Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你直接回答了问题，也提到了父亲教你骑车的经历，内容相关。但“taught me nearly one week”表达不自然，应说“taught me how to ride a bike for nearly a week”。可以简化“couldn't take a bike to my school”这部分，并用“so”自然连接原因和结果。注意控制在两三句话内。

예시: Yes, I got my first bike when I was about five. My father taught me how to ride it, and it took me nearly a week to learn.

제안: 你表达了明确观点，也尝试给出原因和个人例子。不过“Because”单独成句造成句子不完整；“convenient to our lives”不够自然，可改为“convenient for getting around”。最后一句语法和意思不清楚，可能想表达小时候骑车上学。建议把原因和例子连起来，并明确说明自行车在日常生活中的用途。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re a convenient and affordable way to get around. When I was at primary and middle school, I often rode my bike to school.

× At that time I couldn't take a bike to my school, so my father taught me nearly one week.

✓ At that time I couldn't take a bike to my school, so my father taught me for nearly one week.

表示持续一段时间时，时间段前通常要用介词“for”。因此应说“for nearly one week”，不能直接说“taught me nearly one week”。

× Because bikes are convenient to our lives.

✓ Bikes are very popular in our country because they are convenient to use.

“Because”引导的是原因从句，不能单独作为完整句子使用。应将它连接到一个主句中，构成完整的复合句。

× Because bikes are convenient to our lives.

✓ Bikes are convenient in our daily lives.

“Convenient to our lives”中的介词搭配不自然。表达“在日常生活中很方便”时，可以说“convenient in our daily lives”；也可以说“convenient for us”。

× For example, when I was young, I ready to primary school and middle school.

✓ For example, when I was young, I rode my bike to primary school and middle school.

主句“I ready to primary school and middle school”缺少谓语动词。“Ready”是形容词，不能在这里单独充当谓语。结合上下文要表达骑车上学，应使用“rode my bike”；“rode”是“ride”的过去式，与过去的时间背景一致。