Science— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and grammar mistakes (use singular/plural correctly and correct verb forms).

예시: Yes, I enjoy science because it helps me understand how the world works. For example, biology explains how our bodies stay healthy, and physics helps me understand everyday technologies.

제안: Answer the question directly with a time reference (age, school grade or event) and add one short supporting detail. Avoid irrelevant phrases.

예시: I started learning science at primary school, around age seven, when we began simple experiments in class.

제안: State the specific subject clearly (e.g., biology, physics, chemistry), then give one or two concise, relevant reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and incorrect word choices.

예시: I find biology the most interesting because it explains how living organisms function, and it is directly related to health and medicine.

제안: Describe one or two specific activities or experiments you have done, using past tense and clear linking words. Be specific about what you did and what you learned. Avoid vague generalities.

예시: I once built a simple volcano model in class and conducted an eruption experiment to learn about chemical reactions. From this activity I learned how acids and bases react and how to record observations carefully.

제안: Give a direct yes/no, then a specific reason and an example of a program or topic you enjoy. Use correct grammar (this → they or it) and avoid unnecessary fillers.

예시: Yes, I do. I find science documentaries helpful because they explain concepts clearly; for example, I enjoy watching BBC documentaries about space exploration which improve my vocabulary and understanding.

제안: Answer with a clear opinion and support it with a specific reason or example (e.g., school trips, exhibitions). Use clearer vocabulary and avoid filler sounds.

예시: Yes, many Chinese people visit science museums, especially students on school trips, because museums offer interactive exhibits and hands-on learning experiences.

× Yes, I like science because science is very important subject and they grow our scientific system, scientific problem and I think science is very important for our daily life.

✓ Yes, I like science because science is a very important subject and it helps develop our scientific knowledge and solve scientific problems, and I think science is very important for our daily life.

Errors: missing indefinite article before 'very important subject' and incorrect pronoun 'they' referring to 'science'. Also awkward phrasing 'grow our scientific system, scientific problem'. Correction: use 'a very important subject' (article error, type 22), replace 'they' with 'it' (pronoun error, type 12), and rephrase to 'helps develop our scientific knowledge and solve scientific problems' for clarity. Suggestion: identify the noun head and choose appropriate article; use singular pronoun for singular noun; prefer clear verbs like 'helps', 'develop', 'solve'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Good job.

✓ I started learning about science when I was young.

Original response 'Good job.' is inappropriate to the question and lacks relevant information (sentence does not answer 'When did you start to learn about science?'), classification as sentence structure/content error (type 26). Provide a grammatically correct, context-appropriate answer in past tense. Suggestion: answer the question with a time reference using past tense, e.g. 'when I was young' or 'at primary school'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Well, by logging, I think very interesting subject and they're very important subject for science background and which is very important for our health.

✓ Well, biology is a very interesting subject and it is a very important part of a science education and is also very important for our health.

Errors: 'by logging' is a mispronunciation/misspelling of 'biology' (lexical error) and 'they're very important subject' uses wrong pronoun and article. Classified as preposition/miscellaneous but mainly pronoun/article and word choice; here corrected as preposition type 11 for misuse of 'by'. Use singular 'it' and include articles 'a' and 'a science education'. Suggestion: use correct subject name 'biology', match singular/plural forms, and use 'part of' for 'background'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× And there are many reasons whenever I'm gonna be a selected for velocity.

✓ And there are many reasons why I want to be selected for the program.

Errors: informal/future colloquial 'gonna be a selected' is ungrammatical; 'velocity' unclear—likely intended 'program' or 'position'. Classified as future tense issue (type 7) due to misuse of future construction and passive form. Correction uses present simple with 'want to be selected' or 'hope to be selected'. Suggestion: avoid 'gonna' in formal speech; use 'hope to be selected' or 'want to be selected'. Grammar problem type ID:7

× The one kind of interesting thing for science, because science a lot of problem to be solved and I will gonna be applying lots of problem with the science.

✓ One interesting thing about science is that it presents many problems to be solved, and I will apply scientific methods to solve many problems.

Errors: 'The one kind of interesting thing' has unnecessary 'the' and awkward phrasing; missing verbs/articles in 'science a lot of problem'; 'gonna' is informal. Classified as article errors (type 22) plus sentence structure. Correction: remove unnecessary article, add 'is that', use 'presents many problems', and replace 'will gonna be applying' with 'will apply' (future tense). Suggestion: use 'one' without 'the', ensure subject-verb presence, and avoid colloquial 'gonna'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× And I'm very interesting that because science is lots of preference to solve here.

✓ And I find it very interesting because science offers many ways to solve problems.

Errors: 'I'm very interesting' misuses adjective—should be 'I am very interested' or 'I find it very interesting' (type 13). 'science is lots of preference to solve here' is ungrammatical and unclear. Correction: use 'find it very interesting' and 'offers many ways to solve problems'. Suggestion: distinguish between 'interesting' (something causes interest) and 'interested' (feeling). Use clear nouns like 'ways' or 'methods'. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Yeah, that's good. I think I improved my English.

✓ Yeah, that's good. I think I have improved my English.

Error: 'I think I improved my English' implies a specific past time; using present perfect 'have improved' connects past improvement to present state (type 6). Suggestion: use present perfect when discussing change over time with present relevance: 'I have improved my English.' Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, I do. I like watching science TV programs because this helpful for my speaking test.

✓ Yes, I do. I like watching science TV programs because they are helpful for my speaking test.

Errors: missing verb 'are' after 'this', incorrect demonstrative 'this' referring to plural 'programs'; modal/auxiliary omission (type 4). Correction: use plural pronoun 'they' and include verb 'are'. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree and match number; use 'they are helpful' or 'it is helpful' if referring to the activity generally. Grammar problem type ID:4

× I think there are Chinese people also visit our Science Museum because there are UH-2 learnings for our science museums.

✓ I think Chinese people also visit our Science Museum because there are useful learning opportunities in our science museums.

Errors: 'there are Chinese people also visit' combines 'there are' with a main verb incorrectly (existential construction error, type 10), and 'UH-2 learnings' is unclear—interpreted as 'useful learning opportunities'. Correction removes redundant 'there are' before 'Chinese people' or rephrases to 'Chinese people also visit', and clarifies noun phrase. Suggestion: avoid stacking existential 'there are' with active verbs; choose clear nouns like 'learning opportunities'. Grammar problem type ID:10