Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答内容切题，也补充了自行车是奶奶送的生日礼物这一具体细节。注意过去时态：谈童年经历应说“had”，而不是“do have”；“I pretty like it”不自然，可改为“I really liked it”或“I was really fond of it”。建议删掉口头填充词“uh”，并用一句话说明喜欢它的原因，让回答更完整。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was little. It was a birthday present from my grandma, and I really loved it because I could ride it around the neighborhood with my friends.

제안: 你通过对比过去和现在回答了问题，也给出了电动自行车更受欢迎的原因。语法上，“If it's ten years ago”可改为“Ten years ago”；“more faster”重复比较级，应改为“faster”。建议把“E bike”写作“e-bikes”，并说明传统自行车为何不再那么普遍，或举一个具体场景来支持观点。

예시: Bikes used to be very popular in my country, but I think e-bikes are more common now. They’re faster and more convenient, especially for people commuting to work. Traditional bikes are still popular for exercise, though.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was little.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was little.

句子描述的是童年时的情况，时间发生在过去，因此助动词 do 应改为过去式 did。建议根据明确的过去时间表达（如 when I was little）统一使用过去时。

× I pretty like it.

✓ I really like it.

pretty 通常不能像 really 这样自然地直接修饰动词 like。表达“我很喜欢它”时，可以用 really 修饰 like。

× If it's ten years ago I would say yes, but now not anymore.

✓ If you had asked me ten years ago, I would have said yes, but not anymore.

ten years ago 指过去，而这里表达的是对过去情况的假设。条件部分应使用过去完成时 had asked，主句应使用 would have said。建议描述过去未发生的假设时使用“if + 过去完成时，would have + 过去分词”的结构。

× I guess because the E bike is more popular than the traditional one since it's more faster and way more convenient.

✓ I guess it's because the e-bike is more popular than the traditional one, since it's faster and way more convenient.

faster 本身已经是 fast 的比较级，不能再加 more。应说 faster，而不是 more faster。比较级通常选择在形容词后加 -er，或在形容词前加 more，不能同时使用两种形式。