Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答问题，再按时间顺序补充细节。注意使用正确的过去时，例如“begged”和“didn’t have”；避免重复提到“begged them for a long time”，并将“Finally”融入完整句子。建议把“before my friends”改为“all my friends had bikes”。

예시: Yes, I did. I really wanted a bike when I was a child, but all my friends had one and I didn’t. After I begged my parents for a while, they finally bought me a bike for my birthday.

제안: 回答时要围绕自行车展开，并使用准确词汇；这里应使用“bikes”或“bicycles”，而不是“banks”或“bags”。可以先说明自行车很受欢迎，再举共享单车为例，并解释它方便的原因。注意用“ride”而不是“write”，同时避免以未完成的“you can put”结尾。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially shared bikes in big cities. People can rent one using a phone app, which is convenient for short journeys. It’s also a good option for people who don’t own a bike.

× I beg my parents for a long time.

✓ I begged my parents for a long time.

这段话讲的是童年时发生的事情，因此要用过去时。beg 的过去式是 begged。

× That bike is, you know, I beg my parents for a long time.

✓ You know, I begged my parents for a bike for a long time.

原句把“That bike is”和“I beg...”两个结构不完整地接在一起，句子结构不通顺。可以删去未完成的“That bike is”，并用完整句表达“我求父母给我买自行车”。

× They all have bags, but only me don't have bags.

✓ They all had bags, but I didn't have any.

句子描述过去的情况，所以 have 要改为 had，don't 要改为 didn't。

× Only me don't have bags.

✓ I was the only one who didn't have any.

me 是宾格，不能在这里充当主语；应使用主格 I。也可以用 the only one who 来表达“唯一没有的人”。

× You don't have to own a bag, you just share the bags with all the people whenever you go and you can put.

✓ You don't have to own a bag; you can share bags with other people whenever you go somewhere.

原句末尾的“you can put”没有宾语，意思没有表达完整；而且前后两个完整句子只用逗号连接，结构不够规范。应删去未完成的部分，并用分号或句号分开完整句子。