship and teamwork”作被宣传的内容时用动名词或现在分词更自然。建议：用“ads about sports, promoting...”或“advertisements about sports that promote...”。

× Yes I do. Every time I want to get to a video there all there's always that dumb advertisements blocking my way and forcing me to look at the advertisements for a minute.

✓ Yes, I do. Every time I want to watch a video there are always those dumb advertisements blocking my way and forcing me to watch them for a minute.

原句时态和主谓不一致：“there all there's always”混乱，应为“there are always”；“advertisements”与指示词需数一致，用“those ads”或“them”。此外“look at the advertisements”更自然为“watch them”。建议：注意主谓一致和数的一致性，使用“there are always those ads... force me to watch them”。

× It's so infuriating.

✓ It's so infuriating.

句子本身语法正确，时态与上下文一致，因此无需修改。