Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答没有清楚表达“小时候是否有自行车”，后半句也难以理解。先直接回答“Yes”或“No”，再补充一个具体细节，例如你几岁时有自行车、骑车的感受或骑车的地点。尽量避免停顿和不完整的句子。

예시: Yes, I had a small bike when I was about six years old. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: 注意听清题目中的“bikes”，不要误听成“banks”。先明确回答自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎，再用一两个具体原因展开。可以提到骑行环境、交通状况或人们通常什么时候骑车；同时使用完整句子，例如“there aren't many safe places to ride”。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. However, there aren't many safe places to ride in some areas, so people often go cycling at weekends.

× I think uh. Give me back my child at six years old.

✓ I think, uh, I had a bike when I was six years old.

【过去时问题】回答的是童年时的经历，应使用过去时。这里用 “had” 和 “was” 表示过去。原句中的 “Give me back my child” 无法清楚表达这层意思；以上改法按题目语境表达“我六岁时有一辆自行车”。

× if banks is popular in my country

✓ whether bikes are popular in my country

【主谓一致问题】“bikes” 是复数主语，因此应搭配 “are”，不能搭配 “is”。这里将 “banks” 按题目语境改为 “bikes”；这是词语选择问题，不是本条指出的语法错误。

× my country, no have a good place read back

✓ my country doesn't have a good place to ride bikes

【第三人称单数问题】“my country” 是第三人称单数，否定句应使用 “doesn't have”，不能直接说 “no have”。“place” 后用 “to ride bikes” 补全表达。

× umm and uh, no free time read back. Just uh, at the weekend we will uh.

✓ We don't have free time to ride bikes, so we only ride them at the weekend.

【句子结构问题】“no free time read back” 缺少完整的主语和谓语；“at the weekend we will” 也没有接上主要动词，句子不完整。可以说 “We don't have free time to ride bikes”，并用完整句子表达周末才骑车。题目询问一般情况，因此这里用一般现在时更合适。