Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 问题回答要更直接且句子结构正确。注意主谓一致和时态，避免重复。可以先用一句话直接回答，然后用1–2句具体描述广告内容和为什么印象深刻，使用连接词如“because”或“so”。尽量控制在最多5句内。

예시: Yes. One advertisement that stayed with me showed a little child washing her mother’s feet. I remember it clearly because it was emotional and highlighted filial piety, which moved me. The simple, touching scene made the message very memorable.

제안: 回答要更具体且用词准确。说明你经常看到的广告类型并给出一到两个例子，使用连接词如“for example”或“such as”，并解释为什么觉得有趣或不打扰你。注意用词（estate information 和 horse selling 可能不准确），应使用更合适的词汇如 property、real estate 或 job adverts。

예시: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and buses. For example, there are ads for real estate, mobile apps and local restaurants. I find them interesting because they often use bright colours and catchy slogans to attract commuters.

제안: 表达个人观点时要更自然并避免重复。先直接回答，然后给出一两个具体原因并用连接词如“because”或“when”。描述体验时用准确词汇（e.g. pop-up ads, intrusive）并注意发音或重复问题不会出现于书面答案中，但口语中应避免多次重复同一词。

예시: Not really. I don’t like advertisements, especially intrusive pop-up ads on my phone, because they interrupt what I’m doing. When a video ad plays loudly without warning, it feels annoying and distracting.

제안: 回答时要明确指出喜欢哪类广告并解释原因。使用更合适的词汇（environmentally friendly, eco-friendly）并用连接词如“because”阐明影响。避免重复单词“advertisement”。

예시: I prefer eco-friendly advertisements because they promote sustainable products and positive habits. For example, an ad about recycling or energy-saving tips makes me feel the brand cares about the planet.

제안: 回答要简洁并给出具体细节说明你如何处理这些广告。可以先肯定看到很多广告，然后说明你通常的反应并用连词如“so”或“therefore”。避免过多重复词语（really, really）。

예시: Yes, I see lots of ads on my phone and computer. Usually I close them immediately because they interrupt my browsing, so I prefer using ad blockers or paid apps without ads.

× Yes, when I was a child I were I was very impressed with a story and that is a little child held a basin of water and washed her mother's feet is very impressive for me.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I was very impressed by a story about a little child who held a basin of water and washed her mother's feet. It was very impressive to me.

错误类型：过去时问题。说明：句中使用了“were”与“I”不匹配，应使用过去式“was”。此外句子时态应保持过去一致，且从句结构需要调整：使用被动/介词短语表达“impressed by a story”，用定语从句“who held... and washed...”修饰“a little child”，并将最后的形容改为过去式短语“was very impressive to me”。建议：将“were”改为“was”，把不连贯的短句合并为完整的过去时句子。

× Yes, I always see a lot of advertising on trains and other transport, such as estate information about the horse selling and rental. It's very interesting.

✓ Yes, I always see a lot of advertising on trains and other transport, such as estate information about house selling and rental. It's very interesting.

错误类型：介词/词语使用不当。说明：原句中“horse selling”是错误单词，应为“house selling”（房屋出售信息）。此外“estate information about the house selling and rental”表达稍显笨拙，可改为“estate information about house sales and rentals”但为保持原意改为“house selling and rental”。建议：检查相近拼写单词（horse vs house），并使用更自然的短语如“house sales and rentals”。

× Not really. I really don't like advertisement. They make me angry, especially when I play my mobile phone and an advertisement suddenly suddenly jumped out of my scene. It's very noisy.

✓ Not really. I really don't like advertisements. They make me angry, especially when I'm using my mobile phone and an advertisement suddenly pops up on my screen. It's very annoying.

错误类型：冠词/名词使用不当和时态问题。说明：1) “advertisement”在泛指时应用复数“advertisements”。2) “when I play my mobile phone”不恰当，应为“when I'm using my mobile phone”。3) “jumped out of my scene”不地道，正确表达为“pops up on my screen”。4) 形容词“noisy”不适合描述弹出广告，改为“annoying”。建议：使用复数形式，使用进行时表达正在使用手机，使用固定搭配“pop up on the screen”，并选择恰当形容词。

× I like the advertisement advertising. If they are environment friendly and natural they can make our life better. I will love them.

✓ I like certain advertisements. If they are environmentally friendly and natural, they can make our lives better. I will like them.

错误类型：形容词/副词使用不当。说明：1) 原句“the advertisement advertising”重复且不自然，应改为“certain advertisements”或“those kinds of advertisements”。2) “environment friendly”应为副词或复合形容词“environmentally friendly”或“environment-friendly”。3) “our life”在泛指时用复数“our lives”。4) “I will love them”语气可改为“I will like them”更自然。建议：避免重复词，使用正确形容词形式并注意可数名词单复数。

× There are plenty of advertisements in my phone and my computer, but mostly I would rather choose to close directly because I really, really don't like them.

✓ There are plenty of advertisements on my phone and computer, but mostly I just close them directly because I really don't like them.

错误类型：There be问题及介词使用。说明：1) 表示屏幕或设备上的广告，介词应为“on my phone and computer”而不是“in”。2) “would rather choose to close directly”表达啰嗦且结构不自然，应简化为“just close them directly”或“close them immediately”。建议：使用正确介词“on”，将冗长表达改为简单常用句式，并保持时态一致。