Mirrors— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and natural: answer directly, use correct words, and avoid repetition. Start with a topic sentence stating whether you like looking in the mirror, then give 1–2 specific reasons and frequency. Use correct vocabulary (mirror, appearance) and simpler grammar to reduce errors. Keep it under 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I do. I look in the mirror every day, usually in the morning, because I like to check my appearance and fix my hair or makeup. It helps me feel more confident before I leave the house.

제안: Answer directly and explain clearly with correct grammar and vocabulary. Say whether you have bought one, then give a clear reason. If mentioning family purchases, explain the situation briefly and accurately. Avoid unclear words and incorrect verb forms.

예시: No, I have never bought a mirror because I usually don't shop for household items. My mother sometimes buys small cosmetic mirrors for me, but I don't choose them myself.

제안: Be concise and avoid repetition. Give a clear frequency and purpose, using linking words to connect ideas. Use accurate verbs (check, touch up) and keep to 2–3 sentences with specific detail.

예시: Yes, I usually carry a small compact mirror in my bag because I often need to check my makeup or fix my hair while I'm out.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons and one example. Use correct expressions (fragile, dangerous if broken) and linking words (because, so) to make your answer coherent. Keep sentences short and direct.

예시: No, I wouldn't use large mirrors to decorate my room because they can be fragile and dangerous if they break. Instead, I prefer framed prints or photos that are safer and easier to hang.

× I like watching myself at the Miller because I'm pretty on beauty every day, and so I watch meter every day because I'm very happy to see my beautiful sights and my face. Yeah.

✓ I like looking at myself in the mirror because I think I'm pretty every day, so I look in the mirror every day because I'm happy to see my face.

Errors: 'at the Miller' and 'in the mirror' misuse of prepositions and misspelling; 'watching myself' is unnatural here; 'pretty on beauty' is incorrect phrase; 'watch meter' misspelling. Suggestion: use 'look at' or 'look in' with 'mirror', use 'think I'm pretty' or 'feel pretty', and repeat 'look in the mirror' for clarity.

× Uh, no I've never because I'm not interested in buying mirror. Uh, I just want to see myself. So I'm not have specific interest in mirror umm, but my mother often buy me some PU beauty mirror, so I'm very regret.

✓ No, I never have because I'm not interested in buying a mirror. I just want to see myself, so I don't have a specific interest in mirrors. My mother often buys me small beauty mirrors, so I regret it.

Errors: 'I've never' requires completion ('have never bought'); 'I'm not have' is incorrect verb form; missing articles before 'mirror' and plural agreement; 'buy me' should be 'buys me' for third person singular; 'so I'm very regret' needs 'I regret it' or 'I'm very regretful'. Suggestion: use present perfect 'have never bought', correct subject-verb agreement, include articles ('a mirror') and pluralize where appropriate.

× My mother often buy me some PU beauty mirror, so I'm very regret.

✓ My mother often buys me some small beauty mirrors, so I regret it.

Error: third person singular 'mother' requires 'buys' not 'buy'; also 'regret' needs object or 'I regret it'. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with third person singular subjects and use proper sentence completion.

× Yes, definitely, since I like watching myself by the mirror because, uh, I can watch myself and I can, uh, modify my face, uh, makeup.

✓ Yes, definitely, since I like looking at myself in the mirror because I can check my face and fix my makeup.

Errors: 'by the mirror' and 'watching myself' are unnatural; prefer 'look at' or 'look in' the mirror and 'check my face' or 'fix my makeup'. Suggestion: use standard collocations 'look in the mirror', 'fix my makeup'.

× Uh, no, I don't because it's very fragile and uh, it can be broken easily, so I have to, I think the use of mirror should be safety, so I don't put mirror along my room.

✓ No, I don't, because it's very fragile and can break easily, so I think mirrors should be kept safe; therefore I don't put a mirror in my room.

Errors: 'it can be broken' is passive but awkward here; 'the use of mirror should be safety' incorrect noun/adjective choice; 'put mirror along my room' wrong preposition and article. Suggestion: use active phrasing 'can break', use 'keep safe' or 'be kept safely', include articles ('a mirror'), and use 'in my room' for location.