Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng cần dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán vì câu hỏi nói về thời thơ ấu: dùng “had”, “bought” và “rode”. “A2” chưa rõ nghĩa; hãy nói tuổi cụ thể hoặc bỏ chi tiết đó. Dùng “it” để chỉ chiếc xe và diễn đạt rõ rằng xe màu hồng. Bạn có thể nối thêm lý do hoặc cảm nhận để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought a pink one for my brother and me, and I thought it was beautiful. I rode it to school every day.

제안: Bạn đã nêu quan điểm và đưa ra nhóm người sử dụng, nhưng cần tránh lặp “in my country” và sửa “write” thành “ride”. Vì “bikes” là số nhiều, hãy dùng “them”. Câu cuối chưa tự nhiên và hơi mâu thuẫn với ý xe đạp rất phổ biến; hãy giải thích rõ rằng xe đạp vẫn phổ biến nhưng hiện nay nhiều người không dùng chúng hằng ngày, chẳng hạn vì có phương tiện khác.

예시: Yes, bikes are still popular in my country, especially among students. They are affordable and convenient for short journeys. However, fewer people ride them every day now because many have access to motorbikes or public transport.

× Yes I have a bike when I was A2

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was A2.

The question asks about the past, and the clause uses the past-tense verb was. Use had, not have, to keep the verb tense consistent.

× at that time my mom and my dad buy bought one for me and my brother

✓ At that time, my mom and dad bought one for me and my brother.

Use the simple past bought because the purchase happened at a specific time in the past. In a polished answer, remove the false start buy.

× and my brother is pink and very beautiful

✓ It was pink and very beautiful.

The bike, not the brother, is described as pink and beautiful. Use it to refer to the bike.

× I write it to school every day.

✓ I rode it to school every day.

The answer describes a childhood habit, so use the past-tense form rode. Ride is also the appropriate verb for traveling on a bike; write does not have that meaning.

× most people in my country use it to write every day, especially students

✓ Most people in my country ride bikes every day, especially students.

The plural noun bikes should not be referred to with the singular pronoun it. Use them if you retain a pronoun, or repeat bikes to make the reference clear. Ride is the appropriate verb for using a bike to travel.

× these days they don't use it every day too much

✓ These days, they don't use them as much.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural; use them. This avoids an unclear combination of every day and too much.

× these days they don't use it every day too much

✓ These days, they don't use them as much.

The phrase every day too much is awkward because the frequency phrase and degree phrase are combined in an unclear order. Use as much after the verb phrase to express that people use bikes less often nowadays.