Science— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答缺乏流利性和准确的句型连接，有重复与语法错误（e.g. "to me" 位置、时态与冠词）。建议：用一到两句主题句直接回答，再用一到两句具体原因支持，使用连接词（because, so, therefore），并注意语法和词序。可练习将“failed the exam”改为更自然的表达如"I didn't do well in exams"。

예시: No, I don't. I find science quite abstract and hard to understand, so I struggled with it at school. For example, I often couldn't memorise many formulas, which made exams very stressful for me.

제안: 回答中有语法和时态混用（"as I remembered it, maybe probably" 冗余；"grade 10 in middle school" 不够地道；动词时态错误）。建议：直接给出时间点（year/grade/age），用一到两句补充具体内容，避免重复词。

예시: I started learning science around Grade 10 in middle school. At that time we began studying biology, including how to classify different insects and animals.

제안: 回答结构比较好但可更简洁自然。注意用词（"contains some experiment" → "involves experiments"），句子可合并并用连接词提升连贯性。加入个人感受和具体例子会更好。

예시: If I had to pick one, I'd choose chemistry because it involves hands‑on experiments. For instance, mixing two solutions can produce an instant colour change, which I find fascinating and exciting.

제안: 回答有内容但表达不够准确（"record how we grow up" 不合适），需更具体与流畅。建议用清晰的主题句，然后用具体例子说明步骤或感受，注意代词指代和时态。

예시: I've done several simple science activities, such as chemistry demonstrations and a biology project. For example, we were asked to grow a plant, keep a diary of its growth and measure its height each week, which gave me a real sense of achievement.

제안: 回答直接但重复“not really”，语法和表达可改进（"search this kind of TV shows actively" → "actively look for these shows"；注意单复数）。建议用一到两句原因支持，并可提出例外以显得更自然。

예시: Not really. I'm not very interested in science, so I don't usually look for science programmes. Sometimes a well‑made documentary might catch my attention, but generally I find them a bit dull.

제안: 回答含有刻板印象並且有犹豫填充词（"umm, uh"），表达不够简洁与准确（"like to science" 错误）。建议避免泛化，用更客观的措辞并给出具体例子或条件（e.g. age, education），减少填充词。

예시: I think it depends on the person. Some people prefer comedies or action movies because they enjoy light entertainment, while others, especially students and families with children, often visit science museums to learn and explore.

× No, I don't, because I think the science is really abstract and difficult to me.

✓ No, I don't, because I think science is really abstract and difficult for me.

句中使用形容词后接介词对象时应用短语"difficult for someone"，不能直接说"difficult to me"。此外在泛指学科时通常不加定冠词"the"，应说"science"而不是"the science"。建议记住：表达“对某人来说困难”用"difficult for + 人"，泛指学科或活动时省略冠词。

× I even failed the exam when I was in the middle school and it is really challenging to me to remember a lot of formulas, so I'm not really like it.

✓ I even failed the exam when I was in middle school, and it was really challenging for me to remember a lot of formulas, so I didn't really like it.

此处讲述过去发生的事，应使用过去时态："was"和"didn't like"。原句混用现在时和过去时（"it is"与过去事件不一致），且"in middle school"常用无冠词形式，且"challenging to me"应为"challenging for me"。建议注意叙述过去经历时全句使用过去时态。

× Well, as I remembered it, maybe probably at my grade 10 in middle school, we start to learn the biology to know more about the categories about insects or animals.

✓ Well, as I remember, maybe in grade 10 at middle school, we started to learn biology to learn more about the categories of insects and animals.

句中时间为过去（grade 10），动词应使用过去时"started"，原句用"start"不正确。还有表达习惯："as I remember"比"as I remembered it"更自然；"in grade 10"和"learn biology"不加定冠词；"categories of insects and animals"用介词"of"。建议：回忆过去事件用过去时，注意固定搭配如"in grade 10"、"learn biology"、"categories of ..."。

× If I must choose one, probably I would choose the chemistry because it contains some experiment.

✓ If I had to choose one, I'd probably choose chemistry because it contains some experiments.

