Science— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Говорите короче и яснее: начните с прямого ответа на вопрос, затем добавьте одно-два конкретных пояснения. Избегайте повторов и грамматических ошибок (например, «I will always wish that I I was better» некорректно). Постройте ответ в 2–3 предложениях, используйте простые связки (because, but, however).

예시: Yes, I like science, though it was never my strongest subject. I found biology and chemistry fascinating because they explained how living things and reactions work, but I struggled with some of the formulas and theory.

제안: Сформулируйте чёткое время начала обучения (например, «in primary school»). Упорядочьте мысль: топик-сентенс о времени, затем одно-два конкретных примера. Следите за грамматикой и согласованием времен. Используйте связки (for example, later, then).

예시: I started learning science in primary school. For example, we did hands-on experiments and group projects, and later I used flashcards and studied with friends to remember formulas.

제안: Отвечайте прямо, перечисляя предметы коротко и грамматически правильно. Уточните причину выбора одного-двух предметов вместо длинного списка. Избегайте путаницы с временами и орфографией («electivizes»).

예시: In high school I was most interested in biology and chemistry because I enjoyed learning about organisms and chemical reactions. I also took a semester of meteorology, which I liked for its practical weather lessons.

제안: Дайте конкретные примеры действий или проектов (например, experiments, field trips, dissections). Формулируйте предложения ясно и завершённо, избегайте неопределённых слов («mystery» непонятно). Используйте связки (for example, also, as a result).

예시: I've taken part in a science week where we did dissections and ecology fieldwork. For example, a biology lab helped me learn human anatomy, and a chemistry experiment showed me how different substances react.

제안: Отвечайте прямо (yes/no) и поясняйте причину коротко. Упорядочите мысли: где вы смотрите научные видео и почему предпочитаете их. Избегайте смутных выражений и грамматических ошибок («I'm enjoy» → «I enjoy»).

예시: Not really — I prefer short science videos on Instagram or TikTok because they explain complex ideas quickly and are easier to find than full TV programs.

제안: Отвечайте ясно и приведите одну конкретную причину или пример. Исправьте грамматику и порядок слов («many people», «science museums», «advanced level»). Используйте связочные слова (for example, because).

예시: Yes, many people in China visit science museums, especially teenagers, because school trips often include museum visits. For example, my class went to a science centre last year and we tried interactive exhibits that made learning easier.

× I feel that science is always a subject I had to pass in school, but it was never my favorite.

✓ I feel that science was always a subject I had to pass in school, but it was never my favorite.

The sentence mixes present 'I feel' with past 'had to pass' in a way that creates tense inconsistency. Use past tense 'was' to match 'had to pass' and the timeframe of school; keep 'I feel' if referring to current opinion, but it's clearer to place the school context in past tense. Suggestion: align main clauses to past when talking about past experiences.

× Actually, I found the topics quite fascinating, especially biology and chemistry, but it never came easily to me.

✓ Actually, I found the topics quite fascinating, especially biology and chemistry, but they never came easily to me.

The pronoun 'it' is singular while 'topics' is plural. Use plural pronoun 'they' to agree with 'topics'. This is a subject-pronoun agreement issue relating to number; ensure pronouns match the nouns they refer to.

× However, I will always wish that I I was better at science since.

✓ However, I have always wished that I had been better at science.

The original uses 'will always wish' (future) with 'was' and a dangling 'since'. For a past desire continuing to present, use present perfect 'have always wished' and past perfect 'had been' to show hypothetical past ability. Remove 'since' or complete it with a time phrase. Suggestion: use 'have always wished I had been better at science' or 'I always wished I had been better at science.'

× I'll definitely hands on learning.

✓ I'll definitely do hands-on learning.

This fragment lacks a verb and uses noun phrases awkwardly. 'Hands-on' is an adjective describing 'learning'; add the verb 'do' to form a complete clause. Hyphenate 'hands-on'.

× I remember all of my classes were based on interactive activities, especially experiments or group projects.

✓ I remember all of my classes were based on interactive activities, especially experiments and group projects.

The coordinator 'or' is acceptable but 'and' reads more naturally when listing examples. No major grammar error; this suggestion improves parallelism.

