Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答开头直接说有自行车，但你说的是“bag”，这会让考官不清楚你是否答错了题；注意检查关键词，应该使用“bike”或“bicycle”。“it was very fun and convenient to have it”表达重复且不够自然，可以改为“it was fun and convenient”。建议补充一个具体细节，例如骑车去哪里或和朋友做什么。整体控制在两三句即可。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was about eight or nine. I used to ride it around my neighbourhood and play with my friends. It was a fun and convenient way to get around.

제안: 回答切题，但“bikes”是复数，后面应使用“they”，而不是“it”。“It is popular for so many years”时态和表达不自然，可改为“Bikes have been popular for many years”。另外，“we all like”缺少宾语，应说“we all like them”。可以补充一个具体原因，例如骑车方便、经济或有助于锻炼身体。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They have been popular for years because they’re an affordable and convenient way to get around. People of all ages, from children to young adults, use them.

× Yes, it is very popular.

✓ Yes, they are very popular.

这里的“it”是单数代词，但它指代前文复数的“bikes”，因此应使用复数代词“they”。主语改为“they”后，谓语也应使用“are”。

× It is popular for so many years, like no matter children or young adults, we all like.

✓ They have been popular for many years. No matter whether people are children or young adults, we all like them.

“for many years”表示从过去持续到现在的时间段，通常应使用现在完成时，因此应将“is popular”改为“have been popular”。另外，“bikes”是复数，应使用“They”。

× It is popular for so many years, like no matter children or young adults, we all like.

✓ They have been popular for many years. No matter whether people are children or young adults, we all like them.

“no matter”后面需要接合适的疑问词或“whether”引导的结构；原句中的“no matter children or young adults”结构不完整。此外，“like”在这里需要宾语来说明喜欢什么，因此补上“them”。