Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答没有直接说明小时候是否有自行车，而且内容太短。先明确回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，再补充一个具体细节，例如什么时候骑、在哪里骑，或为什么没有自行车。

예시: Yes, I did. I got a small blue bike when I was about six, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: 目前的回答与自行车是否受欢迎这个问题无关，表达也不清楚。请先直接表明观点，再说明自行车受欢迎或不受欢迎的原因，并补充一个具体例子，例如通勤、健身或城市交通情况。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them for exercise or to travel short distances, especially in areas with heavy traffic.

× This song for Facebook is all popular.

✓ This song for Facebook is very popular.

这里用“all”修饰形容词“popular”不自然。表达“非常受欢迎”时，应使用副词“very”修饰形容词，例如“very popular”。句子内容与考官的问题不相关，但这属于内容问题，不在本次语法问题类型范围内，因此未作修改。