Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

연습Part12026-11-03 20:42:50

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Part 1

시험관

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

수험생

When I was a child I have a bite and it is my parents bite for me.

시험관

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

수험생

I think the answer is not my country and a lot of people used motorcycle.

평가

총점

총점: 5.0유창성과 일관성: 5.0발음: 5.0문법: 5.0어휘: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

점수: 35.0

제안: 先直接回答是否有自行车;描述过去经历时使用过去时,例如“had”。注意“bike”是自行车,“bite”是“咬”,并用“bought it for me”表达“父母给我买的”。可以补充一个具体细节,例如你常在哪里骑车。

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was about seven. I often rode it around our neighborhood after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

점수: 25.0

제안: 先明确回答自行车在本国是否受欢迎,避免使用“I think the answer is not my country”这种不自然的表达。说明许多人骑摩托车时,可用“many people use motorcycles”,并补充原因或与自行车的对比;注意谈论当前情况时使用一般现在时。

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer motorcycles because they are faster and more convenient for longer journeys. However, some people still ride bikes for exercise or short trips.

문법

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× When I was a child I have a bite and it is my parents bite for me.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike, and my parents bought it for me.

这句话描述的是童年时发生的事情,应使用一般过去时。have 应改为 had,表示“有”;is 应改为过去式 was,或根据句意改写为 bought,表示父母当时买给你。bite 应为 bike;这里的拼写问题不属于指定的语法问题类型。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× I think the answer is not my country and a lot of people used motorcycle.

✓ I think bikes aren't very popular in my country, and a lot of people use motorcycles.

“the answer is not my country”结构不通顺,也无法清楚表达自行车在本国是否流行。可直接说“bikes aren't very popular in my country”(自行车在我的国家不太流行),让表达与问题相符。

6: Present tense issue(现在时错误)

× I think the answer is not my country and a lot of people used motorcycle.

✓ I think bikes aren't very popular in my country, and a lot of people use motorcycles.

这里描述的是本国目前普遍存在的情况,应使用一般现在时。used 是一般过去时,应改为 use。回答关于一般情况的问题时,注意使用一般现在时。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数问题)

× I think the answer is not my country and a lot of people used motorcycle.

✓ I think bikes aren't very popular in my country, and a lot of people use motorcycles.

motorcycle 是可数名词;a lot of people 指许多人,因此泛指多辆摩托车时应使用复数 motorcycles。可数名词在表示多个事物时通常需要加 -s 或 -es。

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