Mirrors— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense and simpler sentence structures to avoid repetition and errors. Include linking words (for example, "usually", "often", "because") to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I often look at myself in the mirror before I leave home. I usually check my hair and clothes to make sure I look presentable, especially before meetings or going out with friends.

제안: Give a direct answer then support with specific reasons. Use correct verb forms (e.g., "I have bought") and avoid repeating words. Mention where you placed the mirrors and why, using linking words like "because" or "so" for clarity.

예시: Yes, I have bought several mirrors. I placed a full-length mirror in my bedroom and a decorative mirror in the living room because mirrors make the room look larger and I can check my outfit before leaving home.

제안: Answer directly and clearly. Use precise phrases such as "a small handheld mirror" or "a compact in my bag." Avoid filler words and repetition. Provide one or two specific occasions when you use it and use linking words like "for example" or "when".

예시: Yes, I usually carry a small compact mirror in my bag. For example, I check my hair and makeup after meetings or before going to work to make sure I look neat.

제안: Start with a clear statement then give specific decorative benefits. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "create the illusion of space", "reflect light"). Keep to two or three sentences and use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I would use mirrors to decorate my room because they create the illusion of more space and reflect natural light. They are both practical and attractive, and I can also check my appearance before I leave.

× As I look at myself in the mirror after and to check my appearance after before I go to the before leaving the the home and after losing and after the meeting. It's make me make my parents look after and look better.

✓ I look at myself in the mirror to check my appearance before I leave home and after meetings. It helps me and makes me look better.

The original contains repeated, misplaced words and fragmented clauses causing sentence structure errors. Simplify by creating clear clauses: use 'to check my appearance' for purpose, 'before I leave home' for time, and 'after meetings' for post-event checks. Use 'helps me and makes me look better' to express result. Remove duplicated words like 'the the' and unclear phrases like 'after losing' and 'make my parents look after'. Suggested practice: write one clear idea per clause and remove repeated words.

× And yes, I have to bought some mirrors and put them and the bedroom or in the on the salon because it make the appearance of of the places with more large and I can't put I can't I to take my appearance before before and forgot before leaving the home or.

✓ Yes, I have bought some mirrors and put them in the bedroom or in the living room because they make the places look larger, and I can check my appearance before leaving home.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'have to bought' instead of the present perfect 'have bought' (past participle). Also contains article and preposition errors and word repetitions. Use 'put them in the bedroom' and 'living room' instead of 'in the on the salon'. Use plural pronoun 'they' to agree with 'mirrors' and the verb 'make' with object 'places look larger'. Remove redundant fragments like 'I can't put I can't I to take'. Suggested practice: use 'have' + past participle for completed actions and ensure pronoun-verb agreement with plural nouns.

× Uh, yes, I take a mirror in my back, a small a small mirror to check my appearance after meeting. And then sometimes I check my air balance and then in the in the work or in any any place hour we go to check my appearance after after before I go to there work.

✓ Yes, I carry a small mirror in my bag to check my appearance after meetings. Sometimes I check my hair and when I am at work or in other places I check my appearance before I go to work there.

The original misuses articles ('a small a small'), prepositions ('in my back' should be 'in my bag'), and contains repetitions. 'Air balance' is likely 'hair'. Also correct tense and phrasing: 'carry a small mirror' and 'when I am at work'. Suggested practice: choose correct articles ('a' or 'the') and common collocations like 'carry in my bag' and 'check my hair'.

× Yes, I would. Yeah. I would like to use a mirror and you do to create a trailer or you make the room more bigger and more bigger and more have a light reflection.

✓ Yes, I would. I would like to use mirrors to decorate, because they make the room bigger and reflect more light.

'More bigger' is incorrect comparative usage; use 'bigger' or 'much bigger'. 'You do to create a trailer' is unclear and incorrect. Replace with 'to decorate' and 'reflect more light'. Suggested practice: use correct comparative forms and clear verbs for purpose (decorate, reflect).

× And when I took on this, it's very useful where to check my appearance before leaving the home and I can't check the myself and make me more.

✓ They are very useful for checking my appearance before leaving home, and I can easily check myself with them.

The original is ungrammatical: 'took on this' and 'make me more' are unclear. Replace with a clear subject 'They' (mirrors) and purpose phrase 'for checking my appearance'. Use 'I can easily check myself' to express ability. Remove fragments and unclear modifiers. Suggested practice: state the subject clearly, use purpose phrases 'for checking' and avoid vague expressions.