Mirrors— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (like, you know), correct minor grammar ("in the mirror" not "at mirror"), and limit to 2–3 sentences. Add a brief reason or frequency detail using a linking word (e.g., "because" or "so").

예시: I do like looking at myself in the mirror. Because I have a large mirror in my room, I usually check my appearance every morning and before I go out to make sure I look presentable.

제안: Make the response direct and clearer: start with a concise topic sentence (Yes/No and a brief explanation), avoid repetition and filler words ("like", "for example"), and use a linking word to connect ideas (e.g., "but", "so"). Give one specific example (when/what kind of small mirror).

예시: I haven’t bought a large mirror for my room, but I do buy small handheld mirrors when I need them. For example, I recently bought a compact mirror to carry in my bag so I can quickly check my makeup during the day.

제안: Be more concise and natural: give a direct answer first (No), then one clear reason using a linking word (because/so) and one brief supporting detail. Avoid redundancy and awkward phrasing ("more heavier" → "heavier").

예시: No, I don’t usually carry a mirror because my phone’s front camera does the job. For instance, I use my phone to check my hair and makeup quickly instead of carrying an extra item.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence, reduce repetition and correct phrasing ("when I do makeup" not "makeups"). Use a linking word (because/so) and one specific detail about placement or style to enrich the answer.

예시: Yes, I would use mirrors to decorate my room; I prefer one large mirror on the wall. Because it enlarges the space and provides good lighting for doing my makeup, I would place it opposite a window to reflect natural light.

× I really like looking at myself at mirror and since there is like a big mirror in my own room, I make sure that I look good on the mirror every time I see.

✓ I really like looking at myself in the mirror and since there is a big mirror in my room, I make sure that I look good in the mirror every time I look.

Use 'in the mirror' and 'look in the mirror' not 'at mirror' or 'on the mirror'. Also remove unnecessary 'like' and 'own' for clarity. Use 'look' instead of 'see' in this context. Grammar problem type ID:17

× I never have bought a big mirror to my rooms for example, but whenever I feel the need for like small mirrors, I always go to the shop and just buy it for myself because for me looking beautiful is the most important thing.

✓ I have never bought a big mirror for my room, for example, but whenever I feel the need for small mirrors, I always go to the shop and buy one for myself because looking beautiful is important to me.

Use correct word order 'have never' and preposition 'for my room' not 'to my rooms'. Use singular 'room' if referring to own room. Use 'one' to replace 'it' for countable 'mirrors'. Remove unnecessary 'like' and reorder 'important to me'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× So I always bring mirrors with me to check myself.

✓ So I always bring a mirror with me to check myself.

Use singular 'a mirror' when referring to a single portable mirror. 'Mirrors with me' is grammatically possible but less natural here; choose singular to match 'bring'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Since I have a lot of mirrors, I don't usually take mirrors because I have my phone and my camera is really clear.

✓ Since I have a lot of mirrors, I don't usually take one because I have my phone and its camera is very clear.

Use 'one' instead of plural 'mirrors' for clarity. 'Phone's camera' is better expressed as 'its camera'. 'Really clear' -> 'very clear' is a stylistic improvement. Grammar problem type ID:6

× So I always check myself that I'm presentable with my phone's camera because taking mirrors with me actually make my belongings even more heavier, so that's why.

✓ So I always check that I'm presentable with my phone's camera because taking mirrors with me actually makes my belongings heavier.

Use 'check that' instead of 'check myself that'. Subject-verb agreement: 'taking mirrors... makes' (singular gerund subject). 'More heavier' is incorrect; use 'heavier' only. Remove redundant 'so that's why'. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I never have bought a big mirror to my rooms for example, but whenever I feel the need for like small mirrors, I always go to the shop and just buy it for myself because for me looking beautiful is the most important thing. So I always bring mirrors with me to check myself.

✓ I have never bought a big mirror for my room, for example, but whenever I feel the need for small mirrors, I always go to the shop and buy one for myself because looking beautiful is important to me. So I always bring a mirror with me to check myself.

Multiple singular/plural mismatches: use 'room' (singular) if referring to own room, use 'small mirrors' then 'one' to refer to a single item, and later use 'a mirror' rather than 'mirrors' to match 'bring'. Ensure consistency in number. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I really like mirrors, but I would like only one big mirror in my house.

✓ I really like mirrors, but I would like only one big mirror in my house.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no preposition change needed. No correction required. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Or for example, when I do makeups, I like to have a mirror because it actually adds beautiful atmosphere and a little kind of touch to my house.

✓ For example, when I do my makeup, I like to have a mirror because it actually adds a beautiful atmosphere and a little touch to my house.

Use 'my makeup' not 'makeups' (uncountable). Add article 'a' before 'beautiful atmosphere'. Remove 'kind of' as it is informal and redundant. Use 'little touch' not 'little kind of touch'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× So I like to have a mirror in my room.

✓ So I like to have a mirror in my room.

Sentence is correct; no adjective/adverb error. No correction required. Grammar problem type ID:13