Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接，但把“bike”说成了“bag”，导致关键信息错误；后文也应使用“ride a bike”。注意过去时：用“when I was five”和“my grandpa used to take me”，不要说“always take me”。“As far as I can remember”后不需要再加“that”。可以补充一个具体回忆，让回答更自然、连贯。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was a child. When I was about five, my grandpa used to take me to the park, where I would ride it with my friends.

제안: 需要围绕“自行车是否受欢迎”作答，而不是转而谈“公园是否受欢迎”。注意区分“bikes”和“parks”，并使用“ride bikes”表达“骑自行车”。解释原因时可以提到通勤者和学生骑车的情况；避免“always right back”这类不自然表达，并尽量减少填充词。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work because they are affordable and convenient, especially in busy cities. Students also use bikes to get to school.

× As far as I can remember that when I was 5 years old, my grandpa always take me to the park to ride a bag with my friends.

✓ As far as I can remember, when I was 5 years old, my grandpa always took me to the park to ride a bag with my friends.

“As far as I can remember”后面可以直接接从句，不需要再加“that”。这里的“when”已经引导时间从句，因此应删除“that”。另外，句中的“take”也需要改为过去式“took”；“bag”是否应为“bike”属于用词问题，不在指定的语法问题类型范围内，因此不作修改。

× As far as I can remember that when I was 5 years old, my grandpa always take me to the park to ride a bag with my friends.

✓ As far as I can remember, when I was 5 years old, my grandpa always took me to the park to ride a bag with my friends.

这句话描述的是“我五岁时”发生的过去习惯，因此“take”应使用过去式“took”。讲述过去发生的事情或过去的习惯时，要使用一般过去时。