Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly, then briefly explain what happened and how it affected you. Use the past simple for the accident and a natural phrase such as “I never rode a bike again” to describe what happened afterward. Avoid repeating or correcting yourself at the end, and say “a busy street” rather than “a busy St.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, although it was a little too big for me. Once, I lost control on a busy street and nearly hit a car, but I managed to stop in time. After that frightening experience, I never rode a bike again.

제안: Give a direct but less absolute answer, then explain how the weather affects cycling. Use the natural expression “the weather is usually cold, especially in winter” instead of “there is usually cold and winter.” Add a specific detail, such as who tends to cycle or why people choose other transport.

예시: Bikes are not very popular in my country, although some couriers use them for work. I think the main reason is the weather, because it is cold for much of the year, especially in winter. As a result, many people prefer to travel by car or public transport.

× After this situation and experience, I never ride before.

✓ After that experience, I never rode a bike again.

The speaker is describing what happened after a past event, so the past-tense form rode is needed instead of ride. Use again to express that the speaker did not ride thereafter.

× I think it is because of weather.

✓ I think it is because of the weather.

The sentence refers to the weather conditions in the speaker's country, so the definite article the is appropriate before weather.

× There is usually cold and winter in my country.

✓ It is usually cold in my country in winter.

There is is used to say that something exists, but cold describes the weather rather than an existing thing. Use it is to describe the weather, and in winter to refer to the season.