Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and use the past simple: say “I didn’t have a bike” rather than “I was not having a bike.” Add “a” before “child,” and use a clear phrase such as “when I was in primary school.” Since you are describing the past, say “I got a bicycle” rather than “I have got bicycle.”

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was very young. However, I got a bicycle when I was in primary school, and I enjoyed riding it around my neighbourhood.

제안: Give a clear answer first, then explain how people use bikes. Avoid fillers and repeated words, and use “bikes” or “a bike” consistently. Replace “for show off kind of things” with a more natural expression, such as “to show off,” or explain the specific reason people use them. Clarify what you mean by “we live in the…” if it is relevant.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to commute to work or school because they are convenient. Some people also buy stylish bikes to show off or express their personal style.

× No, I was not having a bike when I was child, but when I was in standard I have got bicycle.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child, but when I was in standard, I got a bicycle.

The question asks about a past situation, so use the simple past form did not have rather than was not having. Use got rather than have got to keep the second verb in the past tense as well.

× No, I was not having a bike when I was child, but when I was in standard I have got bicycle.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child, but when I was in standard, I got a bicycle.

Child and bicycle are singular countable nouns, so they need an article here. Use a before child and bicycle.

× Yes, I think bikes are more popular in our country. Like we live in the uh II, so M mainly people use bike for the for uh, going to offices, for schools and for for show off kind of things.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are more popular in our country. Like we live in the uh II, so M mainly people use bikes for the for uh, going to offices, for schools and for for show off kind of things.

Bike is a singular countable noun, but the sentence refers to bikes in general. Use the plural form bikes when speaking about them generally.

× Yes, I think bikes are more popular in our country. Like we live in the uh II, so M mainly people use bike for the for uh, going to offices, for schools and for for show off kind of things.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are more popular in our country. Like we live in the uh II, so M mainly people use bikes for the for uh, going to offices, for schools and for for showing off kind of things.

When for is followed by a verb to describe an activity, use the -ing form. Change show off to showing off.