Relax— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly with “I usually go to...” and use the correct form “to relax,” not “for relaxing.” Replace “sport crabs” with “sports clubs” or specify another activity. The phrase “That’s I can be relaxed” is grammatically incorrect; say “so I can relax” or “which helps me relax.” Use a linking word such as “because” or “so” to connect your reason and result, and include one specific example of an activity.

예시: I usually go to the mall in the city centre to relax. It has plenty of activities, such as watching movies, having coffee, and playing sports. I enjoy going there because I can choose something fun to do, so I quickly forget about my daily stress.

제안: Use the complete structure “I usually relax with my friends,” rather than “I usually like with my friends.” Use plural or general forms such as “at cafés” and “watch movies,” and keep the tense consistent by saying “which helps me unwind.” The answer has relevant reasons and supporting details, but “emotional support and companionship” sounds slightly formal for this simple Part 1 question; a more natural phrase is “they make me feel comfortable and supported.”

예시: I usually relax with my friends because they make me feel comfortable and supported. We often hang out at a café or watch a movie together. Since we can talk and laugh about our day, spending time with them helps me unwind.

제안: Add the article in “I’m a big fan of music,” and use “T-pop” with a hyphen if referring to Thai pop music. Avoid the sentence fragment after “because”; combine the ideas into one complete sentence. Use “it makes me feel relaxed,” not “it made me feel relaxing,” because “relaxed” describes your feeling and “relaxing” describes the music. Add a specific effect or situation to make the answer more developed.

예시: Yes, definitely. I’m a big fan of music, especially T-pop, because it helps me relax after a busy day. I usually listen to it while lying in bed or travelling home, and the familiar songs make me feel comfortable and less stressed.

제안: Begin with a direct answer instead of “Well I need to relax.” Correct “stretful” to “stressful,” “boat activity” to “both activities,” and “help” to “help me,” because the subject is plural. Use the natural phrase “take my mind off my worries,” and provide a clear result. You can also connect the two activities with “or” and explain when you usually do them.

예시: After a stressful day, I usually listen to music or watch a movie to relax. Both activities help me unwind and take my mind off my worries. If I feel especially tired, I choose music because I can simply lie down and enjoy it without concentrating too much.

× I usually go to malls for relaxing especially the mall that's located in the city centre because there are a lot of activities to do like movies or sport crabs.

✓ I usually go to malls to relax, especially the mall that's located in the city centre, because there are a lot of activities to do, such as watching movies or playing sports.

After go, use the infinitive with to to express purpose: go to relax. The form go for relaxing is not the natural structure in this sentence.

× That's I can be relaxed.

✓ That helps me relax.

That's cannot be followed directly by I can be relaxed in this sentence. Use the structure subject + help + object + base verb: That helps me relax.

× I usually like with my friends because they make me feel comfortable and give me emotional support and companionship.

✓ I usually relax with my friends because they make me feel comfortable and give me emotional support and companionship.

The verb like cannot be used with the preposition with in this meaning. The sentence needs a suitable main verb, such as relax, to answer the question about whom you relax with.

× So we often hang out at cafe or watch movie together which helped me unwind.

✓ So we often hang out at a cafe or watch a movie together, which helps me unwind.

Use the indefinite article a before singular countable nouns when referring to one unspecified cafe or movie: a cafe and a movie.

× So we often hang out at cafe or watch movie together which helped me unwind.

✓ So we often hang out at a cafe or watch a movie together, which helps me unwind.

The sentence describes a regular present habit, shown by often hang out and watch. Therefore, use the present-tense verb helps instead of the past-tense verb helped.

× Yes, absolutely I'm big fan of music, especially T pop music because when I listen to music.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I'm a big fan of music, especially T-pop music, because when I listen to music, it makes me feel relaxed and comfortable.

Big fan is a singular countable noun phrase, so it requires the indefinite article a: a big fan. The sentence also needs to be joined correctly with a comma after the when-clause.

× Yes, absolutely I'm big fan of music, especially T pop music because when I listen to music. It made me feel relaxing and comfortable.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I'm a big fan of music, especially T-pop music, because when I listen to music, it makes me feel relaxed and comfortable.

When I listen to music is a dependent clause and should not be separated from its main clause by a full stop. Join the clauses with a comma so that the sentence has a complete and logical structure.

× It made me feel relaxing and comfortable.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed and comfortable.

The speaker is describing a general or usual effect of listening to music, so use the present tense makes rather than the past tense made.

× It made me feel relaxing and comfortable.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed and comfortable.

Relaxing describes something that causes relaxation, such as relaxing music. Relaxed describes how a person feels, so use relaxed after feel.

× Well I need to relax. After a stretful day, I usually listen to music or watch a movie because boat activity help me unwind and take my mind off my worry.

✓ Well, I need to relax. After a stretful day, I usually listen to music or watch a movie because both activities help me unwind and take my mind off my worries.

Both refers to two activities, so activity must be plural: activities. Worries should also be plural because the speaker is referring generally to different concerns.

× Well I need to relax. After a stretful day, I usually listen to music or watch a movie because boat activity help me unwind and take my mind off my worry.

✓ Well, I need to relax. After a stretful day, I usually listen to music or watch a movie because both activities help me unwind and take my mind off my worries.

The plural subject both activities requires the plural verb help, not the singular form helps or an incorrectly formed verb phrase. The subject and verb must agree in number.