Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

연습Part12026-11-03 15:33:54

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Part 1

시험관

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

수험생

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

시험관

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

수험생

Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. Nowadays more and more people used to ride a bike to go to school or go to work rather than take a taxi or just drive their own car. I think it's good.

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총점

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

점수: 55.0

제안: 回答直接切题,但只是重复了题目,没有提供具体信息。可以补充一两个细节,例如自行车的颜色、骑车的地点,或你小时候是否经常骑车,让回答更自然、更充实。

예시: Yes, I did. It was a small blue bike, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

점수: 62.0

제안: 你给出了明确观点,也提到了通勤这一具体用途,但有语法和表达问题:“more and more people used to ride”应改为“more and more people are choosing to ride”或“more and more people ride”。此外,“I think it's good”比较笼统,可以说明骑车的好处,并使用连接词让观点更连贯。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in crowded cities. More and more people ride them to work or school because they’re affordable and help people avoid traffic. I think they’re also a healthier and more environmentally friendly option.

문법

Present tense issue

× Nowadays more and more people used to ride a bike to go to school or go to work rather than take a taxi or just drive their own car.

✓ Nowadays, more and more people ride a bike to go to school or go to work rather than take a taxi or just drive their own car.

问题类型 ID:6。 “Nowadays”表示现在的情况,而“used to ride”表示过去常有、现在已不再发生的习惯,两者时态含义不一致。描述现在普遍发生的情况应使用一般现在时“ride”。

중요 어휘

Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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