条件句表达假设时用更自然的短语"If I had to choose"或"If I must choose"亦可，但现在句中主语为第一人称，谓语用条件式"would/ 'd"更合适。"chemistry"作学科名不加定冠词"the"，且"experiment"需复数或加不定冠词"some experiments"。建议使用"I'd probably choose chemistry because it contains some experiments."。

× When you put two kinds of solutions together, the colors will immediately change.

✓ When you mix two kinds of solutions together, the colors change immediately.

动词搭配更自然的是"mix solutions"而不是"put solutions together"；时间副词位置建议放句尾或动词后方："change immediately"。原句时态未来式"will immediately change"用于普遍事实时应使用一般现在时"change"。建议把描述实验规律的句子用一般现在时并使用更自然动词"mix"。

× I think it is quite interesting and fantastic.

✓ I think it's quite interesting and fascinating.

"fantastic"可用，但在此语境下"fascinating"更贴切用于描述学科或现象令人着迷。注意缩写形式"it's"更口语。建议根据语境选择更恰当的形容词。

× As I mentioned, some of chemical experiments are quite fun and apart from that, I think the biology practical homework is quite interesting.

✓ As I mentioned, some chemical experiments are quite fun, and apart from that, I think the biology practical homework is quite interesting.

"some of chemical experiments"结构不正确，应为"some chemical experiments"或"some of the chemical experiments"。这里不是过去分词问题而是名词短语用法，应去掉"of"。建议注意"some of + the + 名词复数"或直接用"some + 名词复数"。

× For example, our teachers used to ask us to grow a plant and record how we grow up.

✓ For example, our teachers used to ask us to grow a plant and record how it grows.

原句"record how we grow up"错误地把人称和动词搭配到植物身上。应用代词指代植物"it"并用现在时或过去时根据上下文：因为是教师要求的常规活动，"record how it grows"更合适。建议注意主语与动词的对应关系和代词使用。

× This gives me a sense of achievement.

✓ This gave me a sense of achievement.

句中讲过去发生的作业带来的感受，应使用过去时"gave"而不是现在时"gives"，以保持与上下文时态一致。建议回顾前句时态并保持一致。

× Not really. First of all I'm not really interested in science, so I will not search this kind of TV shows actively to watch.

✓ Not really. First of all, I'm not really interested in science, so I don't actively look for this kind of TV show to watch.

"search ... actively to watch"结构不自然，应使用"look for"或"search for"并把副词"actively"放在动词前或后更自然。"TV shows"在此作为不可数类泛指可用单数短语"this kind of TV show"。时态上谈一般习惯用现在时"don't"而不是未来式"will not"。建议使用"I don't actively look for this kind of TV show."。

× And also I think this kind of TV shows is a little bit boring but just in my opinion.

✓ Also, I think this kind of TV show is a little boring, but that's just my opinion.

"this kind of"后接单数名词："this kind of TV show"；"is a little bit boring"可简化为"is a little boring"；补充短语应为固定表达"that's just my opinion"。建议记住"this kind of + 单数名词"的用法。

× I think it depends.

✓ I think it depends.

句子本身正确，无需更改。保留原句。

× Some Chinese people may more umm, like to watch some comedy or some action movies because Chinese people always like happy endings and uh, exciting clips.

✓ Some Chinese people may prefer to watch comedies or action movies because they often like happy endings and exciting scenes.

原句中量词和词形使用不当："more ... like to watch"不自然，应用"prefer to"；"some comedy"应用复数"comedies"或不可数结构；"exciting clips"更常见表达为"exciting scenes"。此外避免重复使用"Chinese people"，改用代词"they"。建议使用更简洁的表达并注意名词单复数形式。

× But also some of people really like to science, they will choose that.

✓ But some people who really like science will choose to go there.

原句中"some of people"应为"some people"或"some of the people"；"like to science"错误，正确说法是"like science"；代词"that"指代不明，应具体说"go there"（去科学博物馆）。建议注意固定搭配和代词指代的清晰性。