× When I came to studying, memorization or formulas and facts seemed to be the only way I would do this by making flash cards or having a friend or family member.

✓ When it came to studying, memorization of formulas and facts seemed to be the only way: I would make flash cards or ask a friend or family member for help.

This sentence has multiple structural problems: wrong phrase 'When I came to studying' (should be 'When it came to studying'), incorrect use of 'or' between 'formulas and facts', and awkward clause 'the only way I would do this by making...'. Rephrase to a clear structure: state the method and then give examples of study tactics.

× Let me think back in high school I'm interested in taking up biology, chemistry, and physics, and even 1 semester in the meteorology.

✓ Let me think. Back in high school I was interested in taking biology, chemistry, and physics, and even one semester of meteorology.

The sentence mixes present 'I'm interested' with past context 'back in high school'. Use past tense 'was interested'. Also use 'taking biology' (not 'taking up'), 'one' spelled out, and 'one semester of meteorology' for correct noun phrase.

× I can recall needing to take extensive biology and chemistry classes whereas I choose physics, ecology, and were electivizes.

✓ I recall needing to take extensive biology and chemistry classes, whereas I chose physics and ecology as electives.

There are number and verb tense errors: 'choose' should be past 'chose'; 'were electivizes' is incorrect—use 'as electives'. Also remove extraneous words and correct spelling 'electives'.

× Although I'm not often of it, I cannot deny that my sake a science week studies have been beneficial.

✓ Although I'm not often involved, I cannot deny that my week of science studies has been beneficial for me.

Original has incorrect pronouns and phrases: 'not often of it' is incorrect; 'my sake a science week studies' is ungrammatical. Replace with 'involved' and rephrase as 'my week of science studies' and use singular or plural agreement: 'has been beneficial'.

× I especially see how biology, life science, anatomy mastery, the ecology have helped me understand my body, the world around me better, including animals.

✓ I especially see how biology, life science, anatomy, and ecology have helped me better understand my body and the world around me, including animals.

Wrong word forms: 'anatomy mastery' is awkward; use 'anatomy'. Reorder adverb 'better' before 'understand' for natural adverb placement and ensure proper parallel list with commas.

× Furthermore, mystery has helped me to understand the chemical makeup of the.

✓ Furthermore, chemistry has helped me to understand the chemical makeup of things.

Likely intended 'chemistry' not 'mystery'; the clause 'of the.' is incomplete. Replace with correct subject and complete object 'of things' or specify what was meant (e.g., 'of substances').

× No, I'm enjoy watching the science video on the Instagram release and because that's the complex ideas and you don't search up the name, the science TV programs just either show the videos in Tiktok or YouTube or Insta.

✓ No, I enjoy watching science videos on Instagram because they explain complex ideas and you don't have to search for names; science programs just reupload the videos on TikTok, YouTube, or Instagram.

Multiple issues: 'I'm enjoy' should be 'I enjoy' (verb form), 'science video' -> 'science videos', 'on the Instagram release' unclear -> 'on Instagram', 'that's the complex ideas' -> 'they explain complex ideas', 'search up the name' -> 'search for names', and 'either show the videos in Tiktok or YouTube or Insta' -> 'reupload the videos on TikTok, YouTube, or Instagram'. Provide clearer, grammatical phrasing.

× Yes, the many people in China often visit a science museums, especially the teenagers, because that's helped the students know the important things.

✓ Yes, many people in China often visit science museums, especially teenagers, because that helps students learn important things.

Errors: 'the many people' -> 'many people'; 'a science museums' mismatch of article and plural -> 'science museums'; 'the teenagers' -> 'teenagers'; 'that's helped' -> 'that helps' for general present tense. Ensure number agreement and correct article usage.

× Your study and I think the Chinese museums have a advanced level.

✓ In my opinion, Chinese museums have an advanced level of exhibits.

'Your study and I think' is ungrammatical and unclear. Replace with 'In my opinion' or 'I think'. 'a advanced' should be 'an advanced'. Clarify what 'advanced level' refers to, e.g., 'of exhibits'.