Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

연습Part12026-11-03 23:29:31

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Part 1

시험관

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

수험생

No, I didn't. To be honest, I can't ride a bike still now.. Uh so I I tried to challenge a bike, challenge challenge riding a bike, but I couldn't.

시험관

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

수험생

Yes, I think so. My mother always rides a bike for her shopping and and many people ride a bike when I walk walk when I walk around.

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총점

총점: 5.0유창성과 일관성: 5.0발음: 5.0문법: 5.0어휘: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

점수: 52.0

제안: 質問には直接答えられていますが、「I can’t ride a bike still now」は語順が不自然で、「I still can’t ride a bike」が自然です。また、「challenge a bike」はこの意味では使わず、「learn to ride a bike」と言いましょう。言い直しや繰り返しを減らし、子どもの頃に練習したときの結果を一文で説明すると、より明確です。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child, and I still can’t ride one. I tried to learn when I was younger, but I never got the hang of it.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

점수: 64.0

제안: 「Yes, I think so.」に続けて具体例を挙げている点はよいです。ただし、「for her shopping」は「to go shopping」、「when I walk around」は「when I’m out and about」などが自然です。「and」や「walk」の繰り返しを避け、どのような人が自転車を使うのかを簡潔に述べましょう。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. My mother often rides hers to go shopping, and I see many people cycling when I’m out and about.

문법

20: Incorrect adverb placement

× I can't ride a bike still now.

✓ I still can't ride a bike.

Still usually comes before the main verb, or after an auxiliary verb. In this sentence, it should come after the subject and before can't: I still can't ride a bike.

중요 어휘

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
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