Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

연습Part12026-11-03 15:29:42

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Part 1

시험관

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

수험생

Yes, I have.

시험관

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

수험생

Yes, of course. I think biking is very, very popular in my country because people like to get in more healthy sport and people want to get more healthy buddies so people always like to do bike or some running stuff.

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총점

총점: 5.0유창성과 일관성: 5.0발음: 5.0문법: 5.0어휘: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

점수: 55.0

제안: 回答时要使用与过去时态一致的简短回答:“Yes, I did.” 还可以补充一两句具体信息,例如自行车的颜色、骑车的地点,或你小时候骑车的感受,让回答更完整自然。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

점수: 42.0

제안: 先直接回答问题,再用一两个具体理由展开即可。避免重复使用“very”和“people”,并将“do bike”改为“ride bikes”;“healthy buddies”不符合此处语境,可以说“stay healthy”或“get exercise”。还可以补充骑车的常见场景,让内容更具体。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or use them for exercise because cycling is an easy way to stay healthy. You can also see lots of people cycling in parks at weekends.

문법

5: Past tense issue(过去时态问题)

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题问的是“Did you have...?”,使用一般过去时。回答时要用助动词 did 呼应问句,不能用现在完成时助动词 have。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× I think biking is very, very popular in my country because people like to get in more healthy sport and people want to get more healthy buddies so people always like to do bike or some running stuff.

✓ I think biking is very popular in my country because people like to take part in healthier sports and want to stay healthy, so they often go biking or running.

“get in more healthy sport”中的介词搭配不正确,而且 sport 在这里应使用复数。可以改为“take part in healthier sports”(参加更健康的运动)。此外,修改后的句子使用“go biking or running”来表达进行骑车或跑步活动。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× I think biking is very, very popular in my country because people like to get in more healthy sport and people want to get more healthy buddies so people always like to do bike or some running stuff.

✓ I think biking is very popular in my country because people like to take part in healthier sports and want to stay healthy, so they often go biking or running.

“do bike”不是正确的英语表达。表达“骑车”时,可以说“ride a bike”或“go biking”;表达跑步活动时,可以说“go running”。建议使用“go biking or running”,并适当避免反复使用 people,使句子结构更自然。

중요 어휘

Healthy— Well; Health-giving
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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