Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then give one clear reason. Use “a bike” rather than “any bike” in this affirmative-style statement, and say “I was afraid of riding a bike,” not “I was feared of riding a bike.” Avoid repeating “when I was a child/kid” and reduce fillers such as “umm.”

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because I was afraid of riding one. My parents didn’t buy me one, either.

제안: Start with a complete direct answer, such as “I definitely think bikes are popular.” Use “popular” rather than “famous” for something widely used, and use plural nouns consistently (“teenagers,” “bikes”). Add one specific supporting detail and remove repeated fillers.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, especially among teenagers. They’re a convenient way to travel short distances, such as to school or a nearby market.

× I was feared of riding a bike.

✓ I was afraid of riding a bike.

Feared is not the correct adjective in this expression. Use afraid of + a noun or an -ing form to describe feeling fear. Alternatively, you could say, I feared riding a bike.

× I definitely bikes are really famous in my country.

✓ I definitely think bikes are really famous in my country.

The original sentence is missing a main verb that connects the speaker's certainty to the clause about bikes. Add think after definitely to make the sentence complete.

× People use bike to go to nearby places, for example schools or markets.

✓ People use bikes to go to nearby places, for example, schools or markets.

Bike is a singular countable noun and cannot be used by itself in this sentence. Use the plural bikes when referring to bikes in general.