Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答切题，也补充了骑车地点和感受，但“snow ride bike”和“wave it”表达不准确，建议分别改为你想表达的自行车类型，以及“learned to ride it”。可以再补充一个具体细节，例如谁教你骑车或你常去哪里骑。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bike, and I learned to ride it around my neighborhood with my father. I really enjoyed exploring the nearby streets on it.

제안: 回答直接，理由也清楚，并使用了例子。不过，“avoid trafficking”不符合这里的意思；可以说“avoid traffic”或“avoid traffic jams”。另外，建议把“锻炼身体”与避开拥堵之间的关系表达得更自然，例如说明骑车通勤既方便又能保持健康。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re affordable and environmentally friendly. For example, many people in cities ride them to work to avoid traffic jams. It’s also a convenient way to get some exercise.